Oracion "Ray "Seis

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Oracion Seis
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People, people make me wonder sometimes, actually, now that I think about it, they make me wonder a lot. If something seems strange or different to them they will undoubtedly hate on it, if there is something to be gotten they'll try to get it. Humans own emotions of greed, envy, jealousy, envy, superiority, and inferiority, among others weave their own suffering and that of others in the pursuit of happiness and joy. Even those who do charitable things out of the good of their hearts do it because it makes them feel good. Probably sounds hypocritical of me to be saying that when I'm a person myself, not even I can escape humanities seeming curse.

I guess you could say my adventure if you can call it that, began seventeen years ago when I was born on Coruscant. My family pretty much consisted of me, my mother, and two siblings. My father was honestly no where to be seen, I'd asked about it once, I was told he was a republic soldier off on other planets and such so he never got to come home, I'm pretty sure the bastard is off enjoying himself somewhere, if that was the case then hopefully dead. Heh, Needless to say my life wasn't the greatest growing up. Not to mention the fact I got into a lot fights. People would piss me off and I'd just explode in their face.

Lots of Trouble I tell you.

But it felt good.

I actually wanted to become a Jedi a year or two back and I'd learned that I had the aptitude to become one. I ended up seeing about it and such but ultimately decided against it, I didn't really fit in with them and their ideals of peace and harmony, not to mention the fact I don't think they really wanted me.

About two months ago I left Coruscant and started travelling about the rims, going from place to place and pretty much adventuring. It was in all honesty different than what I was used to, I had to stowaway on cargo ships and the like. It was fun. I was free I guess.

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Physical Characteristics:

Age: 17
Height: 6'3"
Weight: 160Lbs
Eyes: Blue
Hair: White

Weapons
None

Force Powers:
Telekinesis

Writings
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Sheridan

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Just a quick character profile I threw together, Anything I should perhaps change?
 

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Oh mighty Godzilla, save us, the British have invaded the Star Wars Universe. :CCry2

Don't worry, we'll make sure he's given lots of toothpaste.

Also, if you're wanting the proper Spanish pronounciation, you've got it wrong. Also, "Prayer Six"? The name sounds familiar but I can't think of from where.
 

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Oh mighty Godzilla, save us, the British have invaded the Star Wars Universe. :CCry2

Heh, Sorry about that, it was the first thing off the top of my head.

Don't worry, we'll make sure he's given lots of toothpaste.

Also, if you're wanting the proper Spanish pronounciation, you've got it wrong. Also, "Prayer Six"? The name sounds familiar but I can't think of from where.

I didn't even know that it was in Spanish, It was just something I heard a while back.

Also, made a slight edit to the history, last couple lines didn't sound right to me.
 

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Oracion has the religious connotations of 'prayer' and also a grammatical 'clause'.

Just throwing that out there.

If he wants to keep it in Spanish he can, it's not like it matters seeing as Spanish is nonexistent in this galaxy anyway.
 
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