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Autumn's Firefly

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A BROKEN MORAL COMPASS

1. What is going to happen in your plot?

My character, Aliyah, will begin to travel the Galaxy with a new and mysterious companion. Venatus (RPed by @Aurius Pheonix) has agreed to help her. They will train together and improve Aliyah's lightsaber skills, form a master-apprentice bond that would be looked down upon by the Order. Aliyah will help Venatus build his own lightsaber. Finally, their friendship and loyalties will be put to the test as a member of the Order seeks to put Venatus down for "corrupting" Aliyah's pure Jedi thoughts.

2. What other players will be a part of this?

@Aurius Pheonix. We are still trying to find a willing Jedi to PvP against (otherwise we can use an NPCs). @TheMorrigan will be joining us if his character is accepted.

3. Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place?
Aliyah's Starship, Nar Shaddaa, Ilum

4. Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
Prologue: After the events of Break The Chain, Aliyah and Venatus have saved and returned the captives to their families. They agree to work together, and Venatus begins training Aliyah what he can within the starship, as she teaches him how to pilot and handle a blaster (Friendly PvP, social).

Chapter 1: Aliyah and Venatus return to the Rimworld of Nar Shaddaa, as he teaches her to hone her Force Senses. Going from a seedy bar, they track a murderer down. Venatus will then instruct her to decide his fate; which morally challenges her. Some more lessons would be learned. (PvE, Social)

Chapter 2: Venatus' mentorship is paused as Aliyah takes him to the crystal caves of Ilum, to construct his first lightsaber. (Social)

Chapter 3: Suspicious and insulted by Venatus' teaching methods, a member of the Order will either attempt to stop or kill him. Once the Jedi discovers he had built his lightsaber on a Jedi world, Aliyah would also be questioned. (PvP)

5. What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"?
Strengthen a lasting relationship between two PCs
Learn how to fight and use the Force in battle
Learn more about the Dark and Light Sides
Build a Mentor-Pupil dynamic between two PCs
Cause Aliyah to question the loyalties of the Jedi, her newfound friend, and her own morality.

6. Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member?
Not that I can tell, no.
 
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Hey there, @Autumn's Firefly. I know I'm extremely late, but welcome to SWRP!

Anyway, this is a fantastic plot you have here. I absolutely adore character story arcs in submissions! Building a lightsaber would technically count as a reward too, but since your character's a Jedi and because of the thread length, everything fits.

Without further ado: approved!

P.S. I would be more than happy to DM the Jedi attempting to stop Venatus/Aliyah's growing relationship. Or even offer my own Jedi's involvement. Or you can always ask other members around too. Cheers!
 

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I'd love to have a DM or your Jedi. Maybe both, if you're comfortable. It's on a Jedi world, it would make perfect sense.
 

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Hey @Autumn's Firefly, while I don't think I can jump in with both, how I do is completely up to you!

Although I'd be happy to throw my Jedi in (Imani Sage). She's not a traditionalist though, so she wouldn't go crazy knowing your character is with an Exile. But she wouldn't be very happy, either.
 

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Hey @Autumn's Firefly, while I don't think I can jump in with both, how I do is completely up to you!

Although I'd be happy to throw my Jedi in (Imani Sage). She's not a traditionalist though, so she wouldn't go crazy knowing your character is with an Exile. But she wouldn't be very happy, either.

That's alright! Whichever you prefer. Although he's Indie, minus the whip, so luckily there'll be no over-powering dark side reek
@Aurius Pheonix
 

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@Deviant I edited one of the descriptions to make sense, changing Rhen Var to Nar Shaddaa.

Also, the Prologue has begun to stale out so we ended it there. Would that be considered complete? You're also welcome to join in for this next thread, which is supposed to be very supernatural/murder mysteryish
 
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Hey there, @Autumn's Firefly!

That thread looks good enough for me! Although, as for your next thread, I don't think I'll have the time to join. I fear I might stall it out with my hella slow-ness. You're always more than welcome to hit up other Exiles around, or I can recommend some for you.

Cheers.
 

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Hey there, @Autumn's Firefly!

That thread looks good enough for me! Although, as for your next thread, I don't think I'll have the time to join. I fear I might stall it out with my hella slow-ness. You're always more than welcome to hit up other Exiles around, or I can recommend some for you.

Cheers.
If you have anyone in mind, let me know! And that's perfectly alright :)
 
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