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Coruscant - Galactic City - 12:02 AM - Day 245/368 - 1 week since Atlee's death

Twenty stories high in the sky, with a beautiful light show blazing beneath from cars and buildings. The wind was blowing fairly that night and pushing up against the right side of Revet Saonsul's body. Revet had a non-existent package, in hand from a client that didn't exist, and never took part in Revet's illegal business. It was supposed to be the darkest time of night, but lights from everywhere kept it lit up like the front rows of a concert. The unreal package was meant for delivery straight to 783 Distinction Avenue down in the Ambassadorial Sector of Galactic City. It was about five miles from Revet's current location, and he intended to free run it all the way there. It was a high paying job, apparently something politically crucial was in the package. The clients even knew what their messenger's standard rate was for this type of job.

Revet Saonsul's dark brown eyes looked out to the night and up at Centax 2, one of the four moons of Coruscant. He took a look down at the ledge that was on the other side of a metal railing. The dark skinned Free Runner put his hands on the railing and executed an eagle flip. It was a two story dive over a twenty foot gap, and Revet was diving head first. The wind was pushing up at Revet's cheeks as he approached the ledge to another building. The skinny person put his legs together, and his hands ready to push from the top of his head. The landing was just over the railing of the building and Revet was just about to slam into the metal. However, the experienced runner went into a roll in which he pushed his hands up on the ground, and flipped back onto his feet. There was no rest here, as soon as the man's feet hit the ground he was off into a sprint.

The sprint was sending him right into a wall leading to a left turn. However, Revet made no attempt to turn his body to the left, and instead pulled off a wall spin. A few feet from the wall, the man made jump at it. Both hands went out onto the wall, and performed a vertical 360 degree turn to the left while still remaining in contact with the wall. This placed Revet's front facing in the direction of right. Once both of his feet planted firmly onto the ground the young man took off towards the upcoming ledge. Right below the ledge's railing was a walkway that continued in the direction of 783 Distinction Avenue. Once again, there were no main attempts to avoid the upcoming obstacle. As soon as he was only a few feet from it, Revet went into a slide under the railing's bar, and grabbed a support bar to the right of him with both hands. He then swung his body 180 degrees horizontally clockwise. This flung Revet's body down onto the ground where his feet firmly planted, and shot him off again.

It was a straight shot down the walkway which went on for seven miles; three miles too many. Revet Saonsul continued down the pathway for a whole mile, avoiding obstacles like street lights, people, and liter. However someone called the authorities because at 12:23 AM a hovercraft dispatch vehicle with a spotlight was shooting directly down at Revet. The large spotlight was lighting up the entire walkway in from the left side of which Revet stepped. It shouted out a warning from a speaker system; subsequently waking up all the light sleepers within a small area.

"Stop your movement, get down on the ground, and put your hand behind your back or we will open fire, Saonsul," Largely announced the metal dispatch vehicle, "You have thirty seconds to comply or we will open fire on you!"

They weren't joking around either, they had an automated repeater blaster attached to the bottom of the vehicle like a chain gun. Even with the threat of being shot to ribbons with blaster fire, Revet was unfazed, and preceded to run down the same walkway he was on, with the same package he was carrying. Just as they were ready to tear him to shreds, the man they were chasing made a daring leap in their direction to a nearby balcony. With a clear open window. It was just twenty feet from the walkway. Revet made a tuck and roll once he hit the ground which greatly surprised a woman laying in bed. Then he bashed her door right down to the ground and continued to shoot down the hallway. It was the fifteenth floor of the entire building, and Revet was headed down.

The runner Revet continued down the halls of thirteen floors until he reached the second floor of the building towards the ground floor. It was the lower city so he wasn't expecting much resistance once he made it down. However, there was one man stationed towards the end of the second floor hall way. He had his gun directly pointed at the man running right towards him. He only gave one "freeze" to Revet before opening firing on the runner. The blaster pistol that he was wielding was of a poor range, and the shooter's aim was way too poor for it to actually hit his target. Revet was ducking, and hopping too fast for the blaster shots to hit him. When he got close, Revet's left hand whipped the gun away, and his right hand punched the cop in the jaw. The runner didn't stop at all and continued by doing a spin around to the back of the falling officer, and sent a left elbow to his back, before using him as a push off to get back to full speed.

