Saerina Avrikana- Padawan

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(I made this artwork myself. Anyone who wants to use this must obtain permission from me first. I will report anyone who uses this without asking me.)

General Info
NAME: Saerina Avrikana (pronounced si-REEN-a ay-vree-KAHN-a)
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 15
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 5'1"
WEIGHT: 100 lbs. She has a slender and flexible body frame and isn't particularly curvy.
EYES: Grayish-blue
HAIR: Light brown, shows hints of gold and red. It's very long, somewhat wavy and tangles easily, so she would probably wear it in a braid most of the time. She would wear it down only in cases such as a ceremony or having her portrait drawn ;) Also, the beads in her Padawan braid are ones that she's made based on the glassmaking techniques from her home planet, Aurea.
SKIN: Fair, burns easily
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None yet
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

Stats
STRENGTH: 3/10- Being a small, inexperienced human girl, physical strength is not one of her assets.
DEXTERITY: 8/10- Above average
CONSTITUTION: 4/10- she is quite sensitive and unused to pain.
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10- she does fairly well in academics.
WISDOM: 5/10- being young, she doesn't have much experience as of yet.
CHARISMA: 6/10- she is somewhat of an introvert, but can be persuasive when need be.

Skills and experience
FORCE POWERS:
Precognition and other basic Force powers (lifting and throwing things/people, etc.)
SKILLS:
Saerina, having been a Padawan for a few years, knows basic Force powers and one lightsaber form. She also has a little bit of piloting experience, though she has not done a solo flight. Once or twice, she has assisted a Jedi Knight in teaching a group of Jedi Younglings.
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Learning (but not proficient in) Soresu and Makashi
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths: Saerina is patient and benevolent, sensitive to the feelings of others and wanting to help them. She is good at maintaining self-control and works hard at her training. She is good with a lightsaber, at teaching and with children. Saerina is also eager to learn and is very open to advice.
Weaknesses: Saerina is constantly setting high standards for herself- often, they are impossible for her to reach. She struggles with doubts that she is not a good Jedi/not meant to be a Jedi. She is always worrying about what others think of her and is crushed by failure and disapproval. She also has difficulty concentrating on the Force at times.


PERSONALITY:
Saerina is often mistaken to be years younger than she actually is, not just because of her short stature and youthful features
but also because she is softhearted and innocent, untainted by traumatic incidents or major battles. She has the tendency to be an introvert, loving to study and practice her native peoples' glassmaking techniques in her spare time. Saerina is very interested in the arts, including fine arts, literature and music. She is the type who would prefer studying to being out fighting, and because of this, usually has a hard time focusing on her Jedi duties. However, she is aware of this and tries to please her superiors. Being a perfectionist, she gets frustrated with herself rather easily and her mistakes, as well as disapproval from others, have a large emotional impact on her.

Saerina often comes off as shy because she is quiet, but this is really just because her mind is active and she often lapses into her own thoughts. She can hold a conversation well as long as she's interested in it. Deep down inside her are leader qualities that she's usually too nervous to let out, afraid of failure or disapproval. She is most comfortable around children, as shown when she has assisted Jedi Knights in training groups of Younglings. People her own age intimidate her most. Also, she is sensitive to others' feelings and longs to be of help to people in need. Her friends see her as quiet comfort, there to support and listen to them, but as reasonably difficult to talk with.

Sometimes she struggles with the idea that she is not really meant to be a Jedi because of her apathy towards Jedi training in general. She works hard at it, always pushing herself to the limit, but consistently gets the feeling that her efforts are not good enough. Saerina is also nervous because she has not been on any major missions or in any major battles.


BIOGRAPHY:
Saerina was born on Aurea, a planet known for its artisans of luxury glass products. Her earliest memories were of watching her father blowing and dyeing the glass, and her parents owned a busy and prestigious shop in the capital of Aurea. Her mother managed the finances and logistics of the shop. They originally wanted her to master the craft someday. When Saerina was 4, she went with her parents to Corellia, which is very close to Aurea, to a trading fair where they would be selling some of their products. A pair of Jedi on a mission found them there and discovered that Saerina was Force sensitive, so they decided to take her with them to become Jedi training. Saerina's parents were actually very excited about this, but Saerina was too little to really understand what was going on.

