Rhyadrr Ooorloot

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Rhyadrr Ooorloot
[fancybox4="http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/aliens/images/d/d2/Tarfful_OP.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20090331171906"]FULL NAME: Rhyadrr Ooorloot
AGE: 276
SPECIES: Wookiee

Gender: Male

HEIGHT: 236 cm
WEIGHT: 172 kg

EYE COLOR: Blue
HAIR COLOR: Brown
MARKINGS: None

FACTION: Republic
RANK: Senator of Kashyyyk

Born to a wealthy family on Kashyyyk, the young Rhyadrr always aspired to be a senator for his homeworld. Smart, talented, and a natural born politician the young wookiee quickly rose through the ranks of Kashyyyk's politics and is well on his way to becoming the Senator of Kashyyyk.
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BIOGRAPHY
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Early Life: Born and raised on Kashyyyk the young wookiee is the son of Senk Ooorloot and Rralun Ooorloot. Named after his great-grandfather, a powerful clan leader among the wookiees, Rhyadrr had an easy life, living on a wealthy mansion on one of Kashyyyks enormous trees the wookiee had access to all sorts of commodities from hologames to nanny drois his family's wealth allowed Rhy to acquire a taste for the finer things in life.
Due to the different lifestyle the young wookiee had from the majority of his friends, Rhy grew sort of isolated from his community but that didn't stop him from being a brilliant speaker, even from his early years. His nannydroids and teachers would listen to his powerful speeches on how the Wookies should industrialize if they were to compete with other powers in the galaxy.

Adulthood: Once Rhy came of age, his dream to leave Kashyyyk for the metal jungle that was Coruscant was realized. His dad bought him a state of the art yacht and hired several servants to aid the wookiee and Rhyadrr took off for Coruscant. When he arrived to the planet, his luxurious apartment was ready for him, with several dozen servants, tutors, protocol droids and aides to help him navigate the complicated life and intricate politics of the planet. The current senator for the Wookiee's homeworld, an old friend of the Ooorloot's, began to groom Rhyadrr to be his successor. The young wookiee was to be the older man's assistant. He was to prepare speeches (that were then reviewed by the Senator's seasoned assistant), send out invitations to parties, observe the Senate meetings and take notes, look into the background of every senator the Wookiee's Senator needed to make a deal with and, most important of all, get the coffee for his homeworld's senator.
With the death of the current wookiee senator (under suspicious circumstances), Rhy was the obvious choice for the position.



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PERSONALITY
[fancybox2] Highly ambitious, but kind-hearted, something his predecessor considered a flaw, Rhyadrr wants to get to the top, but he wants to do so in his own terms, and without bribery or scheming. He wants to be at the top because he is the best, and not because his dad payed someone to tell him he's the best, even with all his wealth and power, Rhy is still humble in his abilities as politician. But his wealth has also caused him to be disconnected from the average-Joe and those living close to, or within the poverty line. Rhyadrr doesn't believe violence solves anything, but he isn't afraid to use it when necessary. A firm supporter of the Jedi and of what he calls "A war for the Republic's very survival" the thing Rhy is most ashamed of is not having a Jedi friend/confessor. As a child he always admired the brave knights, fighting darkness wherever it spawned but he never became close with one of these mystical knights.
Rhy's fascination with politics was what led him to leave Kashyyyk and move to Coruscant permanently


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ASSETS
[fancybox4="http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?attachments/nemesis3-png.3340/&temp_hash=8607a3522e9df2c79235fad312b14a63"] A MXV 'Scuttler'-class yacht and a GE3-series protocol droid, a luxurious apartment in one of Coruscant's towers, several serveants and tutors, and an incredible amount of credits. [/fancybox4]
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This character is very much not alive.
 
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Nor'baal

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Hi there!
Further to your PM, this character is looking good so far. My only suggestion is that you go into a bit more depth on his background?

What was he doing in his younger years? What lead him to the senate?
 

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My comments echo Norby's, every profile on the site requires I think a lengthy personality and background section and a description of a character's weaknesses, strengths and the like, in addition to their background. It doesn't have to be particularly detailed or insanely well written just a few statements about their life, background and motivations.
 

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Thank you for all the advice, I'm new to Senator Characters but I did some changes, hopefully it has improved. Please tell me if I'm missing anything :) @Officiant
 
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