Rufio Lachance

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NAME: Rufio Lachance
FACTION: The Sith
RANK: Moff, Kuat
SPECIES: Umbaran
AGE: 33
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: No

APPEARANCE:
Rufio is very tall with a fairly slender build. He has a very sharp and defined face with concave cheeks and ruthless eyes. His arms and legs both appear very bony and elongated.

ATTRIBUTES:
A shark in the sand, if there's ever been one, a deadly opponent on the offensive and the defensive in a battle of wits and strategy. His brain and powers to persuade and intimate are his greatest assets. He's also ruthlessly cunning, using whatever tricks he can use to defend his point of view and dismantle his opponents. This mannerism has also gained him the ability through persuasion or intimidation to rally many to his cause, as his ability to make himself popular is uncannily exceptional.

Rufio with all of his talent and mastery at strategy and interrogation, isn't one for being on the battlefield, but rather far away, and controlling it. His own physical safety is usually left to his guards and droids to make up for this extreme lack of ability.

PERSONALITY:
Rufio in a word, Is ruthless as he will not stop until his opponents are destroyed, physically on the battlefield or mentally in the interrogation chamber, and will use whatever tricks he can to supplement his already formidable skills. He doesn't care who gets hurt in the process. He knows he's good at what he does, and some small part of him wants to find someone who can truly match him.

BIOGRAPHY:
Rufio began life on Umbara, a dark and dreary world. His youth was typical of his species, although he excelled in literature and social studies, taking a distinct interest in other planets and societies. Originally, he wanted to become an explorer, traveling through the unknown region, but health complications all but ruled that out. Instead, he dedicated himself to the study of other cultures, and took an interest in the combat tactics.

When he became a young man, he began his service, excelling in tactical combat leadership, and graduated near the top of his class. It was difficult entering into the sought after position, but he quickly saw success and recognition for his skills. Rufio was stationed on Kuat early into his service, which was also one of the closest planets under Sith control to his home world of Umbara. During Rufio's service on Kuat he gained much notoriety as a secussful contributing member of the Legion, helping to solve several economic and stregitic defense problems which gained him favor with the low to mid ranking officials of the planet, and has saved the planet a grand amount of money.

After a while Rufio joined the ranks of the Sith and his prowess in tactical ability quickly gained him the much deserved rank of Moff of Kuat, Since then his reign has been memorable, utilizing the planet's resources to expand the wealth of the Empire and, seceretly, a little extra on the side for himself.

SKILLS:
Strategic Combat leadership 9/10
Economic development skills: 9/10
Interrogation 9/10
Information Gathering 8/10
Persuasion 8/10
Intimidation 7/10
Martial Combat: 2/10
Blaster Warfare: 3/10
Computer Stuff: 4/10

GEAR:
Vagabond Armor (Image)
SP-30 Suppressed Blaster Pistol

SHIP:
Icarus-class Yacht

DROIDS:
2X RZX-637 “EndBringer” Guardian Droid
3X IG-XX
4X M-series Utility/Astromech Droid
 
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As you're applying for the position of Moff, you'll have to post [surl=http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/moff-council-sign-ups.68961/]in this thread[/surl] and then your CS will be reviewed.
 

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Just did I needed to get the character out so I could link him in the application:)
Thank you.
 

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You definitely have enough to go ahead and apply, but I like to see you expand more on his Biography. What made him suited to be Moff of Kuat specifically? Did he have special ties there? Was he stationed there and rose to prominence? How much political skill does he have to maneuver the ranks like that? Tactical skill is more likely to get him moved up through the military, so that alone is not a suitable reason to advance to Moffhood of such an important Sith world.

Expand a bit on this more and I think you'll find that you have information to fill up some of the other sections on here that are a sentence or two long—not to mention your character will be more fleshed out.
 

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The gear probably needs to be looked at. Vagabond armor has 3 functions already, and adding in the Jumpers and the Monocle is adding more than what Medium armor is allowed.

See
 

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You definitely have enough to go ahead and apply, but I like to see you expand more on his Biography. What made him suited to be Moff of Kuat specifically? Did he have special ties there? Was he stationed there and rose to prominence? How much political skill does he have to maneuver the ranks like that? Tactical skill is more likely to get him moved up through the military, so that alone is not a suitable reason to advance to Moffhood of such an important Sith world.

Expand a bit on this more and I think you'll find that you have information to fill up some of the other sections on here that are a sentence or two long—not to mention your character will be more fleshed out.

Sweet I will work on this soon. Also should I select a different planet? I just saw that there was no Moff there so thought I'd fill the role.
 

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The gear probably needs to be looked at. Vagabond armor has 3 functions already, and adding in the Jumpers and the Monocle is adding more than what Medium armor is allowed.

See

I think you're right I'll fix that later too.
 

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i took care of the gear, and expanded on his attributes and bio a bit. Are there any other suggestions I can take?
 
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