Ral Revik

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PERSONALITY

The Man

Ral is a easy going kind of guy who almost always is smiling, laughing, or just generally happy, he tends to joke around a lot and is not an overly serious person. He is a good person for the most part, he tries to do right but others as long as they are not bad people. He tends to have his on opinion of good and bad that he uses to judge those in his sights, if he helps someone who turns out to be a bad person and try lied to him he will handle them accordingly. He is not the best at being a bounty hunter as he tends to have a soft spot for people in need of help, more so for women and children who are to weak or otherwise defenseless. He tends to try and be respectful to those he meets in his travels unless they are outright rude and disrespectful to him. He never goes anywhere with out at least one firearm on his person.

The Machine

When his cybernetic controls that were implanted take over he becomes a whole other person, this happen when ever one of his programmed objectives needs to be reached. When he the controls kick in his body acts on auto pilot doing things like killing or stealing, when the task is completed Ral has no memory of the things he did. When the programming is in control Ral becomes cold and emotionless he also doesn't smile much if at all, when talking to him in this state it would seem to people who know him that he is a completely different person to those who don't know him very well he might seem as though he has mood swings.







BIOGRAPHY

Early Life​

Ral was born in the hustle and bustle of Coruscant in the under belly of the city, his mother and father run a small weapons shop. As Ral grew up in there shop he spent quite a bit of time working on and learning about weapons, by the time he was 12 years old he was quite skilled in taking apart fixing and understand how the weapons were made and worked. Growing up in the underbelly of the city prove to make life harder for the young man as there was much crime in the streets, the criminals would come into the shops and tr ti strong arm the owners for protection money. There tactics worked on a lot of the shop but not all, Revik Arms was one of the shop that refused to pay. There small company managed to get away with this because Ral's father struck a deal with the local crime lord they would supply the gang with weapons and ammo at a discount of course, they were not the only shop that did this as it proved to be cheaper then paying them the company's hard earned credits. More shops would have done this if they had know about it, however the few shop that had these deals kept that fact a tight lipped secret. Ral didn't like the idea if his family doing shady deals with the gang but he understood that they had to do it to survive, this was proven to the local by the gang who would bust up people's shops or hurt the owners and there family. Ral wanted nothing more then to get out of the slums an move on in life to makes things better for him self, at 16 he decided that he would join the alliance as it would give him a way out of the slums. So he did what he could to get by with out much trouble while still working part time at his family's shop, once the boy turned 18 he packed a small bag took the credits he had saved up from working there and two old style slug-throwers that he had made that year to be sold in the shop and set out into the city to make his way to join the alliance.



Joining the Alliance​

The young man walked into the recruitment office for the alliance looking like something from a dust bowl planet, he was wearing a white long sleeved shirt with a long brown trench coat over it. He had on a pair of worn black pants and black boots, around his waist he had a pair of holsters which held his Revik Arm's Jury slug-throwers these were not normal slug-throwers though, Ral made these custom with larger bored barrels so they could use a larger higher caliber round then your average side arm slug-thrower. A top his head he wore a old beat up cowboy hat with a couple bullet holes in it, as he told the man he wanted to join the alliance soldiers laughed. The men laughing at him didn't make Ral very happy "how about a little wager then since it is so funny," he spoke with a smile on his face as the men stopped laughing. "What did you have in mind" one of the men asked the young boy in a curious tone, "we will have a shoot off" he said still smiling "each of you will get six shoots to my six shoots and if just one of you beats me i will leave and let that person keeps these guns." The men though about it for a moment they knew that they shouldn't bet with people in the office like that, "I don't know we really shouldn't" one of the men spoke with hesitation in his voice. "Oh, did i mention that they are not even out on the market yet and i will give the winner all the credits i have on me," as the young man spoke a old man walked out from the back and looked around the room as all the soldiers got a very uneasy look on there faces. "Those look nice kid i will take them off your hands" he spoke as then men face turned to that of shock, the old man was the officer in charge of there station they never would have thought him to take up such a offer. The young boy laughed at the old mans statement as they all made there way into the indoor range where the challenge would take place, it started with the lowest ranking versus the boy and as the young man won the matches he would face higher ranking soldiers.

