Rotten to the core!

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NAME: Urgo'Brag

FACTION: The Empire

RANK: Warrior

SPECIES: Twi'lek

SKIN: Pitch black with red tattoos of ancient Sith symbols all over him

AGE: 24

GENDER: Male

HEIGHT: 2 Meters

WEIGHT: 71 Kilograms

EYES: Shining red

CREDITS: 1,000 credits

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A huge scar going over his right eye, but the eye is fine thou.

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Trought his though training he is strong as he can possibly be.

DEXTERITY: He is indeed very agile because of his training.

CONSTITUTION: Very healthy and strong.

INTELLIGENCE: He was going to become an assassing before becoming an warrior and now he is waiting for the aproriate teacher to teach him the ways of commanding an army.

WISDOM: No one is let on the field uneducated with the Sith.

CHARISMA: None whats so freaking ever. He prefers to be feared rather than loved.

FORCE POWERS:
Force lighting
Force push
Do I really have to?

SKILLS:
He knows his way of assasinating and killing with fear and causing propaganda.
He has managed to kill an Jedi Master after all.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Dun Möch

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
He is calm and makes sure that everyone is dead before leaving the room, but his known weakness is attacking Jedis almost unprovoked.
He tends to have a anger problem sometimes.

GEAR:
Urgo usually carries a couple of flame grenades with him, he of course also has his Damind powered ligthsaber with him witch is red as the core of an Krayt Dragons eye.

SHIP:
No

DROIDS:
He has one.
R7-G3 A tactical droid witch gives him information about anything he desires.
(Going to write a long describstion before I actully use R7-G3)

PETS:
No

PERSONALITY:
He is calm and precise, he has to be after all. Causing fear and propaganda is what he he does after all.

BIOGRAPHY:
He has and still is rotten to the core. When he was a child he was killing innocent animals and beating up other kids just for the heck of it.
When the Sith found him they found outh that he was fodce sensitive, so they took him on training.
Urgo was naturally black skinned, very rare for norrmal Twi'lek people. But with the Sith he gained a couple of red tattoos, sumbols of the Sith everywhere on his body.
He has always been evil, as a test for the Sith they told him to attack to his home town with a dozen battle droids.... He refused..... With the droids after all, he demanded to do it by himself.
He has no morale none whats so ever.
Being this 'talented' he quickly became a true Sith warrior and now he does anything the council tolds him to....

His training started at a very young age, going over by many different master until he found out what he wanted to be.
He wanted to be a master of propaganda and thus he commands troops to battle.
He is feared by both, his own troops and his enemies.
He has never been a big fan of going in to battle personally, but if theres a possible Jedi encouter then he is very eager.

He gained his respect by killing a Jedi master and his current master.
He managed to kill the Jedi master by manipulating him to believe his taunts and making him attack so he could counter.
The way he killed his current master was by assasinating

He will do anything to gain more power by any means neccessary, being a Sith almost requierst it.

The way of battle is propaganda, taunting his opponents and making enemy troops run like starteld rats.

He does anything to weaken his opponent, poison taunts horrific envirements sabotage lies and eliminating the chain of command. He also likes taking some thing personally like interrogating.

He will find out what the enemy is affraid of, weakens the victim with hunger lack of sleep torture seeing their families and comrads die and then he unleashes the thig that they are most affraid of and finishes the job with some 'persuasion'.

This man has no morale, no concius. He kills childen and civilians for fun.
Truly he is rotten to the core......

KILLS:
Not yet.

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None

ROLE-PLAYS:
None yet.
 
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Arm514ve

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so um is this done or is it just a WIP cause this is really lack luster. also are you really a warrior cause you need to sign up to get a rank.
 

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Yeah this will need some major work. Its just..short. It needs way more detail in the biography and personality. Plus you forgot eye color, hair color (though Twi'leks don't have hair yu need to state it) and skin color (actually really important if you are a Twi'lek). Plus how did you kill a Jedi Master with Don Moch? Overall this character needs major work.
 

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This is going to be my main character so I will develop it almost all the time.
 

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It needs development now though, there is almost nothing here. Also, you cannot have the Darth title unless your a Sith Lord so take that out.
 
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It needs development now though, there is almost nothing here. Also, you cannot have the Darth title unless your a Sith Lord so take that out.

Which is impossible, as there are no Sith Lords being accepted at the current time.
 

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I promised myself that I would start checking up on profiles here and there. This being my first stop, I suggest you listen to what the other people have already told you. No more Darths for a while unless they make it the right way. (Such as doing missions and etc)
 
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