Menkio Nonomyth's Bogan Training(Dark Cloud my master)

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He looked at his master then, sighed slowly bringing his hand up he slowly then closed his eyes focusing his aura force will through his body into his hand and then opened his eyes letting out a black force lighting it was rather strange that it was a color black rare also maybe or not his rage was building up in him, each sec the lighting struck the tree burning it in some what blackish flames. He slowly released the lighting looking at his master he slowly as Him a weird and dumb question."Did I do it"He asked slowly.
 

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"Yes..." Choray said. "You did it. You casted Force Lightning succesfully. Now you will follow me again,"

The Zabrak was impressed again, although he didn't really show it. Menkio was able to cast a powerful blast of Lightning that completely destroyed the tree. Choray didn't expect Menkio to be able to do it.

Choray walked over to a large field. It was terribly cold outside and the whole atmosphere was dark, maybe even evil. The Dark Side was ruling the place.

He didn't even turn around to face Menkio when he said: "There are a few more powers I will teach you, acolyte, but I want you to tell me before we move on," He paused and now he turned around. There was an evil look in his eyes and his looks would frighten most people. "Do you think you can handle this all? Do you think you can handle the Dark Side, the Tool, the dignity and discipline of a Crusader of the Bogan? Do YOU, Menkio Nonomyth, think you are ready to step into the death defying quest I will give you?"​
 

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As he casted the force lighting he looked at him as he slowly nodded in a small evil grin he followed his master only sensing dark presents as he slowly would nod As he listened towards his master he slowly sighed and then said slowly"Yes I am"He said slowly"I am Able to take all this"He said.
 

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Choray laughed. "We'll see, acolyte... We'll see..." He said.

"Before I send you into Hell, you need one more power and something else to survive. We will first begin with the power, which is Force Grip,"

Choray turned around again and led his apprentice through the field all the way to a bridge they could use to cross the gap and head back to the temple. He led his apprentice back to the training room where another Crusader waited. This one was a human, clad in full armor. He greeted Choray when the Zabrak entered and Choray said to Menkio:

"This Crusader will help you learn Force Grip. He is a trained warrior and he knows how to survive. I want you to use Force Grip on him! I will tell you when to stop, so don't worry about this brave Crusader's health,"

"To use Force Grip you must call upon your anger and rage and unleash it. It's similar to Force Lightning. However, this time you command the Tool to choke this person instead of burning him with black lighting. If you think you can do it, you may try to choke this Crusader now."​
 

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Looking at his master he smiled as he would then slowly begin walking towards the temple while walking he slowly begun to say"Are there any Sub or supplement Powers you want me to Learn."he said slowly as they begun to walk towards the temple he slowly saw a human dark Jedi he bowed and looked at him he listened towards his master as he would then say"Don't worry about his heath Err?Alright thank you for allowing me to do what ever I want to him"He simply smiled a devilish evil grin fell on his hand angry and power beyond him he lifted his hand but struggled as the man begun to lift up towards the air as he was lifted his wind pipe begun to fasten close and then slowly begun to crush inch by inch looking at the fool that was about to get killed and foolish enough to be a freaking punching dummy. He begun to laugh evilly his hand still shaking but his power of rage and the force on the choke begun to harden fasten trying kill the man.
 

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It was then when Choray stepped forward and shouted: "Release!"

The Crusader then began using the Force to reflect this technique and dropped to the floor. He coughed as he fell to his knees and Choray walked over to him. He patted the human on the shoulder and sent him away, then turning to Menkio and saying: "Good. Very good. And now, we will do something else to prepare you for Hell!"

Choray's was so evil it was almost sickening. He walked towards the metal box and took the two training sabers out of the box again. He handed over one of the sabers to Menkio and said:

"Juyo. Number VII. The Way of the Vornskr, or The Ferocity Form. Can you tell me what this means?"​
 

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He smiled he was about to get a Weapon And once he was in hell There be hell Unleashed for good by this Menkio He slowly Said"This are forms But I do not know which to pick or know what hey the forms do."He said slowly.
 
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"In fact," Choray said. "These are all different names for the same lightsaber form. It is the form that most Dark Jedi practice. The form I've been taught. Watch carefully!"

