Ms. Fortune

[Darkwasp]

Affiliation:
Independent
Ownership:
Bahati-Rehn
Intent:
A personal Smuggling Vessel that allows her to use her mechanical abilities to fix her up, and essentially have it level up with her.​

Miss Fortune

MODEL:	Unknown	LAVPK-9
LENGTH:	47 meters	47 meters
HEIGHT:	18 meters	18 meters

[tr2][th] Version: [/th][th] Current [/th][th] Top Condition/Truth [/th][/tr2]

[tr2][td] NAME: [/td][td]Ms Fortune[/td][td]Silent Retribution[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] WIDTH: [/td][td]26 meters[/td][td]26 meters[/td][/tr2]

[tr2][td] CLASS: [/td][td]Light Freighter[/td][td]Light Assault Vessel[/td][/tr2]
[tr2][td] Optimal Crew Compliment: [/td][td]2 (1 Pilot, 1 Co-Pilot), Optimum 7 (1 Pilot, 1 Co-Pilot, 2 Weapon’s Operators, 1 Engineer, 2 Maintenance Droids)[/td][td]4 (1 Pilot, A.N.A system is capable of handling the other systems, 1 Engineer, 2 Maintenance Droids)[/td][/tr2]
[tr2][td] ARMAMENT: [/td][td]200 metric tons of Cargo, 6 Civilian Passengers Comfortable + Comfortable Crew Quarters
Fixed Laser Cannons (3 – 2 forward 1 rear), Ventral Ion Cannon Turret (1), Ventral Rapid Fire Surface-Defense Anti-Personnel Blaster Cannon (1)


Combat Sensor Suite, Advanced Navigation System, Sensor Scrambler/Jammer suite, Military Grade Shielding, Escape Pods (4), Multi-Directional Chaff Dispenser (4)[/td][td]2 Squads (16-24 soldiers) or 2 heavy tanks, 6 Officers Quarters + Crew Quarters

Heavy Laser Cannons (2), Fixed Laser Cannons (3 – 2 forward 1 rear), Ventral Ion Cannon Turret (1), Ventral Rapid Fire Surface-Defense Anti-Personnel Blaster Cannon (1), Concussion Missile Launchers (2) [4 concussion missiles each]


Combat Sensor Suite, Advanced Navigation System, Sensor Scrambler/Jammer suite, Military Grade Shielding, Escape Pods (4), Multi-Directional Chaff Dispenser (4), Silent Flight Repulsor System, Ultra-Advanced A.I. (A.N.A (Advanced Navigation and Armament System))[/td][/tr2]
[tr2][td] SPEED: [/td][td]45 MGLT[/td][td]80 MGLT[/td][/tr2]
[tr2][td] HYPERDRIVE RATING: [/td][td]2.5, Backup Class 10[/td][td]1.5, Backup Class - 10[/td][/tr2]
[tr2][td] MANUEVERABILITY: [/td][td]Decent Maneuverability[/td][td]High Maneuverability[/td][/tr2]

Description:
This ancient craft had been sitting in a ship graveyard on Coruscant for several millennium, before a young smuggler purchased the junked ship. That young smuggler was Bahati's great grandfather. No one knows for sure who the original designers of the craft are; only that the craft is ancient, and seems to have amazing potential once it is at full capacity.

With a good portion of the systems locked and Bahati only able to eek 20% power from the drained power source, the ship is barely flying, let alone being in top condition. Until she fixes the ship up, she has to deal with spontaneous rebooting systems, and shields that only function when the weapons systems are disabled.

The original craft, LAVPK-9 Silent Retribution, was created by an extremist group that wanted to strike against their foes for their arrogance and tampering. The group was discovered and stopped before they were able to amass a fleet and support to make their attack. Only 4 of the vessels were ever completed, and only one is known to still be in existence.

All of the ships, designed by the Extremist group, were specially engineered to look, and be scanned as, civilian vessels. The ship’s weaponry is concealed within hidden bays within the ship, and only registers when they are extended and powered up. The Advance Navigation and Armament (Ana) system that was installed into craft by the original creators, appears to be an advance AI, rarely seen in this time period. Ana can handle most of the ships systems and can offer advice for the crew, but she can only follow the orders given to her. Unfortunately ANA is one of the hidden systems that are locked away until the ship is nearly fully functional.

