Sallar Maraar

[shinobi_no_mono]

Sallar Maraar​

AGE
► 19
SPECIES
► Mirialan
HEIGHT
► 1.83 metres
EYE COLOR
► green
HAIR COLOR
► Brown
HOMEWORLD
► Mirial
GENDER
► Male
FACTION
► Jedi Order
RANK
► Jedi Consular
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes
Age
► 19

Appearance
A tall skinny 18 year old who keeps his cloth clean all the time. He is charismatic and friendly, or at least appears that way.

Biography
Born during the midst of the hundred year darkness I learned about poverty, hunger and frustration, by looking outside of his window. Confined within my luxurious home I was mostly unaffected by the war outside, to the point where the terms Jedi and Exile meant nothing to me, and the only soldiers I ever saw where little figurines, stored perfectly in my shelf. But as I grew older, my delusion narrowed. I listend to the news, I listened to my parents, and I saw the poor outside our house, the beggars and the sick. The war had come to our planet my father would say when I asked about the shots in the distance, and i was terrified of fear, unknowing about the real horror of war, but that would change.

I remember the night in wich my father, a senator, brought the guest with him. A general and a Jedi knight, they fight for peace he told me in the morning. My mother told us about all those rules we'd have to oblige when this general came over, i did not really listen, I was busy playing with my new toys. I remember it well, it was the night after my seventh birthday, and it was my last birthday at home. I remember the moment: We were all sitting on the table, the adults were chatting. I and my bigger sister Sarres were quarreling over the last berry, and i let it fly towards me. It was completly normal for me to do such things, I never thought it was special. Granted, the others in my family couldn't do it, but it was so normal to me. I remember the silence after my action. It was strange, everyone looked at me and I knew I had done nothing wrong, or so I thought. I remember that the Jedi and my father where talking and the next morning I went with him, he had convinced my parents that it would be the best for all of us. The next one to see my potential might be less generous.
I did not know what awaited my, but at least I did not have to face it alone. Before even reaching Jeddah my master picked up a force sensitive girl and we would become good friends. We used to spend all our free time together, but as my training went on I started to travel a lot and saw her less, and once she got her master they trained everywhere but on Jeddha. And when I became a Knight she still was an apprentice, but she will become a knight soon. She already killed her first Exile not too long ago...

Skills
When in war one is to keep his weapons sharp, and so he keeps a sharp intellect and a hidden saber at the ready, but a sharp tongue can get you in trouble. He is not only skilled with his Sword, mastering Makashi and being very adept with his new fighting style Djem So, but quite the charming talker. Some would call him a talker, but he merely bends the truth.

Relationships
or people that mean something to him:
His master Kendro Odavu: They spent much time together, and though they had a rough start they learned to accept each other
A Jedi Padawan named Jaina Orsi, a good friend through all his childhood in the temple, who will turn into a Jedi soon

Possesions

• YG-1098 light freighter: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/yg-1098-light-freighter.78859/
• 3N-Series Astromech Droid: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/3n-series-astromech-droid.77568/
• D-Series Pilot Droid: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/d-series-pilot-droid.78144/
• PB-Series Protocal Droid: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/pb-series-protocol-droid.76759/
• A blue lightsaber
• HB-04 Blaster Pistol: http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/hb-04-pocket-gun-blaster-pistol.78991/

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[Wit]

Who exactly is his father? And it's not very Jedi like to ask for a son as payment for helping squash an uprising, Jedi might be broken but I doubt they're that broken.

 

[shinobi_no_mono]

His father was a politician, and I believe that my Bio is easily misunderstood in some regards. The uprising was supported by Exiles, but the Jedi was supposed to leave for an other battlefield. So my father tried to make him stay and help, and agreed to give me into the hands of the Jedi for their help. It is not uncommon for the Jedi to just take children into their custody, even if the oarents are not fully devoted to do it. (It can even be seen in the clone wars). I was not the sole payment, but I was a part of it, since the Jedi feared I might get into the wrong hands. Exiles do not ask, but the Jedi did

 

[Wit]

Might wanna clear that up then, character profiles are meant to be clear and concise. And Jedi might take children, but they wouldn't tell someone that we won't help you unless you give us your child. They're not the Rumpelstiltskins of the galaxy. And what you have right now gives that impression, that he was given to the Jedi as payment for their aid.

 

[shinobi_no_mono]

I in fact believe that a Jedi consular would have taken some kind of payment and that was just their agreement in the end

But I will change it

 

[Logan]

You make note of a friend who is a padawan - padawans are not a thing anymore. She would likely be a Knight already if she were over the age of 13-14. So you'll want to straighten that out.

Outside of that the profile looks alright. (tip: a jedi would never demand a child as payment for a service, so it's good you got rid of that part lol)

Approved!!