Raxus Pesanka's Dignity To,Succeed

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Raxus...Very overhyped kid...And goofy,but not today,He has been assigned a master..But he knew nothing of this,Master at all,except he was a jedi,He would gaze out the large window,of the highest room in the temple,as purple ribbons covered each metal chair that sat inside the room,His dark green eyes dared not move away from the window,as he crossed,his arms,He felt something coming near,he had no clue what he felt it just seemed something was coming near.
The door that stood 9 feet away from were he stood,make a slit sound,as it shot open,He turned around quickly,almost tripping,to see his New Master!
 
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The boy was honoured indeed. Chosen for training by none other than the Sword Master of the Order himself, Huang Karasu.

The Seven foot tall Sephi seemed to move without a sound, he had his infamous katana belted at the hip.


''Padawan Pesanka. I will be your Master. I will instruct you in the arts of the Jedi. You will become a knight under my tutelage. I leave no room for failure.''

This one was young. He would have to be stern with him. Ill disciplined. He had almost fallen over himself.

''Now then, we shall, of course, start simply. I want your interpretation of the Jedi code, along with the tenants of our order.''

Huang sat down, so he didn't tower over the boy.
 

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He was stunned..as he almost could not control himself,He was so happy,but he held himself together,as he looked up at the very tall man,Who really to him glided into the bright room,As he listened to his words carefully,He sat down in front of his new master,And Recited what he was Ask,
-cough- Okay,Sir..I mean Master..there is no emotion, there is peace.
There is no ignorance, there is knowledge.
There is no passion, there is serenity.
There is no chaos, there is harmony.
There is no death, there is the Force..best spoken by the late Master urr..-nods- And this is what I recently can state Master The Guardian will be skilled in goodness and know the path of peace.

They will be able and upright, straightforward and gentle in speech, humble not conceited.

The Guardian will be content and easily satisfied, unburdened with their duties.

They will be wise, not arrogant or proud and demanding in nature.

The Guardian will bring all beings to ease through happiness and safety.

They will let none, by anger or hatred, wish to harm another.

The Guardian will respect whatever living beings there may be whether they are weak or strong, omitting none; the great or the mighty, medium, short or small, the seen and the unseen, those living near or far away, those just born and to-be-born.

They will be pure of heart, not hold fixed views and have clarity of vision in times of crisis.

The Guardian does not seek material profit or fame, honours or their own happiness over the removal of suffering from others.

May they remain mindful of this heart and this way of living.He gives a soft smile and giggle,saying in his mind...Wow a Master.he also.was saying in his mind as he finally took notice to his species..He read a book about sephi..Outwardly, the Sephi were similar in appearance to Human stock, but had large, pointed ears. Depending on personal status, it was common for upper-class Sephi to fashion their hair into thick spirals adorned with gemstones and other decorations, making it a source of personal pride.
 
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Huang bowed his head, eyes closed.

''You did not listen, padawan. I wanted you not to list off the code. I wanted you to explain what it meant to you. And the things about the 'guardian' are not our tenants. We have nine tenants, as thus.''


Huang paused intaking a breath. His voice was cold, emotionless. He was the teacher, not the comrade.

''Jedi are the guardians of peace, justice, and order in the galaxy. We fight for all life, no matter how intelligent or how unintelligent, no matter how big or how small, no matter how significant or insignificant on a galactic scale. We defend civilization, as well as the freedoms and liberties of all people. The Republic shares these goals and they have become a close ally of the Order, as we are of theirs. We support them to maintain peace and stability enjoyed by this main galactic body and the people throughout the galaxy. When the galaxy is split, a Jedi will side with the Republic, even if there are disagreements with the Republic’s leadership, as we defend the people of the Republic. To rebel against this tenet is to create disorder and chaos.

Emotions are unavoidable, but lessons may be learned from the feeling of these emotions. However, emotions of such strength as to cause a Jedi to act or behave in a manner different from rational thought are dangerous, and must be avoided at all costs for a Jedi to truly master the Force.


Feelings of attraction and love are to be explored carefully and with rationality in mind. Romantic pathways must be treated with care so as to avoid pain and anger. A Jedi must not, however, explore the realm of marriage. To love another is dangerous yet acceptable if treated with care, but attaching oneself to another life in the bonds of matrimony cannot be allowed. Attachment leads to the dark side, and to commit to the way of the Jedi means giving up personal desires and living for the benefit of all life.


The Jedi are to respect life, in any form, and only take life when necessary. A Jedi must put the need of the community over the needs of individuals. A Jedi is not to act for solely personal gain or greed - the good of all must be his goal.


A Jedi is to protect the weak and defenseless. A Jedi may not kill a defenseless individual. Should a Jedi be in a position where aid may be given to the weak or the poor, then the Jedi should do what they can to aid the situation within the guidelines of the Code, the Tenets, and of course the law.


All Jedi are to respect the decisions of the Jedi High Council. While conclaves are held for all members of the Order to air concerns, the Jedi High Council is the governing body of the order. Centralized leadership is important, and this council of equals, led by an equal designated as Grandmaster, was chosen with trust to make these decisions for the Order. Jedi may disagree with the High Council but they must never openly oppose it, for we have seen the dangers in open opposition. Jedi are free, however, to make personal decisions on their own, so long as they do not conflict with standing Jedi policy.