*Ana was developed be me, Darkwasp, so that Bahati could fly her ship without a large crew. The secondary purpose is the Ana is to be Bahati’s Chewbacca, someone to talk to and argue with.

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[Reya Starlyght]

Light freighter? More like heavy. This looks more like a military ship than anything else.

 

[Darkwasp]

Light freighter? More like heavy. This looks more like a military ship than anything else.

It's size and use classifies it as a light freighter. If you read the description; it was at one point a military vessel (but that was a long time ago). My character would have A LOT of work to do in order to get it to the functionality that it was originally intended. And that is, of course, if she wants it to function in the way that it was intended.

 

[Reya Starlyght]

It's size and use classifies it as a light freighter. If you read the description; it was at one point a military vessel (but that was a long time ago). My character would have A LOT of work to do in order to get it to the functionality that it was originally intended. And that is, of course, if she wants it to function in the way that it was intended.

If this ship were to be fixed fully, it would be wasaaaay too overpowered. 80 MGLT a with that many guns? More like 30 or 40 considering the tech for this timeline. And forget about the high manuverbility with that many weapons plus that good of hyperdrive. And no, this is not the size of a light freighter. A light freighter is around 30-50 meters, or at least compared to other tech this timeline. Use doesn't classify a ship.

 

[Darkwasp]

If this ship were to be fixed fully, it would be wasaaaay too overpowered. 80 MGLT a with that many guns? More like 30 or 40 considering the tech for this timeline. And forget about the high manuverbility with that many weapons plus that good of hyperdrive. And no, this is not the size of a light freighter. A light freighter is around 30-50 meters, or at least compared to other tech this timeline. Use doesn't classify a ship.

Hmmm... I used the Anaxes War College System, plus existing Light Freighters to help determine the appropriate size (One Example: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/XS_stock_light_freighter). I will most likely have to adjust the speed and weaponry to more closely fit this timeline. You seem to be knowledgeable about this timeline's speeds and weaponry, so I am open to hear your suggestions.

 

[Talon maara]

Hmmm... I used the Anaxes War College System, plus existing Light Freighters to help determine the appropriate size (One Example: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/XS_stock_light_freighter). I will most likely have to adjust the speed and weaponry to more closely fit this timeline. You seem to be knowledgeable about this timeline's speeds and weaponry, so I am open to hear your suggestions.

Thats system is what this site uses.

 

[Kiro]

Hey Wasp.

There's not a lot of issues I see here, to be honest. The speed isn't too horrible, even with the amount of guns. But using the XS is a bad idea, as it's from the horribly broken and contradictionary, now non-canon, Legends lore from three different video games, one of them being an MMO. You'd be better off basing it off of the Falcon, or my own Sunskimmer.

The hyperdrive will have to be knocked back some though. 0.5 is way too advanced for this timeline.

 

[Reya Starlyght]

Alright fair enough of the Light Freighter. I will say I am nowhere near the best voice on tech, but I'll try to help you.

Now, you're going to have to either settle for speed or weaponry. If you want speed, I would recommend you keeping the speed and dropping the guns down to two quad cannons and 2 heavy cannons. Even less would be better. And up the hyperdrive to 2.

If you want guns, drop the speed to 30 MGLT and get rid of the the defense blaster, torpedos and ion mine things. Those are stuff for capital ships I believe. Also, lower the amount of heavy cannons and decrease the manuvuerbility, a lot.

Since this is a light freighter, I would recommend going with the first option, but it's up to you. @Clayton might nitpick this more, but you'll have to see.

 

[Darkwasp]

Thats system is what this site uses.

Thank you for the affirmation. It's been awhile, but I was pretty sure that was the reference that the site uses.

Hey Wasp.

There's not a lot of issues I see here, to be honest. The speed isn't too horrible, even with the amount of guns. But using the XS is a bad idea, as it's from the horribly broken and contradictionary, now non-canon, Legends lore from three different video games, one of them being an MMO. You'd be better off basing it off of the Falcon, or my own Sunskimmer.