Choray showed the basic moves of the saber form. After the demonstration he switched the training saber off and said to Menkio: "I have an assignment for you. It is not too hard. You will go to the archives and use the computers to find out anything about Form VII: Juyo. Go now, acolyte, and if you think you know enough about the Form return here and we will start practicing."​
 

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He slowly nodded but before going he said" When will we get a real mission"He asked and waited for an Answer.
 

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"I told you to go to the archives and study this form, did I not?" Choray said. He sounded a little annoyed.

"Go now, acolyte. Now is not the time for questions and queries!"​
 

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Slowly obeying his mastered he wondered slowly what lightsaber would he get or maybe create his own He liked the color red it worked well with the darkness in his mind of view he slowly opened the door and begun to move towards those knowledgeable things to read them as he moved he greeted the Dark jedi although they didn't look pleased he slowly wondered why.

As he went on he turned and opened the door he bowed slowly as he would then grab the forms list and begin reading simple knowledge about the form the form was a bit reckless he had a thought what if he can recreate the form into his own way. It would be a lot hard judging the the unbalance way it was used he stored the knowledge in his head in other words remembered about it and begun to exit as he did he would walk threw the halls wondering his own stuff he had questions but oh well.

Entering the training chambers he awaited his master if he was mediation he would wait till he stood up and asked him about what he had done. If not he would say slowly"Sir Will I get a saber like that to but red and also Do We have a leader of this Dark Jedi Bogan thing"He asked strongly with no fear he was just asking merely not trying to a fend anyone.
 

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Slowly Choray opened his eyes when Menkio returned to the training chamber. He titled his head a little and said: "Of course we have a leader! The Bogan is our leader. The true master of the Dark Side, the true ruler of the universe and the most fearsome man I've ever seen!"

Choray got on his feet. "You're greedy though. Nothing wrong with being greedy, but don't get too greedy. You will get your saber when the time comes, so be patient."

Then the Zabrak folded his hands behind his back and continued: "What did you learn in the archives? What do you know about Juyo?"​
 

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He smiled as he begun to Speak"The form is reckless in the unexperienced ones but if mastered it can be a powerful tool to greatness and power beyond the human or beings mind nevertheless it is a reckless form and if not used prolixly let's just say you'll die. But I want to remake this form and recreating my own using this style form."He told his master slowly."I can tell you more about this form if you want me too or I can stop"he paused slowly.
 

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"Your own form?" Choray laughed. "You could try, but you will fail miserably. Not even most of the master are able to create a new form. Maybe the Bogan can create a new form, but I'm not even sure about that,"

Choray grinned. Obviously Menkio didn't know what it would take to create a form of his own. The young one had to be a master of lightsaber combat, but even then it would be so complicated that he would most likely fail. No, Choray had absolutely no faith in his student creating a form of his own.

"Don't you want to learn Juyo? Is that it?" The zabrak asked.​

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((OOC: Sorry, but a 13 years old human cannot create a saberform. If you really want to go with this, ask an admin, but I don't think they will allow it... =/ ))
 

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He sighed slowly looking at his master he only had a small reply to make towards him "Yes I want to learn that form"he said slowly.

(OOC: I know Cloud I meant like later on in the future or you can say it's only a dream for him to make a form?)
 

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"Good," Choray said. "This form is useful and when used correct it will make you a killing machine. You will be able to win most duels a lot easier with this form. Watch carefully while I show you the moves, and then try to mimic the moves."

Choray walked towards a small chest that stood in one of the corners in the room and opened it. He took two training sabers from the chest and gave one of them to Menkio. Then he walked towards the center of the room and activated his own training saber. A red blade came to life and let the room.

Choray showed the moves and they would continue to do this until Menkio knew how to use Juyo, the seventh form.​
 

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Looking at his master as he grabbed one saber he then tossed to him he caught one of them looking at his master he looked at his one he was given."You want me to use one of this instead of two why's that master."He asked slowly trying to copy the movements his master did and did them at middle plats but with little skill.. When he did with no skill it meant he didn't try and the form looked sloppy.
 
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((OOC: No, I gave you one of the sabers, not both. Choray uses the other training saber to show the moves.))
 

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(OOC: Fixed i believe with some broken English.)
 

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((OOC: No problem ^^))
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"Because you're not going to use two," Choray answered. They continued to practice the moves and after many hours of practicing, Choray deactivated his training saber. He turned towards his student and said: "Do you have any more questions about this form?"​
 
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