Under Review Me, You & Naboo

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What is going to happen in your plot?
Atuu Skirata and a band of trusted other Mandalorians, are traveling to Naboo in an effort to relieve the royal palace of a ship. Doing their best to minimize casualties on their journey to gather the needed materials to pull the wool over the eyes of the guards at the hangar. Ideally taking a ship right from under the noses of the (Nabooians?).

What other writers (and their characters) will be a part of this?
@Rimrald
@KinkyPrawn
@Rebel Trooper
@FinnSimmons

Where are all the locations in which your plot will take place?
Naboo, Theed Royal Palace Hangar & Theed Royal Palace.

Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen. Include opposition type for each thread:
[*] Do You Have That In A Small? - Disguises are the foremost concern for something this high profile, so the gang is going to split up and attempt to get their hands on uniforms like guards attire, pilots uniforms and regal clothing for the women to pose as diplomats of the court in order to move about the palace grounds with some discretion. (Dice)

[*] Can You Hear Me Now? - While half of the team is attempting the get some clothing in order the other half will be laying explosives in the cover of night to create a distraction near the palace, staged like an accidental power-overload or a modulator failure on the communications relay as to divert any extra personnel from the hangars on the other side of the city. If all goes to plan they will have a distraction in place for when the plan is ready to launch. (Dice)

[*] Everything's Coming Up Sheev - Once part one and two are completed the gang will regroup and get in to costume before making their move on the hangars in order to track down which hangar the J-Type is in and make their way to the craft while minimizing contact with the palace guards and avoiding detection too early. (Dice)

[*} Out With A Bang - Time to trigger the distraction and get on board the ship, one or both of the pilots in the crew will need to slice in to the ships security system and disable the tracking so that they can make an escape without too much residual heat. During that time the rest of the crew will need to keep the palace guard occupied or off of the ship (Depending on the outcome of the 3rd thread). Once sliced the crew can make their escape with the ship. (Dice)

What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game?” Link any items you’re seeking if applicable.
The main end-goal is to form trust and relations between the various mandalorian.
Second goal is tech for the individuals participating and a mobile home base for Atuu & his new Mando friends.

Rimrald (@Atuu Skirata) - J-Type Diplomatic Barge
KinkyPrawn (@Arden Kryze)
Rebel Trooper (@Skudru Vizsla)
FinnSimmons (@Kar Darakis)

Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose.
If the staff deems that a canon NPC needs to be involved or some heavy involvement from the staff due to the nature of the plot, then yes.
 
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These plots submissions should really be fully completed and have no "To Be Determined" sections when they are submitted. I can tell you that you are not going to be able to get seven different pieces of advanced tech from a plot that is solely based on stealing a ship.

If the plot is to steal a ship, then a ship is the primary reward. Perhaps with really good justification, there could be a discussion of some additional items but they would be limited and have to align with the story. It wouldn't be enough to cover seven people.

Keep in mind that also in tech and character plots EVERY member of the plot usually takes part in every thread which further adds to the time commitment. If one person doesn't post for awhile and then another person, multiply this by the number of threads and you have a plot that takes 3 IRL months to finish (if not longer). Keep that in mind when you writing a plot.

These threads also need to be opposable but with loading this many people in threads it would be next to impossible.

Tech plots are a primary method to get Advanced Technology but they are still story based and not just a "quick grind" to nab some AT.
 

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I had no intention of doing this like a quick grind for tech, if you would like I can drop the number of people in this plot down and make it solely the ship as the end goal.

Would 5 people be acceptable?
 

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Nubians are from Nubia. ;-)

You're question on discord "Can threads still be done at the same time or do they need to be done sequentially?" I want to answer where others can see it sense this is one of the noticeable changes in staff outlook . Threads that rely on other threads being completed first must be done after said threads are completed before beginning the next one. Do You Have That In a Small and Can You Hear Me Now? Can be done simultaniously. However Everything's Coming Up Sheev must wait until the previous two threads are done before it can begin. The same goes for Out With a Bang.

5 is still towards the larger group size and I still suggest having a smaller group, maybe a total of 4 since you have the whole "split up" idea and need partners for people.
 

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I will trim it down to 4 people!

Also yes that makes perfect sense with the timing.

(Side note can't edit the OP while it has the under review tag.)

New Roster: Rimrald, Kinky Prawn, FinnSimmons & Rebel Trooper
 
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I will trim it down to 4 people!

Also yes that makes perfect sense with the timing.

(Side note can't edit the OP while it has the under review tag.)

New Roster: Rimrald, Kinky Prawn, FinnSimmons & Rebel Trooper
There was a little glitch with editing posts when certain prefixes are in use. It should be fixed now.

Make sure you don't link just OOC accounts but either the sub account or the character profile of the users in the 2nd section

Make sure you update to the reward section too. Also I would like you to expand on what you mean by "underworld contacts" Are these underworld contacts the other PCs that are participating in this plot or are you talking about some NPC organization or influence?
 

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With the downsizing of the team the 5S characters have been removed and the wording has been changed accordingly.

Should this plot also be open to opposition with the final thread or any of the threads being made to do so? Or is this otherwise looking kosher!
 
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