Meant For More - Retroactive Plot

[Wolf]

Character Name and Level: Ayasha Waya Level 2
Character Rank: Currently - Jedi Knight, during the plot she was a Jedi Hopeful.
Name of Plot: Meant For More
Participants in the plot (Character accounts): @Ayasha Waya @Crix Dolan @Kae'Leigh Tameris @Vuthari
Intended Outcome of Plot: To have Ayasha journey from Galtea and have her be discovered by a Jedi Master who would take her as a padawan.
Actual Outcome of Plot: Ayasha was taken from Galtea to Kashyyyk where she met Jedi Master Vu'thari and became a padawan.
Any PVP or Staff DMing involved?: No.
Link to Dice Roll Thread if used: N/A
Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:

Spoiler: Relevant Threads

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  When Fate Lends a Hand
  
  
  Ayasha falls asleep on a smuggler's ship thinking it is a cave. The Force sensitive smuggler is on his way to Kashyyyk to meet with a Jedi Master named Vu'thari and now Ayasha is along for the ride.
  
  
  The Path Less Traveled
  
  
  Ayasha ends up on Kashyyyk where she meets Jedi Master Vu'thari and has an experience at the Life Tree. It is there that her future is revealed not only to her, but the the Jedi Master as well. She was meant to become a Jedi.
  
  
  Smuggler's Blues
  
  
  Ayasha returns to Crix Dolan's ship with Vu'thari to see if the man would be joining them to discover if the word “padawan” was something he wanted to know more about. Crix declined to accompany them so Vu'thari invited Ayasha to journey with him to Tatooine to explore her future.
  
  
  Primitive Means
  
  
  Ayasha joins Jedi Master Vu'thari on Tatooine where he teaches her about the way of the Jedi Code and tests some of her abilities. It is here that he names her as one of his padawans.

 

[Deviant]

Hi there, @Wolf!

Don't take this to heart, and no hard feelings, but there are glaring issues with this plot. For one, this was never submitted for review, only as a retroactive completion (which is allowed, but not suggested). For two, three out of four of the threads you linked have already been used in the plot here.

Allow me to elaborate. We welcome overlapping threads, and they are perfectly allowed if they manage to fit into two different plots. However, your plot and the one submitted by @Mithias aren't very different. With his, he finds Jedi to train. With yours, you find a Jedi to learn from. It's the same thing, just different wording.

The other issue is the fact that 3/4 of your plot were threads already used. To put it into perspective, 75% of this plot is recycled. Right now, there's no limit on how many threads you can overlap with a plot, but when it essentially composes the entire plot? That gets questionable. This plot contributes only a single thread. One that should have been submitted along with the plot by Mithias, but I understand that it went too slowly and therefore could not join in time.

I'm sure you might have missed the other plot Mithias submitted though and wanted to cash what was presumably not used yet, so no problem. However, going to have to reject this. Sorry!

 

[Wolf]

@Deviant ,

No worries, after posting he had reminded me that he had posted essentially the same thing. I am still learning though and completely missed the fact that there was such an overlap. Things during this timeline are so very different from when I left after the 5th timeline and it's taking me a lot of getting used to! I did attempt to delete this submission after speaking with Mithias about it, but the site would not allow me to. I apologize for wasting your time and essentially, making a fool of myself. Thank you all the same.