Mirak Licnev

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NAME: Mirak Licnev
FACTION: N/A
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Similar to Human
AGE: 22
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6'8
WEIGHT: 224
EYES: Forest Green
HAIR: Forest Green
SKIN: Dark Brown
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Six large cuts on his face. three left slant, three slant right. A marking in the center of his forehead
DOMINATE HAND: Ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Mirak is strong enough to carry up to eight hundred pounds
DEXTERITY: Light on his feet and able to maintain a 16 mph running speed
CONSTITUTION: Mirak is highly resistant to most poisons and withstands pain well
INTELLIGENCE: Mirak knows very little aside from combat and machines. He is only able to speak basic and understand binary.
WISDOM: High sensitivity to the Force enables him to tell when the Force and those sensitive to it are nearby.
CHARISMA: The scars on his face cause many people to run at the mere sight of him, preventing him from being social.

FORCE POWERS:
Force Speed, Force Cloak, Telepathy, Telekinesis, Force Item

SKILLS:
Mirak is able to interact with any electronic/mechanical device and modify however he wishes. Also a very stealthy individual, Mirak is able to hide in nearly any shadow.

Weaknesses:
His undying need to protect others sometime places him in very dangerous situations. Mirak sees through the Force and is unable to see any distinguishing quality of a living being outside of an image, because of this his combat reaction time is slower than most. Mirak refuses to use weapons, believing it is better to defeat a foe with your own strength, not with tools.
Strengths:
Extensive stealth and combat training. He is also a highly skilled mechanic. Due to his High sensitivity to The Force, Mirak has the ability to see how The Force move through someone when they activate a power and commit it to memory, in essence learning the basis of that power.

GEAR:
Mirak carries no weapons or devices of any kind. He wears black loose fitting pants, a Dallorian alloy mesh, hooded vest and a pair of Force attuned gloves, given to him by a Miralukan Force Master. These gloves, augmented through The Force, can withstand lightsaber strikes.

SHIP:
Mirak pilots a self-modified fighter-class ship.

PERSONALITY:
Mirak is a seemingly dark person, due to the loss of he fiance. Further examination will reveal that his "dark" nature is simply a deep rooted need to protect those who are unable to protect themselves. If aware of any being stronger than himself (to protect those who could be harmed by that being in the future) he will strive endlessly to reach, if not surpass, that being.

HISTORY:
Mirak Licnev is from a planet behind The Veil, in the Abron system. The youngest son of a great soldier, his people are an combative race, similar to Humans in physiology. From a young age, they are taught various combat styles both unarmed and armed. As a child Mirak was tormented for his lack of combat prowess due to his impaired vision, after overcoming this inborn setback, he vowed to make it so no one could ever say he wasn't strong enough to do anything ever again. Training relentlessly and carrying out orders without fail, he truly believed he was helping people. At which point, he developed a 'need' to protect others. After years of extensive and strenuous training, Mirak was ranked no. 2 in the military.

He met his future fiance after blacking out during a mission. She calmed his spirit and showed him that there was more to life than fighting and following orders. He left the military to make a family, only to have it ripped away, when his village fell victim to a surprise attack from the enemy. Devastated by the death of his fiance and the destruction of his village, Mirak discovered a military official gave away the village's secret location. In an attempt to confront the man responsible, it was revealed that his village was a failed peace offering to the enemy. Outraged by the betrayal Mirak destroyed the branch that made the plan, and the officials who signed off on it. Afterward he departed his homeworld to find a way to return his love to life.

Upon crossing The Veil, he had to make an emergency landing on the Miralukan homeworld of Alpheridies. There he was greeted by Mako Aluria, a high ranking official. To Mirak's surprise, the people of Alpheridies welcomed him with open arms and after only a few minutes of conversation it was apparent that he knew nothing of this Galactic Republic or the Force. The Mako offered to house Mirak while he learned what the Force was, how it worked, and how to use it. While learning he showed promise and gained a few allies. Knowing he would need assistance, Mako gave him an astromech droid, built specifically for him, to assist him on his journey. After two months, he had learned enough to use minor powers. Knowing that this was merely the tip of the iceberg, Mirak felt a rush that he hadn't felt in a while. He was again determined to be the best. He headed into the more isolated regions of the planet to train and hone his skills with the Force.

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Eiji

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Please tell me this character will never enter the grand tournament. I don't think God is a race on swrp regardless.
 

Galykia

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Superman wasnt in star wars, wtf are you thinking about.
 

Jabberwocky

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Please tell me this character will never enter the grand tournament. I don't think God is a race on swrp regardless.

Right now this character won't go anywhere.
 

Cailst

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The outer rim hasn't been discovered yet. Right now, the expansion zone is the furthest out.

Also, for an initial character, you need to decrease the amount of force powers.
 

Jaqen H'ghar

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No you just need to scrap this character and start over. No. Really.
 

Venom

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Ive seen stronger on the site.
 

Rev

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Can I ask who?

Can't say I've ever seen someone capable of stopping a compression door from closing. Let alone being able to peel it open with their bare hands. Lightsabers can barely cut through them in the NJO.
 

Venom

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Oblivion, last timeline. He had indestructable armor, which was immune to everything. It also had magical crystals in it which atuo healed him, and made him the strongest being in the universe.
 

Cailst

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Can I ask who?

Can't say I've ever seen someone capable of stopping a compression door from closing. Let alone being able to peel it open with their bare hands. Lightsabers can barely cut through them in the NJO.

Initially, I thought he was talking about automatic doors that you might see in Walmart.
 

Incubi Priest

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This character will never be allowed. Normally, I'd offer constructive criticism, but I don't really have time to write a novel here, so I offer one friendly tip that you need to follow:

READ THE ****ING RULES AND GUIDELINES
 

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My God... This... Is...

And I'm RPing with this dude in a thread, I really had no idea. I should've checked this profile earlier...

...

Talking about overpowered characters...
 

Incubi Priest

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Quit rping with him Dark, lol, I mean just look at the profile. Tell him to come back and read his character's profile.
 
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