One by one the young boy beat the soldiers shooting almost every shoot in the center of the target in pretty tight groups, after about twenty minutes of shooting the boy had beat all but one, the old man was all that was left. They both stepped up to the targets Ral reloaded as the new targets were placed, the new targets were up and it was just down to one old man and the young weapons smith from the lower city's. the young boy pulled his revolver from the holster cocking it and taking aim at the target, BANG the young man fires hitting the target center mass he smiled and looked at the old man who pulled out his blaster and fired also hitting center mass. They went back and forth hitting center mass until six shot had been fired and nether person missed a shot, the tie was not expected or wanted by either party so they replaced the targets and reloaded there weapons. This time the targets would be moving making it more of a challenge for both men, this time out of the six shots each man missed two but they are tied again so they reset for the final challenge to decide it. This time they would be firing twelve shots in rapid succession on a moving target, the old man went first hitting ten of the twelve targets smiling as he walks away thinking he had it in the bag. Ral stepped up to the target a hand on each of his revolvers he took a breath before drawing and unloading both guns, upon inspection of the kids target it became clear who the winner was seeing the target with twelve holes in it the boy smiled at the group. 'Guess i will be signing up after all huh" he spoke with hint of laughter to his voice, "even if you would have lost we would have signed you up" the group of men began to laugh as the old man drew up the papers though he added one thing to the young mans armory contract which the boy didn't realize until it was to late.


Training and His First Mission

When Ral arrived to do his training to be a weapons developer and builder he discovered the surprise of his contract, he would be trained for the job he wanted but he would then use that to build high class slug-throwers weapons to be used by a special operations team which he would also be part of. Having not paid attention to the paper work when signing up he was now stuck though he was not sure if this was going to be good or bad, the young man went about doing his training getting top scores in things like marksmanship, building weapons, designing weapons this took him but a few months to do. What would take the young man a great deal of time was his special forces training as well as team building exercises, it would not be long before his weapons designed for the team would get a chance to be used as they had a situation in a building. The newly built team was to was not sure if they were ready but they did not have a choice so they were sent to the building to remove all hostels and rescue any innocents that may be found along the way, upon arriving on the scene the team switched into there Revik Designs made gear each outfit to have its own load out to be used with it. In Ral's case his load out was a high powered long range rifle, a light and heavy machine gun, a silenced pistol, and a combat knife. They entered the building and began to try and communicate with the criminals to no avail, so the men in full tactical gear began breaching and clearing every room in search of the criminals. The closer the group got to the top the more bad guys they found, although thanks to less then lethal methods stopping the criminals from fighting back and allowing the team to detain all bad guys with out casualty. The team would spend the next four years doing missions spending time together out side of work all to pass the time though over the four years they have gotten much better as a team and as individuals.

It was finally time the team assembled at there unit's HQ for a mission brief, they were all handed files on the target a Nautolan slave trader who had a base built into a large asteroid where they stored the slave to break them and prepare them to sale. The mission would start immediately, there were to report to the hanger where they would find a ship waiting for them. The ship was a corvette class ship named The Cynthisa it was a transport with some armaments though not as much as if it were say a gunship, they would be using this ship along with a mostly droid crew and a few soldiers. The ship would go to the asteroid posing as a transport with some slaves to sale, though the slaves would actually be Ral and his team. The team grabbed all there gear and loaded it on the ship which had a room for each of the members of the team, the ship then took off heading for the target location to begin the mission and eliminate the slaver and rescue any slaves they can in the process. As the ship approached the base they were hailed to find the purpose of there visit, the acting captain manage to get them to believe that they had slaves for sale that would prove worth while so the ship was allowed to dock with the base. Upon docking with the base the team prepared to board and move through the base, as the doors opened the slavers thought they were picking up slaves but found there self's dead killed quickly and quietly. The team then split up one team to look for the slaves the other to find and kill the leader, Ral was on the three man team to find and free the slaves. After there tech hack the bases system and got the blueprints both teams took a copy and went there ways to complete there missions. It didn't take long before there meet resistances from the slavers though they managed to eliminate all in there path making there way to the rooms where the slaves were kept, there tech tried to hack the cages but was having a hard time trying to get through the security. They were running low on time as more slavers kept coming and the other team was pinned down by a large group of slavers with armor, Ral pulled the large pack from his back opened it and reached in pulling out small blast charges that he would hand out to his team having them place one on the door to each cage. The team did this then told the slaves to get back and they blew the doors freeing the slaves, Ral then had the other two lead the slave back to there ship while he went to help the pinned down team. As he made his way through the ship he found him self burning through his ammo a lot quicker then he would like, by the time he reached the team he was out of ammo for all his weapon except for his two revolvers. Drawing his high powered revolvers he began to move through the halls stopping only to reload in between putting holes in slavers, with his help the team managed to make it to the command room of the base where the boss was locked in and hiding.

