Monica Stott

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NAME: Monica Stott
FACTION: Jedi Order
RANK: Padawan
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 13
GENDER: Female
HEIGHT: 4'9"
WEIGHT: 98 pounds
EYES: Hazel
HAIR: Dark, straight brown hair to her mid back.
SKIN: White/Tan
CREDITS: 1000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: 4/10 - Not very good, still being a young woman, she doesn't possess much muscle mass. But, this doesn't limit her in her fighting.
DEXTERITY: 9/10 - Very good, being small and thin allows her to move quickly and agilely, making her an ideal scout.
CONSTITUTION: 6/10 - Medium, being very thin and small, she doesn't possess a lot of mass to absorb hits. She must rely on her excellent dexterity to keep her in line.
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10 - Very good, Monica is a quick thinker and can initiate plans easily. She is very strategical.
WISDOM: 4/10 - Being rather young, she doesn't have much wisdom.
CHARISMA: 4/10 - She is rather shy, and does not like to speak that much. She blushes when people she doesn't know talks to her.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Push
Force Pull
Telekinesis

SKILLS:

Agility: Very agile

Tennjutsu: Very skilled in the art of fans.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None at the moment.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Monica is very agile, and possesses a responsible head on her shoulders. She knows how to take care of herself, and can initiate strategies efficiently. However, she does not possess the ability to talk well in front of crowds, in fact, it scares her- She has much to learn about speaking. Monica also doesn't possess much strength, she cannot heavy things very well, without assistance.

GEAR:
CLOTHES:
Normal: Monica wears what is pictured above.

Formal: Monica wears a long, Chinese-like dress. It's white, and has a red rose on a green fine on her right side. She wears white flip flops as well, and wears her hair down, and curled. .

WEAPONS:

Fans: Black, metal fans with blades on either side, so they work like swords.

SHIP:
None.

PETS:
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Attack Stohl
Name: Lady
Personality: Fierce and loyal

PERSONALITY:
Monica is a timid, athletic girl. She possesses fans as a limited self defense when she doesn't have something effective, like a light saber. She enjoys formulating strategies and playing strategical games which exercise her mind. Monica is very confident when it comes to her brain, but it reluctant to get into a fight. Her pet does most of that for her, luckily. Monica hates when people prove her wrong, or when they insult her, or others.

BIOGRAPHY:
Monica was born in a small ship no where in particular. Somewhere deep in space, her parents were landed in Coruscant several hours later. There, her birth certificate was signed, before Monica was dropped off at an orphanage. Her parents leaving, Monica had to live her life quietly. She was constantly picked on by older girls, and she always wanted to be able to handle herself. It was then that she was able to take self defense classes, where she took a liking to the fan.

As she trained in the art of fans, she turned thirteen. It was then she was thrown out of the orphanage to make room. Still being a timid girl, Monica wandered- And then her father returned. He took her back in, to an apartment in Coruscant, and bought Monica a birthday present- An attack stohl, that she named "Lady". Her father began to talk to her about Jedis, and the Republic, and eventually got Monica so excited to be a Jedi, she decided to become one.

It was then that she found a specific Jedi to help her. She is now training with him.

KILLS:
-

DUELING RING MATCHES:
-

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
-

ROLE-PLAYS:
1st Training (Dead)
 
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Woah, you managed to describe your character exactly how the template told you to. O:

Most people, it seems, go for the fifty word minimum and call it a profile nowadays. Nice to see some effort. /props
 

Samara

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I liked the char, its normal, not overpowered, does not have problems or suspicious things. I like the story, Anner comes from an orphanage too.

Welcome aboard!
 

Jerek Odres

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It is indeed good, but I recommend fifteen or sixteen for Padawan. You will understand when you become a knight then master, why I say this.
 

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Yeah... that doesn't matter at all. You can age your char after training, if you want, so starting age has absolutely no relevance other than personal preference.
 

Jerek Odres

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Yeah... that doesn't matter at all. You can age your char after training, if you want, so starting age has absolutely no relevance other than personal preference.

That doesn't relate to why I said what I said, but okay, nvm.
 

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Pokakaa, enough. Just let it die and walk away maturely rather than rising to the obvious bait.

Horizon, cut it out already. You are baiting him just to see everyone else bash him. It stopped being amusing after the first time.
 

Horizon

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Pokakaa, enough. Just let it die and walk away maturely rather than rising to the obvious bait.

Horizon, cut it out already. You are baiting him just to see everyone else bash him. It stopped being amusing after the first time.

As you wish sir. :CScool
 

Jerek Odres

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Horizon, cut it out already. You are baiting him just to see everyone else bash him. It stopped being amusing after the first time.

He got you there. I however was able to find amusement a second time.

All in all though, this is a rather good character. I regret that I have three Padawans, as I would have liked to train Monica. However due to the fact I have already raised my apprentice cap once, I'm not doing it again. Good luck in your training. Who knows, I may just find room if I finish one of these three. Two of them aren't really posting and are about to get the boot anyway.

:bitchez
 

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Thanks for the comments~ As stated early, I'm not really good at biographies, and my lack of major knowledge for Star Wars led to me reading a bit of the wikia. o.o
 

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Thanks for the comments~ As stated early, I'm not really good at biographies, and my lack of major knowledge for Star Wars led to me reading a bit of the wikia. o.o

It is awesome. :CHappy

Really believable.
 

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Alright, I made a minor update with the picture. I'll make a larger one when she gets training clothes.
 
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