The hyperdrive will have to be knocked back some though. 0.5 is way too advanced for this timeline.

I'll shrink it down, so that it isn't too over sized. I'll definitely have to reduce the cargo size to match. What is a good number for Hyperdrive speeds (3 and 2 (fully functional) or can I squeeze (2.5 and 1(fully functional out of it)?

Alright fair enough of the Light Freighter. I will say I am nowhere near the best voice on tech, but I'll try to help you.

Now, you're going to have to either settle for speed or weaponry. If you want speed, I would recommend you keeping the speed and dropping the guns down to two quad cannons and 2 heavy cannons. Even less would be better. And up the hyperdrive to 2.

If you want guns, drop the speed to 30 MGLT and get rid of the the defense blaster, torpedos and ion mine things. Those are stuff for capital ships I believe. Also, lower the amount of heavy cannons and decrease the manuvuerbility, a lot.

Since this is a light freighter, I would recommend going with the first option, but it's up to you. @Clayton might nitpick this more, but you'll have to see.

If/When I reduce the size, I'll probably have to drop (or reduce the amount of) the Ion Mines. They were originally planned for used for making quick escapes. I know that several small craft had Ion Cannons (such as Y-Wings and B-Wings), but I am uncertain if they have been reduced in size that much in this time period. I'll wait for Clayton before I definitely remove them. I think that you have the defense blaster confused with something else. It is the basic description of the Millennium Falcon's

• BlasTech Ax-108 "Ground Buzzer" blaster cannon[1]

Thank you everyone for your input so far.

 

[Darkwasp]

Reduced Length: 73 meters to 47 meters
Reduced Width: 57 meters to 25 meters
Reduced Height: 22 meters to 18 meters
Hyperdrive Rating Reduced: 1.5 to 2.5 and 0.5 to 1.5
Removed 2 Heavy Laser Cannons (from 4 to 2) per member request
Reduced Cargo Space from 1000 Metric Tons to 200 Metric Tons (to reflect size change)
Reduced Military/Original version's: Troop/mechanized infantry (to reflect size change)
Removed Ion Mines (to reflect size change)

Ready for second review.

 

[Bigfatpenn]

Wow that's an awesome ship, I want one. <3

 

[Kiro]

Looks good, Wasp!

 

[Outlander]

Reduced Length: 73 meters to 47 meters
Reduced Width: 57 meters to 25 meters
Reduced Height: 22 meters to 18 meters
Hyperdrive Rating Reduced: 1.5 to 2.5 and 0.5 to 1.5
Removed 2 Heavy Laser Cannons (from 4 to 2) per member request
Reduced Cargo Space from 1000 Metric Tons to 200 Metric Tons (to reflect size change)
Reduced Military/Original version's: Troop/mechanized infantry (to reflect size change)
Removed Ion Mines (to reflect size change)

Ready for second review.

Something i'd just like to point out is not only the quality of your ship, but the somewhat exemplary attitude you've taken to member feedback with not only accepting critique from your fellow members, but actually providing a log of what you changed and why. It's all pretty stellar.

 

[Sammothy]

Correct me for being wrong but isn't Miss and Ms. different?

 

[Darkwasp]

Looks good, Wasp!

Thank you! :D

Something i'd just like to point out is not only the quality of your ship, but the somewhat exemplary attitude you've taken to member feedback with not only accepting critique from your fellow members, but actually providing a log of what you changed and why. It's all pretty stellar.

Thank you very much for the compliment. :)

Correct me for being wrong but isn't Miss and Ms. different?

Whoops! They aren't really different; Ms. is the abbreviation for Miss, but I wanted to get rid of the obviousness of Missing Fortune and Misfortune in the name by just looking at it. Thank you for the catch. (Miss Changed to Ms in the table)

 

[Sammothy]

Looks really good though, well done on it

 

[Talon maara]

I actually like this. Pretty legit hope it approves

 

[Darkwasp]

This should be ready for final Admin review whenever you have the time @Clayton .

 

[Sammothy]

This should be ready for final Admin review whenever you have the time @Clayton .

Good luck

 

[Kiro]