Maddison Blackwood

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NAME: Maddison Blackwood
NICKNAMES: Maddy, Addy, Addison, M.B
FACTION: Jedi Knights
RANK: Jedi Knight
HOMEWORLD: Corellia
FORCE-SENSITIVE: Yes

SPECIES: Human
GENDER: Female
AGE: 26
HEIGHT: 6'1"
WEIGHT: 135lbs

Personality
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A young woman coming from her home world of Corellia, Maddison is a Jedi Knight who works to keep balance and order to the force. She is very serious at times, but is cool and calm in frustrating situations, generally being the one to distinguish problems as they come. But then again, she has some attitude as she can be sassy and says things as they are.

At a first look, Maddison looks like a fun and bubbly girl, but on the inside, she suffers from her past, using being a Jedi to be her only buffer of being someone of actual use. Otherwise, she thinks that she is no use and a troublemaker, so she generally keeps to herself, keeping her true identity hidden, worried that she'll hurt more people than she intends to.

Maddison is kind and a little quiet when it comes to new people, including with others she knows. She is just naturally quiet and forgiving. She tends to use meditating as her last resort if she ever feels insecure. There will even be times that she just wants to be alone and she goes into her room trying to find who she truly is and not who her past is portraying her to be.

Maddison has a great sense for adventure, when she's not in a depressed mood. When she was younger, she was always searching for trouble, which caused her to hurt someone one day and it got her into really serious trouble. Now, she keeps to herself and has quiet down much from what she used to be. She never was one for talking much, but now she rarely talks, but she still follows the Jedi code.
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Skills and Appearance
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    • Acrobatics - Adept - Maddison finds great interest in this activity and is constantly practicing finding that it is quite enjoyable for her.
    • Martial Arts - Advanced - Martial Arts is how she found out about Acrobatics and hones great ability in both.
Lightsaber Combat:



    • Form IV: Ataru - Advanced - Being her favorite form of fighting, she is able to mix acrobatics and martial arts all into one form.
    • Form V: Djem So - Adept - Being her second favorite form, she uses two sabers and is excelling in using them in a backhand form.
Force Abilities:



    • Force Heal - Advanced - Maddison is a master when it comes to healing. She has learned to conserve energy while also regenerating and producing it into her patient.
    • Force Sense - Advanced - A skill she immediately took to and mastered when she started learning about Force Sense.
    • Force Push/Pull - Adept - While not being the easiest to learn, she found it useful and fun at times.
    • Force Grip/Telekinesis - Adept - While Telekinesis is one she holds high with Force Sense, it comes to her easily unlike a force grip.
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Maddison stands at six foot one and has a skinny frame, but very fit, giving her an advantage in martial arts. Her skin is white, she has long blonde hair and bright blue eyes.

Maddison usually wears utilitarian clothing and doesn't like to dress up. On Jedi temple worlds, she sports her traditional robes.

Maddison is a skill acrobat and prefers speed and ability when it comes to combat. As a Knight, Maddison is skilled in the force and combat training.
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Biography
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Maddison was born to parents she never knew or heard of. After her parents had her, fear consumed them when a bounty hunter blew their door down. Luckily, her parents managed to hide in enough time to be able to get their baby girl out of the place and get her to an orphanage, but it was off world on Lothal. Her parents were being hunted, because they were Jedi and pirates and bounty hunters didn't take too kindly to them. In time, these bounty hunters and pirates captured her parents and eventually killed them off.

At the age of three, Maddison was bullied by the other kids. She never understood why, but she soon found that she had an ability, one that the others didn't possess. She had the force. When administrators of the orphanage found out her abilities, they argued for days about what they should do with her. Three years later, after Maddison had been bullied by the girls in her area, she finally had had enough of it and lashed out through the force. Accidentally force pushing one of the girls back, she screamed at her telling her that she'd had enough. An administrator had found out about what happened and immediately took her to a Jedi Temple.

She was again left on the doorstep, just now on the steps of the Jedi Temple on Tython. Jedi Master James Thomas, was who she was found by on the steps and he took care of her, training her to be a Jedi, but then also teaching her survival skills so she would be able to take care of herself when she was out in the galaxy alone and had no one else to take care of her.

By the time she was old enough to be knighted, she was excited as ever and could not wait. The ceremony didn't take long, but right after, James was called on duty on a mission that Maddison wasn't informed about. When she had found out about everything, she grew worried for her master. After all, he had become like a father to her. Months had gone by and he hadn't returned. She finally had found out where he had gone and typed coordinates into the navigator computer and found her way to his last known position. Apparently he had gone to Hoth. When she got there, she was met my some nasty creatures that she soon found had owners to them who were just as angry. Jumping down from the creatures, they were much taller and much more dangerous than she was. They attacked her and she was outnumbered.

