You know... I just opened this thread this morning to post the thumbs up man, as I have no recollection of posting the cool beans bit. I musta been out of it last night.
This is awesome stuff, Kurt. I've always been a fan of your writing. My only complaint is that you used a lot of apostrophes and I don't think all of them were necessary, but hey, whatever floats your boat. I also really like the pictures they used because I think they demonstrate the gritty feel of what he stands for and what he's like.
I probably won't anytime soon, but I think that a little more practical approach to being an S13 agent (ie: not 'I'm a super badass ninja who wears all black all the time and no one ever sees me') like this would be awesome, and if I ever do decide to make a character for them I might cite this as an inspiration.