Orthinan Vross

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Name: Orthinan Vross
Faction: Independent
Rank: N/A
Species: Clawdite
Age: 56 (Human Years)
Gender: Male

Force Sensitive: No


Appearance: Vross sports a slim jacket with a visor covering the top part of his head. He has a light greenish tone, but appears more darkish green when his skin is exposed to the light..

Attributes: Vross is very simple minded, only thinking of sheer firepower when it comes to battling his enemies. His intellect declines as situations get tougher, which causes him to make brash decisions which often put him in more danger. Strength is not a worry, as he relies on his shape shifting abilities to substitute muscle. He has low stamina when it come to fights on foot, and will often find a way to overwhelm his enemies before he runs out of energy to continue a fight. His health is very poor in general, but good compared to other Clawdites his age.

Personality: Vross has a very fearful personality, which he attempts to hide with his quick-to-anger persona. He often will break this persona, when he feels his morale is threatened. Vross fairs well in emotional control (compared to other members of his race.) He constantly questions authority, he does so to prevent his persona from being shattered, so that he doesn't display what emotions he's really experiencing.

Biography: Vross grew up in a very stable household, a strange thing for his planets social structure. When he was in his mid-ages he experienced a genetic abnormality unseen in other Clawdites which allowed him to copy specific forms (through memory) and shift into them according to his emotions at the time of transformation. Which makes him an exceptional shape-shifter, but in some cases not. As when his emotions go out of check it may cause him to shift into one form and not have the ability to shift back for a short period of time. As time went on he continued to gain better control over his newfound abilities until he fully mastered them. After a skirmish with an unnamed gang of smugglers, Vross left his home planet and now resides in an unnamed planet on the outskirts of the Core Worlds.

Skills: Vross is good with machinery, especially technologies that have offensive capabilities. As well as having general knowledge of how to use them, he has good knowledge of how to disarm and fix them.

Gear: Vross keeps two Bar Mines on himself at all times. As well as a small leather pouch to store things (of a smaller nature). He holds no other gear or weaponry.

 
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First, I would take a look at this-
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/character-sheets-profile-templates.64244/
Excuse my lack of a fancy link.
Your character is on the right track, but is missing a lot of the required criteria that is expected. I would really lengthen that biography, and personality. Get creative with the personality in other areas than what your character thinks about on the battlefield. (As expressed in his atributes)
With that, I look forward to seeing an updated character! Shapeshifters are really cool, so I can't wait to see how you utilize it :D
 

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First, I would take a look at this-
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/character-sheets-profile-templates.64244/
Excuse my lack of a fancy link.
Your character is on the right track, but is missing a lot of the required criteria that is expected. I would really lengthen that biography, and personality. Get creative with the personality in other areas than what your character thinks about on the battlefield. (As expressed in his atributes)
With that, I look forward to seeing an updated character! Shapeshifters are really cool, so I can't wait to see how you utilize it :D


Yes m'am I will get on it :)
 

gogand

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First, I would take a look at this-
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/character-sheets-profile-templates.64244/
Excuse my lack of a fancy link.
Your character is on the right track, but is missing a lot of the required criteria that is expected. I would really lengthen that biography, and personality. Get creative with the personality in other areas than what your character thinks about on the battlefield. (As expressed in his atributes)
With that, I look forward to seeing an updated character! Shapeshifters are really cool, so I can't wait to see how you utilize it :D
Any better?

Or does it need more?
 

Zenya

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As long as it contains the minimum requirement, It's good.
But I will always be pushing for a longer, more detailed Personality and Bio. ;) You have the opportunity to get really creative!
Of course, you will have to get it verified by a faction leader if you want to take part in any ~*official role plays*~
Since you are an indie, I would go pick which specific independent faction you are in, and then seek to get your character approved.
If there are any serious issues (concerning your chosen shape shifting abilities, and all) you can get more information on that.
Meanwhile, I will be keeping an eye out for your content and posts^^
Cheers.
 

gogand

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As long as it contains the minimum requirement, It's good.
But I will always be pushing for a longer, more detailed Personality and Bio. ;) You have the opportunity to get really creative!
Of course, you will have to get it verified by a faction leader if you want to take part in any ~*official role plays*~
Since you are an indie, I would go pick which specific independent faction you are in, and then seek to get your character approved.
If there are any serious issues (concerning your chosen shape shifting abilities, and all) you can get more information on that.
Meanwhile, I will be keeping an eye out for your content and posts^^
Cheers.

Aye aye cap'n
thanks for keeping a lookout for me :D
 
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