Without there tech they were not sure how they were going to get into the room since the pack Ral brought didn't have anything big enough to blow through the doors, Ral came up with a plan he left the two men of the team to watch the doors while he went back to the ship. When he returned he had a large box in hand the two men looked at Ral not sure what he had planned, he got to the door and sat the box down opening it to reveal a large bomb with four magnets attached to cables as well as a large magnet on the back side of the bomb. He smiled as he pulled the bomb out and placed it on the center of the doors, he then placed the four magnets in the corners of the door once this was done the cables pulled tight making opening the doors from the inside impossible. Ral then began to walk away waving the rest of his team to follow him so they did once he reached the ship Ral gave the order to take off, right before they hit the hyper drive Ral smiled and pressed a button on a data pad he had in his hands as he did this a large flash was seen as the base turned to dust. His whole team looked at him in shock "you are a scary man you know that," one of the team said to which Ral just laughed as they took off into hyperspace to return to HQ and report in on there success. When they reached the HQ the team went and reported in, they were congratulated on a good job and they were told that they could keep the ship as it was not even on the books as being a asset of the alliance. The slaves were all set free and most were very grateful for being saved, most got jobs with the alliance working as the crew for Ral and his team on there ship.


The Last of the Team

Ral and his team spent the next fours years doing missions in secret, during that time of the five two had died during missions leaving only the three. Normally the team would get new members for there team, Ral's team didn't do this as they just didn't feel right about it so they carried on just the three of them. Ral though that the way they died was a little strange as they were both on solo missions for the alliance, he began to look into there deaths on his own time with using the alliance resources. What he would find would make him not want to be a part of the alliance anymore, while looking he found that his last two team mates were currently a mission that would end with there deaths and him being framed for it. Ral set out for Coruscant where the two members of his team were sent for a mission to eliminate a group of assassins, though the two didn't know that they were being sent to kill assassins that were hired to kill them. Ral hurried to the planet to try and save what was left of his team as he walked off the ship he quickly hopped on a speeder and made his way to the slums to a warehouse, as he pulled up he stopped for a moment thinking to him self that he didn't think he would ever return to this place. He walked up to the door drawing his revolvers then turning and kicking the door open, he began to make his way into the building as he did so he ran into a few mercenaries with whom he exchanged fire dropping two of them before he took a hit in his right side. He was in a state where he was not concerned to much about his injury and finished off the group before reloading his weapons then moving farther into the warehouse, as he found his way to the main room after killing a few groups of mercs his body all torn up and had a few bullet holes in him. The assassins had his two friends strung up and were getting ready to shot them with what appeared to be the same revolvers that Ral always carried with him, after see the assassins with the same weapons he carries he realized how they were going to set him up. In a attempt to try and prevent this from happening he opened fire with the assassins taking them out one by one until it was just him and his team, just when he thought he was good a large door opened up and an alliance official was standing there with a shocked look on his face. Ral was happy to see the man as he thought that his back up had arrived, the man walked into the room telling Ral he could now relax and get treated for his injures so Ral started to make his way out of the warehouse when he heard two gun shoots. Ral quickly turned around to see the man standing there with the revolver in his hand smiling as smoke left the end of the barrel, Ral turned to take aim at the man though as he did this a team of soldiers were seen coming from the other direction. The man in the warehouse began to yell traitor and point at Ral making the soldiers turn there guns at the young man, seeing this Ral knew he had no option to run so he took off making his way back to the spaceport. Along the way to the spaceport he called to his ship and told them to take the ship and flee into hiding until a time when he would call for them, as he reached the spaceport he found that they had only left regular soldiers there which made it easy for him to slip passed them.

