Salin

[krano drall]

Salin Marrak

AGE

► 22

SPECIES

► Human

HEIGHT

► 6 foot 2

WEIGHT

► 109

EYE COLOR

► Green

HAIR COLOR

► Brown

HOMEWORLD

► Hoth

GENDER

► Male

FACTION

► Sith

RANK

► Sorcerer

FORCE SENSITIVITY

► Aware/Trained

Appearance- He is tall but skinny. He wears a black robe covering his entire body other then his face and hands. He wears black gloves with long black nails attached. He can use them to cut relatively deep by they are not poison. His mask is steel with 4 yellow lines running through it. He has brown hair and green eyes but since he only removes his armor when he is alone almost no one knows this. His light saber is made of some kind of black wood. It is slim and straight. He walks with long flowing steps.

His mask can also change his voice but his favorite is a high pitch jester like voice.


Biography- He was born on hoth in a imperial colony and when he was tested for force sensitivity he scored quite high. The imperials took him from his home and sent him to korraban at the ripe age of 3. As he developed in Korraban he learned much in the ways of the force but he was never the best dullest in his class. Although he had learned how use many dark side powers he always held back as deep inside he was a good person and feared the dark side and what it would do to him. He stayed in the middle of the pact until he was 15 years old and his life was about to change. He meet a girl called Samantha she like him was afraid of the dark side and its corruption. For one year they were best friends and in love with each other. Except all good things must come to a end and one fateful day it did. The instructors had noticed Salin's prowess with the force but also noticed his relationship with Samantha. They had a little experiment in mind and set it in motion. Salin was in his bunk when two Sith soldiers walked in and knocked him out with there blasters. Salin awoke in a dark tomb with only three things with him, a pice of black wood, a odd purple crystal. What am I going to do with all this Salin thought. He then felt the purple crystal 'calling' to him. He picked it up and fell into a comma. No one knows what happend in side his head then not even the instructors but a few weeks later when they reopened the tomb they found him holding a light saber made of black wood singing "Dark dark with only this bark bark time to make a light to light up the night". After that Salin was much more willing to take up the dark side arts and did not even wonder why Samantha was missing. He surpassed everyone in his group and made the rank of apprentice shortly after. On his first day of being a apprentice the instructors called him into there offices and in front of them was Samantha. They order Salin to kill her. He activated his saber but he hesitated as the last shard of humanity fought back... and was killed just as Salin cut Samantha down. After that he spent a full 6 years in the tombs uncovering dark side knowledge and foraging his mask. It means a great deal to him but no one knows why. After his 6 year journey into the tombs he challenged a sith sorcerer to a duel for his title. The sith sorcerer only lasted 28 seconds before being turned into a pile of ash. Now Salin walks the galaxy with a new title the Jester of Death.



Personality- He talks in riddles and rhymes but is silent while he fights. He harbors a hate of all life and greatly enjoys killing. When he sees a Jedi he will sing a little song that goes "Jedi Jedi Jedi. Stick a needle in my eye. Jedi Jedi Jedi COME TO DIE". He never takes his helmet off when other people are around. Even though he acts like a fool he is extremely intelligent.



Skills-

Light saber combat: 5/10

Dark side powers 9.5/10

Intelligence 8/10

Charisma 3/10

@Malon

 

[Dark child]

My advice to all new members is:
Create a character that interests you and then RP as that character for a bit before deciding to make another PC.
This allows you to get a feel for The Story and will also give you new insight on what kind of characters you want to fill your three character slots with.
You may find that your original ideas for that character have changed, and that you want to try something else entirely, or discover a faction or species which you did not know about that would make for a more interesting character than your original ideas.

To me, it seems that Salin has very similar qualities to your Indie, Marin. After playing both of them I think you'll find that there are subtle differences here and there, but overall they are similar people. Just something to keep in mind. I'll let the Sith AFLs discuss the character background.
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[Malon]

I concur with @Dark child

Only start creating more characters once you've gotten comfortable playing the one's you've already made—especially two as similar as this one and your first one.

Additionally, while I hate to nitpick, it might be in your interest to run this through a spellchecker. Some of your words and sentences are misspelled or incorrectly structured, and it makes the profile difficult to read.

 

[krano drall]

Ok sounds good I'll just run this through a spell check then table it for a bit :)

I concur with @Dark child

Only start creating more characters once you've gotten comfortable playing the one's you've already made—especially two as similar as this one and your first one.

Additionally, while I hate to nitpick, it might be in your interest to run this through a spellchecker. Some of your words and sentences are misspelled or incorrectly structured, and it makes the profile difficult to read.