Museum of Sith history

[Maria]

Intent:
Provide a location for Maria hang out in as well as a provide a place for artifacts to be displayed for all to see.


Exhibits:
The hall of rancors
-a skeleton is of a bull rancor, upon which a famous Nightsister warrior rode to battle with Sith in a clash near Dathomir. Naturally she was handily defeated but her mighty beast deserves some mention in history so here it is.
Statue
- a monument to Levi and those who helped him make the first base
- A replica made on Lothal
Dioramas
-A scale model of the First Star Destroyer bombarding the Jedi Temple on Jedha (With a small footnote mocking the late Jedi Master Atreides

(Some Exhibits recommended on discord and suggestions are always appreciated)

 

[The Good Doctor]

Hey there. This isn't an official review or anything, but here is some feedback that you might find helpful, as I understand this is your first lore submission.

So, here and here are examples of user-made location lores that have been approved. Here is a total list of them. So, if you read those lore articles you will have a general idea about the standards required for a lore article and what one should look like.

This is pretty bare. So here are some ideas on how to expand this: Do you have a picture in mind of the Museum? What it looks like? A general idea of the lay out inside? Does it have a giftshop? .etc I know this was discussed on Discord that this would be on Droumund Kaas, but this article doesn't state what planet this Museum is on exactly. Also, when was this place established? Who built it? .etc .etc

Also. I'm pretty sure that the Mandalore's Mask wouldn't be in a museum, a real one anyway. I'm not sure if the article for that already lists it being somewhere but if not I'd suspect that it would be locked and hidden away if not lost and very difficult to recover. The Lore authorities can correct me on that.

If this is a work in progress, this should be in the Players Workshop. The submission boards are for finish products ready for review.

I'd also expand on the intent as well. Can you expand more on how this would benefit the roleplay on other than giving your character a place to hang out.

I hope this helps. Cheers

 

[Arcangel]

Unfortunately this does not meet the standards set in the lore rules and guidelines, as it lacks the necessary sections.

Also the Mask of Mand'alor the first would not be in a Sith museum.

I'm moving this to the workshops until you flesh it out and fill out all the necessary sections.

@Maria