Afterward, it was smooth sailing for the last fifteen minutes of the runner's delivery. Three miles later, Revet was at the Ambassadorial Sector and close to his location. All he had to do was ascend three stories to his target destination. There were convenient railings in which Revet jumped up onto to reach the correct height. Revet was hanging from the windowsill of a very dark space, it was the address of 738 Distinction Avenue. When he knocked on the window, it just opened to him, and he threw the package right in. The delivery was completed, and the job was done for Revet. The dark haired runner jumped down back to street level, and continued back to his secret hide out without a trace in the night.

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Coruscant - Galactic City Cantina - 11:47 AM - Day 245/368

Revet Saonsul was relaxing in one of the booths. He was simply relaxing and spending some of the money that he got in advance. Revet was getting some drinks and food when on the TV news, last night chase scene with yours truly was right on TV. It didn't get a very good look at his face, and it was over saturated with light from the spot light, but it was Revet on the TV. This didn't worry him one bit as he could simply jump out of there at the sign of any trouble.
 

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///Location:Galactic City Cantina//

///Begin Charisma Program///

///Start Thought Process///

Shale fired up his Charisma program....A strange way to think about it. He had programmed a "thought process". It allowed him to think like a human again. He walked into the bar and looked around. He was searching for shady figures. And there were plenty. He walked up to the bar.

"What'll it be?"

"Nuthin'" Shale replied.
 

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Adelaide had been in the cantina awaiting for her contact to show up. She glanced at the time, it has been well over an hour since there agreed time. If her most reliable contact was this late it meant one thing, trouble.

A very important job was to be given to him, one that was going to pay a lot of credits. One of two things happened if her cohort hasn't shown yet, the deal fell through or he was killed. The people giving her the job were some of the most despicable, rotten, two-faced creatures on this planet, which says a lot since she is on Coruscant. Hence is why she refused to deal with them directly, but in retrospect maybe she should have.

She was more or less screwed and needed someone to deliver a package, badly. Luckily the cantina contained all sorts of shady characters willing to take on a job or two. It all depended on who you asked. She gave a quick scan of the place, but didn't see anyone
that looked like they were here for "business". One individual, a dark skinned human,
did seem like the type that would do this type of work could be found.

She approached with a charismatic smile and sat down at the booth with him.
"Hello, you wouldn't happen to know anyone looking for a messenger job of any sorts
would you? It seems my well has ran dry with my old employee and need someone to play delivery." She felt awkward asking a complete stranger, but these jobs can't be advertised in the classifieds like other jobs. Plus meeting new employees and friends is hard if you keep to yourself all the time.
 
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Revet was in a rather laid back position with his feet up on the Cantina table and the manliest drink he could get in his right hand; a mojito. He of course thought that the drink was rather queer, but he did enjoy the taste of it which was something he couldn't say for a lot of queer things. He had only taken three ships before he was approached by a woman looking to lay down a package. It was annoying for him that on his day off a woman in which he would otherwise would consider a "bitch" to come to him with a package. However, she had absolutely no clue that she was addressing the self proclaimed fastest foot messenger. That was insulting enough to Revet for him to actually consider verbally bitch slapping her.

It seemed to be the regular package, and the person he was talking to seemed to be a nice enough girl, at least in Revet's opinion which was always mindful of appearance. The package looked like the standard job for Revet, so he gave her his standard fee, "Two hundred and I'll run it."
 

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Shale watched this exchange and smiled. He walked over quickly and proposed "150 and I will do it. I can tell you that I can go faster than him. And I can guarantee it will get there." he looked at them both.
 

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Revet turned his head over to the man that walked over and shot a break into Revet's business. The one thing that everyone who commonly came to that cantina would, was that you don't ever mess around with Revet Saonsul's business. That was just something you never do to anyone period in his mind. So Revet kindly looked up at him and politely stated, "I will kick your ass if you don't get out of my business right now."
 