Ruling power and financial wealth are not permitted for a Jedi, as these lead to arrogance and self-pride. Self-pride is a complex that eats the heart and mind of all, including Jedi. If a Jedi thinks he or she is greater than other beings, equal to other beings, or less than other beings then they have succumbed to self-pride. Guard against these three complexes night and day.


A Jedi must consider the living and cosmic manifestations of the Force - one must be mindful of the present, but also look to both the future and the past for guidance.


A Jedi does not fight for adventure or glory. A Jedi fights for the survival of civilization and the survival of the people within it. The greatest Jedi is not the one who defeats an army of thousands, but the one who triumphs over himself. Your importance lies in your devotion to life.''

Huang fixed his yellow eyes on the young padawan as he spoke.

''Now then, padawan. What do these words mean to you? What do you gain from them? How do they apply to the Jedi?''
 

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He listens to his words carefully..as so much is being said,,His eyes does not look His master's in the face,,Due to his tallness even when he sits,,as he spoke the final words He thought to himself.
That was alot..But he had to say what was on his mind..He was very afraid inside almost shaking of the fear that if he doesnt give a correct answer he will walk away..he gave His best answer..These words to me means I will gain and possess.The skills and art to protect and serve the jedi order.. To sacrifice one self to make a civilization right..As you stated A Jedi fights for the survival of civilization and the survival of the people within it.We jedi..Fight for peace..not for are own promotion,
..ever since I was old enough to speak..He shaked, All I wanted was to be a jedi..to have a master to be noticed as a boy who wasn't always a showoff,A jedi to me is..A person who,Can save lives,in this world it's sad you need peace to create violence..but..but..still shaking,We need this to prevail,and succeed Master..since he was only seven.this is all he could think of that has been stuck in his mind for ages,,Your importance lies in your devotion to life.''To those who need you must...
 
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''You are young. I do not expect you to wax lyrical on the tenants. What you have said is adept for one your age.''

The child shook. He stuttered. He would be a hard one to mould.

''Now then, padawan. I presume you have been taught some rudimentry lightsabre training? Have you read upon the lightsabre forms? Do any of them interest you?''

He threw the boy a wooden stave, the average length of a lightsabre.
 

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He,nodded at his master's words,As his back began to ease up,He leaned his head backwards looking at his Master..in his yellow eyes..''I've been taught.How to use the force to lift small,objects..And basic self defense, and some light saber usage.

'As He lowered his Head to his master's chest.due to neck pains..''Raxus.Begin to speak again.this time in a more milder tone.''He still spoke even as he,caught the wooden stave,The same size as a lightsaber''I read about."Djem So form 5. part Of that is called shien'Where you hold the saber backwards'This is the form i'm interested in''.He twirled the stave between his fingers..Then holding it back to his side.'
 

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''You forsee problems with blaster wielding enemies. A sound choice in this day and age. Very well.''

Huang moved the stave fluidly in his hand as it it were nothing more than air between his fingers.

''Shien relies on turning an opponents attacks against them. I see you want to favour the reverse grip. Very well.''

He held the stave out before him, his forearm parallel with it. He bent his knees, feet shoulder width apart. His free arm extended out, countering the blade holding arm.

''Hold the blade, and your body just so. It is a platform, an area from which you can attack...''

Huang struck foward, the stave flashing out.


''...And defend.''

He brought the stave up, blocking an imaginary blow.
 

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He took in his Master's world,As He was amazed at his movements,'As Raxus Held his stave in his hand'He did as his master did but a little more diffrent, He held the stave out in front of him, as his blade was Held inches from his face,He bent his knees,feet shoulder width apart. His free arm clenched in a fist to his center.In his mind''Okay I got this'

He, rolled down his body until his free hand touched the floor,as soon as his hand touched He began a one handed hand stand, he had the stave parrell with his eyes,He swung the stave upwards''Cutting through the air as if he was blocking a blaster bolt'.As he shot back down to his feet''Something like that Master''?
 
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Huang was silent. There was no kindness to be found in those eyes. No compassion. He was too low even for disapproval.

''Why... did you do an handstand, padawan? I was on my feet. The free hand is a counterbalance. You do not balance on it. Watch. listen.''

Huang took up the position. His free hand out to his side.

''Again.''
 

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He nodded to his Master As a look of embarresment came across his Face''Sorry,Master''
He bended his knees,, feet shoulder width apart He breathed in then breathed out settlling His chest Relaxing himself. His free arm Pressed agaisn't his sided, countering the blade holding arm to His side balled into a fist once again.

He then as If he was striking someone Swung his Stave upwards quickly and accuratley In a straight line turning his body around also, He felt good about knowing that it was right,He looked up to his master barely, As he swung back down into his Stance blade parallel to his eyes, And prepared For his Next orders.''I hope That was correct''He spoken to himself As he had glanced over and seen no emotions In his Master's Yellow eye's.
 
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