It took her a while to realize that she was with these Jedi to stay, but since she was still pretty young and well-established with the Jedi, she didn't care too much. At 13, she became a Padawan. She didn't have a Master at that point, but kept herself busy doing classes and group training. Saerina also liked to do independent studies as well. During her spare time in her Jedi training, she researched Aurean glassmaking techniques and practiced some of it herself. Her most exciting experience was when she went to Ilum so she could build her lightsaber. She put all her rarely-used creativity into it, using Aurean glassmaking techniques to make "windows" in her lightsaber that allowed the direct light from the crystals inside to shine out. (Speaking of which, I tried to draw these little "windows" in her lightsaber, but I didn't exactly capture the effect of brilliant light shining out very well. XD)

Saerina began training under her new master Kai Sera recently and is working to improve her Force abilities and learn Makashi and Soresu.

Personal belongings

GEAR:
Lightsaber, comm, Holomap (if this is allowed), small first aid kit. All these fit onto her belt. (I didn't draw pockets on the belt for purely artistic reasons.)
No ship, droids or pets

RP Experience

KILLS:
N/A

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
~Training~
Story- A Morning On the Lake- Completed
Story- Battle of Naboo- Theed Spaceport
Training- Training in the Rain- Completed
Learning the Contention Form
Class- Learning how to Lightsaber
Of Form and Grace
~Missions~
Let's Talk About Murder
Lost In Transit

I think that's it for now... Skywalker out!
 
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Looks pretty good! Make sure you check out the Jedi sign-up thread when you're ready to apply if you haven't done that yet. To answer your questions the main Jedi worlds that people RP on are Lamaredd and Naboo, there are others though, but most typically occur on those worlds. You don't need a master but it helps if you get an active one to teach you and go on missions with you. All Jedi start out as Padawans regardless of having a master and can get training by practicing with others and attending classes. For missions check out the Jedi mission posting boards and sign up for what you think you can handle, if the person I'm charge of the mission sign-ups thinks you that you need more training they'll tell you. It is a good idea to do some training though before going out on a mission which you can find/do on the Jedi training board. All of these can be found in the Jedi Faction forum. Double-bladed lightsabers are allowed (idk about holomaps) and the form you're think of is Shii-Cho. I should note that most pepole only track the forms they're trying to get good at and it is assumed that if you know a more advanced form that your Character has had the necessary training in Shii-Cho.
 
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Looks pretty good! Make sure you check out the Jedi sign-up thread when you're ready to apply if you haven't done that yet. To answer your questions the main Jedi worlds that people RP on are Lamaredd and Naboo, there are others though, but most typically occur on those worlds. You don't need a master but it helps if you get an active one to teach you and go on missions with you. All Jedi start out as Padawans regardless of having a master and can get training by practicing with others and attending classes. For missions check out the Jedi mission posting boards and sign up for what you think you can handle, if the person I'm charge of the mission sign-ups thinks you that you need more training they'll tell you. It is a good idea to do some training though before going out on a mission which you can find/do on the Jedi training board. All of these can be found in the Jedi Faction forum. Double-bladed lightsabers are allowed (idk about holomaps) and the form you're think of is Shii-Cho. I should note that most pepole only track the forms they're trying to get good at and it is assumed that if you know a more advanced form that your Character has had the necessary training in Shii-Cho.

Thanks for your help! Yeah, I would still like a master for her though, even if it's not necessary. So could I go to the RP OOC forum to ask about getting her a master, then?
 

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The Sign-up and training request subforum is where you would ask that. If there are any masters that are interested in training a Padawan they'll look there. :)

Good luck with her! I hope her and Kai get to meet in the RP sometime in the future!
 

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Thanks for your help! Yeah, I would still like a master for her though, even if it's not necessary. So could I go to the RP OOC forum to ask about getting her a master, then?

You would actually post here. Just follow that link and you can make a thread requesting a master.

But be sure to sign-up Saerina here before anything else. You'll need to get accepted before you're able to participate in Jedi related threads.

Edit: Ral ninja'd me. But those links are still relevant.

Anywho, she looks like an interesting character. Can't wait to see where you take her!
 

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Good luck with her! I hope her and Kai get to meet in the RP sometime in the future!