The next thing she knew, she had woken up in a hospital bed with her master by her side. How was it possible?? She thought he had died. Excitedly, she tried jumping up to hug him, but he made her pause and she soon found that her left arm and right leg had been broken and she also found that she had had scars all over her. Her master questioned her about how she found her way to him and she explained everything.

Now she is 26 and her scars still remain. She is now a Jedi Knight and travels throughout the galaxy meeting new people, but she still spends time with her master every once in a while.
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Can I just quickly point out that the timeline isn't even six months old yet, and this is your 8th character. That's an absolutely ludicrous rate.
 

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@Rae Anne Jarrus Hey just reading it over and it seems to have a lot of similarities to your previous characters but that's not a big issue.

Now to the problems I see that might need to be addressed, who are the inquisitors'? Are you getting that from the Star wars rebels? They need to be addressed a bit more since they seemed very important but given only a sentence. Like why were they after your characters parents what organization do they belong too? Since it can't be sith on Lothal, also need to change your characters homeworld on top since it still says corellia while in the Bio it says lothal.
 

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No need to be so blunt about it, Dan

Never have been one for eloquence.

EDIT: That was more snarky than I intended. I probably should have been more sophisticated about how I worded that.
 
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@Rae Anne Jarrus Hey just reading it over and it seems to have a lot of similarities to your previous characters but that's not a big issue.

Now to the problems I see that might need to be addressed, who are the inquisitors'? Are you getting that from the Star wars rebels? They need to be addressed a bit more since they seemed very important but given only a sentence. Like why were they after your characters parents what organization do they belong too? Since it can't be sith on Lothal, also need to change your characters homeworld on top since it still says corellia while in the Bio it says lothal.
At the time they were just Inquisitors, but I'll fix this tomorrow. And yeah about the homeworld, I just noticed that myself. I was distracted by The Princess and The Frog movie... no wait.. Star Wars Rebels. I was watching that while editing XD. Anyway, Ill get this fixed soon.
 

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@Rae Anne Jarrus wait the parents were spies or the inquisitors? Because either way don't think it will fly, considering the Sith were hidden till just recently.

Why was the family targeted by inquisitors, don't think the Sith would care for that sort of thing
 

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@Rae Anne Jarrus wait the parents were spies or the inquisitors? Because either way don't think it will fly, considering the Sith were hidden till just recently.

Why was the family targeted by inquisitors, don't think the Sith would care for that sort of thing
I was thinking that the Inquisitors were spies and now that you mention that the Sith were hidden, I'm kinda thinking that they were part of the Sith and when they were more recently found, they could have maybe been part of that. If not, it's ok, I'll just edit it tomorrow.
 

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You are shooting these characters out like a gattling gun.
Got to agree with her. Maybe you should try developing characters instead.

What are these 'Inquistors'? In Rebels they don't show up until the Republic becomes the Empire, which means they would be a thing now. So there's no place in nucanon that says these are a thing. Are they a type of Sith? Are they som other agency looking to bash the Jedi down? You need to do some serious explaining here.
 

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@Rae Anne Jarrus Can I just point out the personality section is exactly the same as the one I wrote for you for Taylor's profile, you've just edited tiny bits. I advise putting more thought and effort into your character's personality to make her entirely distinguishable from your other character. For example Maddison is 26, Emma is 14, that alone would confirm some major differences in experience and wisdom. Maddison would be much more mature because she is older.

I would also recommend you stop creating characters and focus on developing the ones you already have. People aren't going to want to RP with characters who will likely just get benched soon enough.
 

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I'm working on it little by little. My goal was to have three characters and I've been waiting to create this one, but haven't had the time up until yesterday. I've actually not been doing them as quickly. When I first started and before the ban, I made two characters in one day.

Again, I'll have more time today and tomorrow to do these things. My parents are shooting a wedding tomorrow and rehearsal today, so they aren't very... gentle.
 

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I'm working on it little by little. My goal was to have three characters and I've been waiting to create this one, but haven't had the time up until yesterday. I've actually not been doing them as quickly. When I first started and before the ban, I made two characters in one day.

Again, I'll have more time today and tomorrow to do these things. My parents are shooting a wedding tomorrow and rehearsal today, so they aren't very... gentle.
We're just telling you what to fix in the future. No need to do anything now.

However, as this is incomplete an admin needs to move it to player workshops.
 

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We're just telling you what to fix in the future. No need to do anything now.

However, as this is incomplete an admin needs to move it to player workshops.
It has over 50 words for each section, while it isn't complete, it still meets the requirements so there's no need to move it.
 

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It has over 50 words for each section, while it isn't complete, it still meets the requirements so there's no need to move it.
Technically it's incomplete because she's going to rewrite all of personality. It apparently 'copied and pasted for layout'.
 

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Do we have to argue about this here? Like I said, I will be working on it today and it will be completed today. No buts about it.
 

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Two characters in one day!?!? It took me like a week to finish Tamara!
 

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I was spitting characters out like crazy back then. Now it's more relaxed.
 
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