Ruukil Ukachasi

is this a good 1st character?

  • ehh, i'd expect more from you

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Ru the Boatswain

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NAME: Ruukil Ukachasi
FACTION: midnight men
RANK: What rank does your character hold in his/her faction?
SPECIES: Lorridian(human)
AGE: 28
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6feet, 3inches
WEIGHT:178lbs
EYES: Brown changing to Green under certain lights
HAIR: dark brown hair nearly black
SKIN: pale skin
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: a blue dragon tattoo on his right arm.
DOMINATE HAND: ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes, but he has no knowledge of this.

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STRENGTH: has a replacement arm 8/10
DEXTERITY: very nimble and agile. a stealthy person with good reflexes 8.5/10
CONSTITUTION: in fair health but not immune to all disease. he has his immunity shots 7/10
INTELLIGENCE: knows about breaking into places and much of higher and lower technologies 7/10
WISDOM: wisdom is an opinion but he considers himself able to get by ?/10
CHARISMA: his guile requires him to sometimes charm others. 6/10

SKILLS:
specializations:
sniper training.
stealth
close combat knife and hand to hand fighting
minor skills: ship flight, sniping, ,security, droid repair,minor field doctoring, minor demolitions, scouting. long distance runner,

SWORD FORMS:a knife fighting style that allows him to dodge more than strike. there is no real name for the style just a style of his own developed through experience


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
when brute strength and the ability to take the hard hits is in an enemy he is unlikely to prevail. against the slow and weak he will kill.

GEAR:
1;a las-rifle that can be modified to be a sniper, or closer range weapon. the rifle also holds a scope with night and infrared capabilities.
2;His 'strait silver' is a vibroblade made of a 'shiny' metal that he never thought to check for what it truly was. All he knows is that he's never lost it and it has saved his life more than once.
3;Ruukil also has a 'stealth cloak' when not in use it is gray but when in use blends in to the surrounding area.
4;He also possesses a basic kit of items that would allow him to break in to a room of most or any security.
5;he smokes as well and has Iho-sticks in his jacket pocket.
6;He carries small explosives and a small disruptor pistol.
7;carries pleanty of ammunition, 10 rmour piercing rounds, and 5 'hotshot' rounds that deal heavy damage but are extremely loud.
8; also carries a sound and flash suppressor.
9;now has one augmented arm(left)
SHIP:
a small freighter. Was once a transport from planet to planet but now he owns it. for its age it is in good condition.

PETS:
1'moon moth espionage droid'
1'fly eye espionage droid'
1 'scarab assassin droid'
1 '3PO protocol droid'
PERSONALITY:
will be found through RP

HISTORY:
(i wrote this ...its really bad just note that i wrote to the requirements ok? its required no? unless i can build a character in roleplay?it'll be done soon anyway. )

Ruukil was born on Lorrd. He left his home at 16 to join a military group of his people fighting a small war in the air around Yavin. He learned infiltration and gained access to the main battle ship along with his squad in a mission to end the war. Ruukil personally killed their war leader with his 'strait silver', a weapon given to him be a friend. after the kill their team seized the remaining crew and a bloody war was ended.
After The Yavin war he left the group and joined an assassins guild on Bothawui where he learned many skills from Bothan spies. Once wile in Drev'starn he was set upon by four Bothan from his own guild, he was able to kill one initially but the other three were left. wounding two others he was left to duel the last. Holdan was the name of the one he was dueling. An acquaintance at best he was usually kind to Ruukil but he'd seemed different that day. Ruukil quickly killed him by pulling out his disruptor pistol and creating a large gap in his chest.Later it was found that the guild was being 'purified' of all non bothans due to an intelligence leak that was soon found to have been done by a bothan. Ruukil would leave the guild with the remaining non bothan members to go to coruscant to use their intelligence skills for use by politicians and those wishing ill on others... with enough credits of course.
Through these jobs on the planet Ruukil was able to gain ownership of his own ship the 'lucky Myrin' a roomy and comfortable E-class cruiser.alon also came the possession of 4 droids. One of which is f-3PO, a red protocol droid with a sarcastic attitude that he attained as payment from a politician falling under hard times. The rest were purchased from various 'friends' and associates to complete missions.

Ruukil joined the midnight men and became an intelligence specialist. After one specific mission he lost his arm and has gained a new robotic arm to replace it.

KILLS:
nunce


DUELING RING MATCHES:
nunce

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
nunce

ROLE-PLAYS:
my first one on the site
 
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Will

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Good for a nwecomer, the history needs to be a bit longer, and more detailed. And for skills, you can't have 'more...'. Those are my only criticisms. Do them, and you have yourself a good profile!

Welcome by the way! Hope you enjoy your stay!
 

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Very nice, the first character from Lorrd I have seen on this site.
 

Ru the Boatswain

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i have a question.
where is the list of skills? im having trouble with that. i was kind of groggy this morning. oh this is also my first starwars rp. ive never done this before, so any help would be nice! oh also hows this site doing on activity?
 

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i have a question.
where is the list of skills? im having trouble with that. i was kind of groggy this morning. oh this is also my first starwars rp. ive never done this before, so any help would be nice! oh also hows this site doing on activity?

There is no list. You just put down what they're good at.

On this site, there are the few very active members, the nerds who are on daily, of which there are about 10-15, then there are others who come on less often, of which most are, so we're very active.
 

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There is no list. You just put down what they're good at.

On this site, there are the few very active members, the nerds who are on daily, of which there are about 10-15, then there are others who come on less often, of which most are, so we're very active.

Hey so you are calling me and you nerds, thats not very nice, true, but not very nice:p
 

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There is no list. You just put down what they're good at.

On this site, there are the few very active members, the nerds who are on daily, of which there are about 10-15, then there are others who come on less often, of which most are, so we're very active.
You shall burn in the depths of hell for that. I am NOT a nerd. I am a geek.
 

Will

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You shall burn in the depths of hell for that. I am NOT a nerd. I am a geek.

Sorry! i get the terminology mixed up! :test1:

And Ruukil... Iho sticks? are they not the 40k version of cigarettes?
 

Ru the Boatswain

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ok well tell me about it now(other than the story.) and how many jedi are here?
 

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Look at the Jedi Roster for the amount of Jedi and the poll thing is unorthodox but I voted anyway
 

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I've never heard of iho-sticks, but I haven't read every book. I thought deathsticks were the Star Wars equivalent, although more drug/tobacco than just tobacco.
 

Ru the Boatswain

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Iho-sticks are from my first roleplay. This is the same character. and i dont like deathsticks. Iho is from 40k i like it better. Gaunts ghosts good job mrun0riginal- you read some good S**T
 

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Iho-sticks are from my first roleplay. This is the same character. and i dont like deathsticks. Iho is from 40k i like it better. Gaunts ghosts good job mrun0riginal- you read some good S**T

When you say Gaunts Ghosts are you talking about the tanith first and only?
 

Ru the Boatswain

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Yes im on the second book now. beginning the 'alliance' part of it. i need to find the 3rd book soon or i'll go insane once i finish the one now. that or i'll stalk the forum and make 10 files....i have a need for literature and Rp. i play necrons in 40K.
 

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Actually if you're interested in seeing some skills I can maybe help you out. I pull my skills from the SWRP book (d20 Star Wars roleplaying).
 

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I don't have my book with me, but I can look things up later for you. Tell me what your character is, what you want him/her to be able to do, and about how powerful/experienced he is right now. I'll give you some options and let you see what you think. However, please give me 2-3 days to get this together on top of work. :D
 
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