Redemption of the Terminator

René

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1. My character, Slade Fett, will realize the roll years of Dark Side use has taken on his body, and begin to see that the direction the Exiles have headed is a dangerous and chaotic one. The two Jedi Kane and Steila Yurel will, after a few altercations with Slade, help him let go of the Dark Side.

2. @One For Sorrow @TenthCodex

3. Ruined Jedi temple on Ossus, Slade's private residence on Onderon, Coruscant, another functional Jedi temple (Jedha?)

4.
  • Thread 1: Slade crashes his ship on Ossus after his hyperdrive fails during a jump. He lands near the destroyed Jedi Temple there, and inspects it as he vaguely remembers training there as a young Jedi. A pair of Jedi, Kane and Steila Yurel, happen to be on a scavenging mission there, looking for intact lightsabers to be reused in the war against the new Sith Empire. Upon feeling Slade's dark aura, they confront him and a duel ensues. He eventually overpowers and defeats them both, at the cost of having to call upon large amounts of Dark Side energy, causing unforseen side effects. He steals their ship to escape the planet.
  • Thread Two: Upon hearing their opponent boast about his superior armour design on Ossus, the Jedi Kane does some digging and connects the fallen Jedi Magnus Grixim to entrepenuer and politician Slade Fett. Disguising himself and his partner Steila as bounty hunters, the Jedi visit Slade to "request" a custom made version of his mass produced Terminator-series armour. Upon both parties confirming who the others are, another confrontation begins. Slade is defeated, still suffering from over exerting himself on Ossus. He flees from his estate in a private shuttle, but not before placing a tracker on the Jedi's ship.
  • Thread 3: Hiding out on Coruscant, Slade tracks down the pair of Jedi again, after his tracking device notifies him that they are on the planet. After a brief scuffle in an abandoned warehouse, Slade breaks and requests help from the Jedi in leaving the Dark Side. This suprises Kane and Steila, but they agree to help and bring him to the Jedi temple on (Jedha?).
  • Thread 4: Slade begins a process of purifying himself, both body and mind, aided by Kane and Steila. One of the Jedi suggests they bring Slade on a mission to rescue some slaves from pirates in space, and he agrees to go. Upon seeing the slaves are all children, he becomes enraged, but restrains himself and kills some pirates only in self defense, and in defense of a few freed slaves. The Jedi congratulate Slade on his progress, but he feels there is more to be done.
  • Thread 5: Slade reflects in his life in meditation as he spars with the other two Jedi. He requests help once again, to purify the corrupted Kyber crystal in one of his lightsabers. [If someone is available to DM a Jedi councilor, this is where that Jedi aids the other two in guiding Slade through the process.] Thanks to their help, the former Sith is able to cleanse his kyber crystal, and decides to rejoin the Jedi Order, after careful reflection and discussion with Kane and Steila. However, he acknowledges that he isn't wont ever be completely redeemed, and so requests a partner/teacher to make sure he doesn't relapse into the Darkness.

5. The end goal of this plot is some heavy character development for all three characters, although primarily it's the redemption and return to the Light of my character Slade Fett.

6. If one is available, someone to DM a Jedi councilor during the final thread to help Slade cleanse his kyber crystal and officially allow him into the order, as well as maybe appoint Kane as the partner/teacher he requests.
 

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Hey there @Lord Kyle !

So this looks like a damn fine plot I'd say - got a minor issue with one thing though- as a level 1 your character would lack the power to "over power" two others level 1s in the first thread. The Dark Side doesn't give a power boost like that otherwise the exiles/sith would always be able to beat Jedi of the same level on power and that's not how it works - just make sure that when you are fighting your agrees upon outcome you keep in mind the rules on levels. Personally I would recommend using the dark side to use an attack the Jedi are unprepared for and that being the reason for victory- anything but straight up over powering them is fine by me :)

Perfectly fine with everything else though! As to councillor being needed... maybe speak to @Malon about potentially using Wyck or an NPC councillor

Other than that though

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