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You know... I just opened this thread this morning to post the thumbs up man, as I have no recollection of posting the cool beans bit. I musta been out of it last night.

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Jake

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This is awesome stuff, Kurt. I've always been a fan of your writing. My only complaint is that you used a lot of apostrophes and I don't think all of them were necessary, but hey, whatever floats your boat. I also really like the pictures they used because I think they demonstrate the gritty feel of what he stands for and what he's like.

I probably won't anytime soon, but I think that a little more practical approach to being an S13 agent (ie: not 'I'm a super badass ninja who wears all black all the time and no one ever sees me') like this would be awesome, and if I ever do decide to make a character for them I might cite this as an inspiration.
 

Ser Yorick

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Thank you, I appreciate it. Super ninjas get old fast anyway. :P
 

Ser Gregor

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I like how you conveniently edited out the Russian map, but you should have kept the Russian in the shot.
 

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not sure if like

Great writing, fun to read, but something was off about it. Can't put my finger on it.

EDIT: that sounded mean. I don't want it to sound mean =3 I'm not being mean <3
 
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