Lencus Thraik

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Name:Lencus Thraik

Age: 26

Gender:Male

Speices:Human

Faction:
Galactic Republic

Rank: Sergeant

Height: 6'4

Wieght: average weight of a Soldier.

Eyes: Green

Hair:Blonde

Skin: White

Credits:2000


Strength:
High
Dexterity:High
Constitution:Good
Intelligence:Normal
Wisdom:Normal
Charisma:High

Force Powers:
NONE

Skills:
Piloting
Leading
Rifles
Sidearms

Lightsaber Forms:
None

Strengths and Weaknesses:
His Fellow Soldiers
The Will to protect

Gear:
Medium Body Armor
Blaster goggles

Personality:
Caring and battle ready

History:

Lencus grew up around fighting and reparing. His father before him was killed long ago in a struggle against the sith, he was a soldier in the military, he died a corporal. Lencus continued on his life in prosperity waiting one day himself to continue his fathers legacy as a soldier for the republic military. His mother was against it though he cared not and went on to basic training. By the time he completed his training aswell as all advancements and Advanced Individual Training(AIT) he was promoted to Corporal, there he began serving in the feild in his squad. His squad leader was a Sergeant Avack and thats where his story begins....

Sergeant Avack was one of the meanest mutha's a soldier could come across, the whole squad disliked him though he kept us alive. It was 0100 hrs and we were sent on a recon mission to some strange planet in the outer rim to check out a disturbance in a village. We were supposed to be deployed 5km south of that area though our drop went crazy. Our ship was relocted west of the drop zone as we were taking on heavy fire from Sith artillery, we were hit and going down. The ship plummeted down with smoking engines into trees and finally the weight of the ship crushed through them to the ground killing both pilots and one of the support gunners, the other support gunners was horribly injured not much longer dieing of severe blood loss. Sgt. Avack was the first to crawl from the reckage he stood there a few feet from it. "Fall in!!" He called out to the squad ignoring the moaning and grunting of the injured men. First crawled out Private Instan, also known as "The Kid." He was the newest member of the squad hints his nickname. Second i crawled out tarnished and bloody cuts all over, my body was aching. I fell into formation quickly not knowing the order the rest of the men that crawled out, but it was all of us, not a squad member lost.....yet. "Circle up!" The Sarge shouted out as we scurried torward him. "According the map we are about 10km west of the drop point and about 15km Northeast of the village...We need to double time it soldiers." He stood back up along with the squad. "On me and watch your footing!" He yelled out, as he turned a shot rang out and slammed Instan in the leg, he cried out with pain. "AHH! IM HIT MEDIC!!" He dropped instantly to the ground and the squad scurried to cover from the sniper. The sniper was no where in sight, yet had us pinned down...It began to rain,I was sectioned off from most of the soldiers and couldn't hear much of what was going on do to the powering rain droplets slamming into the ground around me,I peared over noticing Instan looking up at me, his eyes were open wide and his hand out at me shaking. Another shot rang out this time barrelling through the head of his victim, Instan now lay lifeless on the ground with his hand out at me still. I ducked back down and loaded my weapon with a full magazine, i knew what was coming now. The Sith, they were coming to search the crash site. Moments later the rain slowed. Foot steps and branches could be heard all around us crashing and crushing down into the ground, i look over to see Sarge take aim, i looked into the distance of where he was aiming but saw nothing. Suddenly he squeezed the trigger and a sith troop disguised in camo fell to the ground and blaster rounds began shooting past me as if it were raining still. One by one our men fell, they surounded us shrouding our existence as if we were little ants upon the ground and them the rain droplets pouring down upon us, Sarge and i continued firing the rest of the squad was either dead or dieing..."Cpl. Thraik search the wreckage for a usable radio!" The sarge yelled out not haulting his fire, he was fast jamming clip after clip using the dead soldiers ammo aswell. "Sir yes Sir" I replied as i entered the rubble of a once flyable transport drop ship. I found one i thought pulling it from under some life support packs and med packs. I immediatly called HQ demanding a med-vac at our location. They confirmed it. Help was on the way... i thought gladly to myself. Suddenly all went deaf as i could see my life flash before my eyes. The Forest lit up with a Thermal detonater sending the ship i was in tumbling over with me in it still. Sarge was dead. Instan...dead..the rest of the squad dead...I thought i was to. My eyes sprung open but my body laid there lifeless and motionless. The ship now completly turned upside down i could hear the sith soldiers scurring to my position. I quickly gathered my strength and stood to my feet almost falling over, as i caught my balance a sith entered pulling his Vibro blade from his sheath and struck at me with it, i parried it to the left with my rifle coming back up to hit him so hard in the jaw it cracked his helmet straight from his head and broke his jaw bone, he fell to the floor in pain as i drew my sidearm and squeezed the trigger releasing a round in to his thick head. The crackle of his burning skull let off a smell that poluted the air, I reached down taking his Sith standard issue pistol from his belt and held them both up. I put my back to the wall as another trooper entered the reckage immediatly dropping down to his fallen comrade. I placed the warm barrel upon the back of his neck and grinned once again sqeeuzing the trigger killing him in cold blood. By that time a ship could be heard above firing down upon the sith around him. They landed the ship and scrubbed the mission bringing me home....I was awarded the rank of Sergeant. And my Adventure is still incomplete.
 

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Just make the history come soon and not in 20 years :P !
 

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Well I didn't read it because the huge paragraph-less blob just looks imposing and sloppy. So, yes it does if you plan on looking like a professional.
 
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