Thanks! And yeah, that would be fun! ^.^

Well, I signed her up in that thread. Now I just have to wait to get accepted? Sorry about all the questions. XD All this is so unbelievably organized, and I want to make sure I have to do everything right.
 

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Looks good just one little thing.

You list her constitution at a 9/10. Usually constitution refers to how much your character can take damage. Someone with a 9/10 would probably be a Wookie. A 5'1, 100lb human female probably wouldn't be able to take that well of a hit. I would suggest a 4/10. Of course with training that can always go up.
 

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Looks good just one little thing.

You list her constitution at a 9/10. Usually constitution refers to how much your character can take damage. Someone with a 9/10 would probably be a Wookie. A 5'1, 100lb human female probably wouldn't be able to take that well of a hit. I would suggest a 4/10. Of course with training that can always go up.

OH! XD I thought it meant how healthy the character was. Like if they have any chronic medical issues or something. I will change that...
 

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It can mean that too. Since we don't use damage points or HP how much of a beating your character can take is more abstract. Like if she got beat up how fast could she spring back from that? It's both hardiness and health. So Miz has a point that a skinny girl wouldn't be a 9/10 she can still be very healthy for a girl her age and size.
 

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Yeah. Hmm, that complicates things, because she is pretty healthy. I guess it takes her average time to recover from an injury though? For a girl her age and size. Maybe being a Jedi makes that slightly-above-average, but she's not particularly tough. I don't know. Do you think 5/10 would be okay?
 

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That could work. I personally add a description to the numbers as well to give people an accurate idea of how strong the character is. Check out Fang for an example.

I hope I get to do a thread with you, I've been looking for a Padawan actually and depending on if you're interested and how the characters interact I'd be willing to take her on
 

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That could work. I personally add a description to the numbers as well to give people an accurate idea of how strong the character is. Check out Fang for an example.

I hope I get to do a thread with you, I've been looking for a Padawan actually and depending on if you're interested and how the characters interact I'd be willing to take her on

Awesome, assuming my signup gets accepted, I think I'll take you up on that! Maybe we could put them together in a class first and see how they work out- and if we like it, we can assume you're now my master. :)

I will now edit my signup to put that health thing in better detail...
 
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Personally, I think that your character looks great! However, for a 100 lb. Human girl, her strength score is a bit high. My character is a human male, twice her weight and 6 feet tall, and even he is around average in terms of strength, since he doesn't do a strength based style. With zabraks and wookiees running about, perhas her strength is a 3 or 4, realistically. Of course, that can always increase with training. =) Looking forward to having her interact with Shard on the Jedi threads, if she decides to learn Makashi as her preferred style, let me know! =D
 

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Personally, I think that your character looks great! However, for a 100 lb. Human girl, her strength score is a bit high. My character is a human male, twice her weight and 6 feet tall, and even he is around average in terms of strength, since he doesn't do a strength based style. With zabraks and wookiees running about, perhas her strength is a 3 or 4, realistically. Of course, that can always increase with training. =) Looking forward to having her interact with Shard on the Jedi threads, if she decides to learn Makashi as her preferred style, let me know! =D

Ah, okay. I don't know what the norm is around here, so thanks for the input! :)
 

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Guys, how do I know when my character gets accepted? Will the admin contact me or something?
 

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They will post in the sign up thread who they accepted or what is pending. If it's pending they will want you to fix something. Just don't bug them they hate that, they'll get around to it in due time.
 

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They will post in the sign up thread who they accepted or what is pending. If it's pending they will want you to fix something. Just don't bug them they hate that, they'll get around to it in due time.
Okay, thanks! :)
 

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there have been alot of applications in the last couple days and they post responses in bulk, which means that they have to read the characters for everyone of those applications and reach decisions on all of them before they post whos accepted and who isnt so it could be a bit of time, its a fair work for them (and by them its probably just GABA the jedi FL) to get through especially when piled with their other duties to the site and faction. Just be patient, in all liklyhood you will be accepted, I see nothing here that would cause you to not get accepted.

If you have any other questions about the site, the faction or anything else feel free to VM or PM me
 

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Yeah, I could see that based on all the applications I saw! Thank you, everyone, for your help! I'm really excited to start RPing with you all! :) I think that answers all of my questions.
 

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She's a cutie, Kiyoha and her should be buddies.
 
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