My first youtube video.

Dexington

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Holy hell, did you write that? That was brilliant.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(He Who Mars the Skin of Gods @ Aug 27 2007, 11:36 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
Holy hell, did you write that? That was brilliant.[/b]

Thanks, and yes I did. Though nothing of it has been written down yet.
 

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Well done. Very nicely done, and great progression of sound. My only crit is in the end, it seemed a little sudden and abrupt. But, overall, my reaction is "Damn... wish I could do that."
 

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My comment there should say everything.
 

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Thanks for the support. If I keep getting positive feedback like this, I'll record more of my stuff.

And yeah, the ending isn' thow I wanted it to be...I'll have to work on it.
 

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That was really cool. You come up with that in your head? I just got done watching the boondock saints, and then I saw that... what a really cool mix. I thought the ending was fine, the sort of... twitchy pace was cool. Then again Im no music expert.
 

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Well done. Minus a few wrong notes (we all do that...lol) and yes, the ending was a bit abrupt, the piece was beautiful. How long have you played piano now? I'm a musician myself, but never really sat down at the piano before. I prefer my trumpet or guitar. :)
 

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Trumpet? Now that I didn't expect.

You'll have to wait for me to crit it next month, my internet is capped so I can't load youtube for shit.
 

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At first I wasn't sure if you were kidding or not, but the person in the video does look like you from what I can see. Because of that, it's great. Good job and record more.

<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Prometheus @ Aug 27 2007, 11:18 PM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
Tell me what you think of it. It may not seem like it, but I value this forum's opinion very highly.[/b]

Who are you and what have you done with Sin? :mellow:
 

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He has seen the light and has been reborn.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Brandon Rhea @ Aug 28 2007, 09:53 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
Who are you and what have you done with Sin? :mellow:[/b]
I know, what happened to the pube removing, Jedi eating monster that we've all come to love and fear?
 

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It was good and it sounded like it should be the opening scene of some movie.
 

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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(Dante @ Aug 28 2007, 05:16 AM) <{POST_SNAPBACK}></div>
I know, what happened to the pube removing, Jedi eating monster that we've all come to love and fear?[/b]

:rofl:
 

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I gotta hand it too you, Sin... that was great.
 

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I'll be honest here.

It wasn't what I expected, not from you at least. I opened it thinking hey, he must be playing a joke on somebody, at least thats what I expected from you. Maybe some heavy metal guitar riffs and stuff...

But then I hear Piano. Not saying it was bad or anything, just.. really unexpected lol.

So after the third listen, I agree with the above, it is good.
 
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