Once in the spaceport he then found a ship and decided he his only option was to steal it and take it to the Arkania system, once he boarded the ship the door closed behind him and the ship could be felt firing up to take off. Ral waited until the ship left port to make his way to the cockpit, once he reached the cock pit he pulled his gun on the pilot he then knocked the pilot out and took control of the ship setting a course for Arkania. His plan was to go there and get his body repaired from the damage that he sustained, while in flight there he used what little he had to stop the bleeding and hold on till he could make it there. Upon arriving to the planet the man exited the ship leaving the pilot on board so that he may take his ship and leave upon waking, Ral made his way into the spaceport town stumbling about looking for a doctor. Ral was in a fair bit of trouble being injured and stuck in the cold with out the proper clothing, he didn't think he was going to make it taking a seat on the ground next to a building along the edge of town. As the man sat there thinking he was not going to make it and fading in and out he heard a mans voice, as he tried to open his eyes he saw a man in a hooded clock hiding his face. Ral passed out just as the man approached him and make contact, the man who had a two odd looking men with him had the men grab the passed out Ral and away they went into the night.


How the Man Became the Machine

When Ral awoke he was in a dark room his body didn't hurt anymore and he felt as though he had been drugged, he tried to move his arms and legs only to find him self secured to a table. He began to try and break the restraints only to make noise letting his captures know he was waking, hearing the noise the door to the room opened and in walked a tall pale skinned Arkanian man. "Why have you brought me here, let me go at once'' Ral spoke to the man with a bit of anger in his voice, "i will let you go once i have fixed you and made you better" the tall man replied followed with a light laugh. The man began to prepare his tools as he spoke to the trapped Ral, once the man was done speaking he pulled a syringe from his pocket and used it to inject drugs into Ral's arm. The former spec ops agent began to feel very light headed as the man pulled the needle from Ral's arm, he continued to try and free him self until the drugs took full effect rendering his body unresponsive to the signals his brain was trying to send. Now laying limp on the table the man grabbed his tools and began to operate on Ral's motionless body, though his body was motionless he could still feel everything for the first 20 minutes after which he passed out from the pain. The man who was doing the operation started with the installation of a cybernetic eye just the one those as there was nothing wrong with the other, he then would start on the arm replacing in with a cybernetic one all the way up to the shoulder. The last limbs he worked on were Ral's legs which the man replaced with cyberneticly enhanced legs, after doing all the work to the out side of Ral's body the man then started on the inner workings of the former alliance agents head. The man had many cybernetic enhancements planed for the brain the firs of which allowed the man to control his new toy, the man would follow that up with enhancements like being able to upload information into Ral's brain as well as allowing the now half cyborg to be able to access and hack computers by plunging into them. The man made sure however that his new half cyborg could still function as though nothing had happen, though when the need arose he could be switched over to care out programming from his master.