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Shale laughed hard. "You actually want to try that kid? You want to try? Go ahead." Shale looked at him and quickly assessed him. He would have no problem beating him, considering he had both lightning fast reflexes and military class training. "You're too cocky kid." he said leaning closer to him.
 

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Revet had a false understanding look on his face as if he finally understood what he was up against. Just nodding his head as if he had gotten new information to an interesting subject. The man had no obviously no clue of what type of fighter that Revet was; a man that has basically lost everything he had to lose. That type of person isn't someone you would normally run up on. However, since this man obviously thought that it wouldn't take a wink to kick Revet's ass, maybe it was something worth replying to. The dark skinned man pulled his feet of the table he was sitting at, stood up, and looked directly down at the man that stood an inch shorter than him.

Revet simply addressed the man calmly as if he was going to back off, "Fair enough." After a second of pause, the runner whipped around 360 with and elbow headed straight for Shale's jaw.
 

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"Intimidation will not work-" Shale was struck hard in the jaw by a sudden 360 degree spin. This had absolutely no effect on Shale other than turning his head 90 degrees to the right. "Ow." Shale turned back to the kid in front of him. "Walk away." he said menacingly.
 

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The elbow had absolutely no effect on Shale which obviously showed that he was not like other guys that walked into the cantina. There was a simple pause in which Revet tilted his head and gave Shale a simple disappointed look. Then, with no sudden warning, Revet jumped up into the air, tucked in his legs, and double kicked at Shale's chest which would simply send Revet back into his seat safely.
 

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The next attack, Shale was expecting. The kid jumped up and aimed to hit him in the chest. He quickly reassessed the situation. The kid who was attacking him, according to Coruscanti databases, was Revet Sanosaul. All this happened in miliseconds.And then... Revet slammed into Shale.
 
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The full force of a double drop kick sent Shale backwards which is to be expected when an experienced runner of ten or more years sends both his feet to your center of gravity. The kick sent Revet back into his original seat. With him being really confident that Shale was knocked down and not getting back up, Revet readdressed the woman who had a business proposition, "Okay, so two hundred."
 

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///Situation Reassessment. Threat Level:Medium///

///Suggested Course of Action: Leave///

///AI Override///

///Retaliation Path Accepted///

"Bad. Kriffing. Move." Shale said standing and brushing himself off. He took three steps forward and then broke into a sprint. As he ran towards him he grabbed a bottle off one of the tables, shoving a Twi'lek out of the way. The bottle was in his left hand and he raised his right arm.
 

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Revet had sent his opponent back a while away, but apparently while the obviously best course of action would be to run, some people just had to stand up. As Shale was running back, Revet jumped onto to the table in front of him. Once Shale had picked up a bottle, and raised his right arm, Revet was ready to left front kick him right in the head. Since Revet was an on-foot messenger and free runner, the kick would do some moderate damage.

"Do you even know who I am," rhetorically inquired the free runner, "I'm Revet Saonsul, savvy."
 

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"Yes. Don't care." Shale spouted out as he ran towards Revet's foot.

///Combat Options: 1.Drop bottle, grab leg. 2.Continue and get hit by leg. Estimated Damage: Minimal.///

Shale dropped the bottle and reached out to grab Revet's foot.
 

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The extended foot that Revet Saonsul had out was grabbed by Shale, but the left foot that was still on the ground could still move. Revet hopped that foot up into the air, and twisted his body left so that his left foot would go square into Shale's face. This would obviously send Shale to the ground with minimal damage to Revet himself as he would land on a table.
 
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((Just edit it. Go to the bottom panel. It says delete. Click. Click on delete option. TADAA! I just learned that trick))
 

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I know how to delete it, it just keeps giving me a database error.
 

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((Ah, the site is screwy right now. I have to click on the history item to get back here. Also, wouldn't the shear force of 80 KG being forced into you throw your balance off?))
 

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(What? You grabbed my foot which allowed me to stay up in the air. If you hadn't grabbed my foot, you would have knocked me over. Thanks for helping me keep my balance.)
 
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