Sallo Tuain

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dark_jedi_knight_by_exciteart-d374pce.jpgNAME: Sallo Tuain

FACTION: Sith imperium
RANK: Acolyte
SPECIES: Human(Corellian)
AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6 foot
WEIGHT: 156 pounds
EYES: Green
HAIR: Dark Brown
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Due to his light frame he is generally weaker than most.
DEXTERITY: He is light in his feet, andab excellent climber.
CONSTITUTION: He can is weak but has a slightly bigger constitution, due to living on the streets of Tattoine as a orphan.
INTELLIGENCE: He is highly intelligent. He able to go to school because his parents already paid for his education, but the dark jedi made a local hutt force him to work at a cantina.
WISDOM: He doesent really care what's right or wrong but has enough common sense to know what he is doing.
CHARISMA: He is handsome and chooses his words carefully.

FORCE POWERS: Since he is young and inexperience he knows very little very simple force powers and the like.

SKILLS: He is light on his feet and can sneak by enemies and sneak up on them with ease.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Shi-cho The simplist of forms.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Sallo is proficient with stealth and speed he is able to cut down his foes before they can react. He is also a sufficient climber. Due to his light stature he isn't very strong but strong enough to swing a lightsaber.

GEAR:
He carries a simple stealth field generator, those commonly used by bothen spies. He carries a Red lightsaber

SHIP: Fallen Star. A small freighter, that is fast but not much on terms of weapons.

DROIDS: T9-K0 A astromech droid that does repairs on the ship.

PETS: None

PERSONALITY: Sallo Tuain is a 'finish what you start kind of guy' kind of guy. Always Straight to the point, eager to get things done. This comes from him working at a rough cantina and known good people that had too many loose ends. Like his parents.
He is a jokster and sarcastic. He was basically the entertainment at the cantina and he got a bonus if the hutt is fond of a certain joke. He does what he pleases because when he found out he could use the force it went to his head.

BIOGRAPHY: He was born on Tattoine and was sent to the streets when he was an infant. The cause of this is because his parents owed a large sum of credits to a local hutt. The hutt hired bounty hunters to kill Sallo's parents, but they did not know there was a child and never found one. Sallo was hidden by his parents before their demise. Later a Dark Jedi sensed a force sensitive while he was on a mission at Tattoine. He investigated and found Sallos house with his parents. Now this Dark Jedi already had an apprentice and couldn't
take in a new apprentice, due to Darths Bane rule of Two. So he decided he would help this child from the shawdows and influence him to the dark side. This Dark Jedi name is not known nor his apprentice.

When Sallo was old enough he did some work at the cantina as a bartender. One day he was working his night shift then a loud bang echoed across the room and blood was everywhere. One of his patrons got a little trigger happy after losing at pazzak. So Sallon did what he always had to do in these situations. Kill the dirty Rodian with his hold up blaster. He sighed and went to clean up the bodies. But right as he went to clean the, Rodians friends entered and met Sallo with blaster fire. Their was too many of them, Sallo rushed out the back door. Now these Rodians are part of the worst and biggest gang of Tattoine and he just killed the leader. He had to leave the planet, so he went to the docks to steal a ship. Right as he entered a controlled explosion blow all ships but one, The Fallen Star. It was the only one so he hoped on board and it already had the ignition codes! He left the planet not knowing where to go. He found a holocron, lightsaber and ultility droid, and 1000 credits on board. The holocron told Sallo how he(theDark Jedi) helped Sallo in the darkness. He said it was time for him to train on Korriban and how he staged the incident at the cantina and how he blow up all the ships but one. Sallo believed this and went to Korriban because, well, he had no where else to go.

KILLS: None

BOUNTIES COLLECTED: None

DUELING RING MATCHES: None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: None

ROLE-PLAYS: None.
 
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Kiro

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Hi. I'm Kiro, the Second-in-Command of the Sith Imperium.

I'd like to see this character's personality greatly expanded. I have zero idea of what he's like from the little amount of information you've given me here. What makes him angry? What is his ambitions? Why does he make jokes? Why does he play pranks? What is he scared of? Why is he so devoted to 'getting the job done' and such? What motivates him?

Also, I'd like you to change his stats. Numerical stats like 9/10 makes absolutely zero sense to me. Does this mean he's Stephen Hawking or that he's just got a college degree? Write the extent of his intellect, rather than putting it into a senseless numerical value.

Make the changes I've highlighted above, and I'll reconsider approving him.
 

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Alright, looks good to me.
 
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