After a few weeks if recovering Ral awoke in a different part of the cave wearing nothing but some old rags, his memory was still cloudy but he knew he had to get out of there so he got up and started to walk out of the room. As he stood up to leave the room he noticed that his arm and legs had been replaced, about the same time he realized that his eye was processing things around him and displaying the info in HUD type format. This HUD could do all kinds of helpful things from allowing him to see in the dark to things like seeing in inferred to find people who were hiding, the eye also had a targeting assisted featured that increased his accuracy with ranged weapons like blaster and slug-throwers as well as when sniping. He exited the room into a hallway with a dim light at the end so he made his way to it as quietly as he could with his new improvements, as he reached the edge of the room he stopped and looked into the room where he saw a man standing over a table looking at documents. Seeing the man Ral's memory began to return enough for him to remember the man from before he blacked out, he walked into the room placing himself behind the man before he leaped at the man with a new found agility wrapping his hands around the mans neck. Ral went to tight his grasp of the mans neck though he would soon find that no matter how hard he tried to chock the man his body would not do it, "what's wrong cant follow through" the man asked with a smirk on his face. "I am Mal and I am your new master" the man spoke still smiling, "from this day on you will do anything I need done, you still have freedoms to an extent" Ral stood looking the man in the eyes with anger hands still around the mans throat. "So I am just a slave for you now" Ral asked the man in an angry tone, "I would not call you a slave, as I said you still have freedoms like being able to retain your memory's and act if your own free will." The man pushed Ral back standing up right and then starting to walk around the rugged faced cyborg, "however should you try things like taking my life of telling others about me your brain will shut down stopping you from revealing anything about me." The man stopped and looked at him "oh also if I need a task completed I may call upon you to do things for me though you probable wont remember doing them," Ral staring the man down as he spoke "yeah what's to stop me from just killing my self an ending this now" the man laughed. "You could try though it will be much like just now when you tried to attack me" Mal turned away from the cyborg, "oh and I though you might like to know I tracked down the ship you kept calling the name of while you were out" the man started to walk out of the room. Hearing this Ral quickly followed the man as they walked down the hallways of the underground lab, the man stopped at a large metal door and turned to the cybernetic man behind him "in this room you will find the exit to the building as well as your weapons old and new there will also be a speeder bike for you." The man turned and started to walk away "take that bike to the ports where you will a ship waiting to take you to where the ship is currently," hearing this Ral quickly entered the room but had to stop momentarily so that his eye could adjust to the difference in brightness from the cave to outside.

The man put all his gear on taking a moment to examine his new weapons that were waiting for him, he then just on the speeder bike and took off out of the mine making his way to the spaceport where a ship with one of Mal's cyborgs waited for him. Ral pulled into the ships cargo bay hopping off the speeder as the door closed behind him, he made his way to the cockpit where he talked to the pilot and found out be was heading to the planet Denon. The pilot informed Ral that the ship had recently been hijacked by a small group of Weequay pirates looking a make a quick profit by selling the ship and the crew off, as the ship landed the cyborg pilot told Ral the location if the bar the pirates were in and the dropped Ral and his speeder off then left the planet returning to Mal. Ral took the bag of equipment that he had received and strapped it to the back if the speeder, of the equipment he had his revolvers on his hips which were hidden by his long brown duster coat.



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NAME: Ral Revik
Alias: Experiment 367,
FACTION: Independent
RANK: Smuggler, Weapons Manufacturer/Distributor
SPECIES: Human/Cyborg
AGE: 32 (Pre-Skip), 42 (Post-Skip)
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'6"
WEIGHT: 285
EYES: Left eye is deep blue right eye is cybernetic enhancement
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Olive
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Both legs, his left arm, and his right eye have all been replaced with cybernetic enhancements
FORCE SENSITIVE: No


STRENGTH: 7/10.
DEXTERITY: 8/10.
CONSTITUTION: 6/10.
INTELLIGENCE: 7/10.
WISDOM: 5/10.
CHARISMA: 5/10.


SKILLS:
  • Proficient Hand-to-Hand skills (learned in the military special forces)
  • Advanced Demolitions skills
  • Expert Computer hacking skills (with cybernetic implants)
  • Expert Piloting skills (developed while in special forces)
  • Expert use/maintenance/building/designing of Firearms (This is due to the fact that he raised by parent who owned a Arms company where Ral worked for years building his skills, more so once he joined special forces.)





SHIP:
The Cynthisa(Will add details later)

SPEEDER:
Hastig 880(Same for this will add info later)



KILLS:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A
 
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