Lance Zerhon

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Lance Zerhon
Jedi Padawan

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NAME: Lance Zerhon
HOMEWORLD: Zeltros
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Jedi Knight
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 18
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 200
WEIGHT: 6'2"
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Blonde
SKIN: White
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING FEATURES: Lance looks older than he really is, which is a common trait in his family. However, as the rest of his family has, he will probably keep his current "look" for the remainder of his life.
DOMINATE HAND: Ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: Highly force sensitive.

STRENGTH: 10/10 - Lance is extremely strong. Some suggest he is on steroids. Don't worry, he's not on steroids.
DEXTERITY: 8/10 - Lance is quick to react. He is agile and fast, and is getting more ambidextrous with age.
CONSTITUTION: 6/10 - Lance has the health of an average person.
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10 - Lance is very intelligent when it comes to studying combat, battle history, and history of the galaxy. He knows much of force theory and powers. He simply needs to expand on how to use those powers.
WISDOM: 8/10 - Lance can apply his knowledge gained through studying very well. However, he gradually learning how to fully apply his power and strength.
CHARISMA: 6/10 - Lance is charismatic with those he knows. He is getting more charismatic. His training with Colm Lorian has showed Lance that there is no need to be shy before people he does not know.

Some attributes are due to change as he ages/furthers in his training

FORCE POWERS: Push, pull, jump, minor heal, sight, speed.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS: Shii-Cho, Ataru

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES: Lance is a very tricky fighter. As he fights he analyzes his opponent's tactics and uses them against him/her. He is a quick thinker and can come up with solutions to get out of a jam. In a fight he can combine his great strength and surprising speed to form a formidable attack. A weakness of his is his desire to find the men who killed his father, and probably his mother. If an opportunity to find them presented itself to Lance, he may take it above all else. Yet, times are changing.

GEAR: A viridian-bladed lightsaber, black robes with white outer-layer, black cloak, com-link, credits.

SHIP: Being a Jedi, and a young Jedi at that, Lance does not have a personal ship.

PETS: No.

PERSONALITY: Lance is very laid back. Before entering a conflict he weighs out all possibilities. He can be outgoing among friends, but he is typically shy and suspicious. Lance has a little bit of scholar in him, and is always eager to learn about combat, the force, and history. Above all, Lance is determined. He will pursue his set goals and most likely achieve them. He is always cordial and respectful.

The Story of Lance Zerhon:

The Early Years

The Dark Jedi and his wife walked out of a hospital on Zeltros, their new born baby boy, Lance Zerhon, in the mother's arms. The father, Dran, was previously a Jedi Master who had left during the Schism. Dran had met his wife, Haidra, while hiring mercenaries as bodyguards. He fell in love with Haidra, who at the time, was a bodyguard of his. The two began running/smuggling supplies for the other Jedi of the Schism. It was a way for the Dark Jedi to get supplies, as well as a method for Dran and Haidra Zerhon to make a substantial amount of credits. With some of the credits they bought a penthouse on Zeltros, where they would raise Lance. The penthouse was complete with an uncountable amount of commodities, as well as a hidden bunker with secret information relating to the Jedi, Dark Jedi, and smuggling as a whole.

Lance's childhood, surprisingly, was quite normal. He lived the life of a normal child; his parents made sure he was not too spoiled. At the age of five, his parents received knowledge that Lance was very force sensitive. They made arrangements to bring the boy to a Dark Jedi training ground, where he could grow up with a foundation of training and learning. Before taking Lance to the secret location, the family made a smuggling run to Coruscant...

A Chaotic Flight

The blue hue from the lightsaber was projected throughout the control room as it ripped through bodies of flesh. The wielder of the lightsaber, former Jedi Master Dran Zerhon, was warding off the pirate-mercenaries as best he could. The pirates had somehow reached the shuttle without Dran’s knowledge, putting his family in grave danger. Upon hearing the pirates board the ship, Dran Zerhon instructed his wife Haidra to lock herself and their young son, Lance, in the private sector of the shuttle. The private sector had some security, but the thick durasteel door was better than nothing.

After about ten minutes the sharp sound of Dran’s lightsaber died down. Haidra waited. Twenty minutes after that there was still no sound, nothing but a dreary silence. Haidra, grabbing her son’s hand, left the private sector and went towards the control room. In her right hand she carried a simple blaster, which was slightly shaking due to her nervousness. Haidra and Lance arrived in the control room, only to see Dran’s lifeless body on the floor with his lightsaber laying beside the corpse. Haidra gasped and ran to her the side of her husband’s corpse. Lance, only five, didn’t fully understand what was going on. He tried not to look at the corpse, but rather, he went beside it and picked up his father’s lightsaber for comfort.

At that exact moment, five men clad in armor, walked into the room. The leader had a black scar which extended across his battle-hardened, wrinkled face. The man’s left eye was covered with a make-shift eye patch. Smoke was gently oozing from beneath the patch, it was obviously a fresh wound. Quickly noticing, Haidra picked up Lance and ran for the escape pods. Haidra pushed her son into the only escape pod and set it off, tears rolling down her face. She turned around, knowing she had to buy time for her son’s escape.

A Fortuitous Opporunity

The escape pod, with Lance in it, made a horrible crash landing about one hundred meters away from the Republic’s senate building on Coruscant. Lance was beaten up and knocked unconscious. Lance woke up in a small hospital bed, his father’s lightsaber on the table beside him. The hospital staff had to call in a Jedi Master to observe the child, considering it was odd that there was a lightsaber in the pod with him. The Jedi Master, who Lance never came to know, asked for blood tests look at the child’s midichlorian count. No doubt, the midichlorian count was very high – the child was either very lucky and/or he had to of had a Jedi as a parent. The master decided to take Lance to Ossus, where Lance would be able to train as a Jedi.

As a youngling, Lance was very laid back and quiet, yet very watchful. His mind still wandered back to visions of that one night in the shuttle. He wondered where his mother was, if she even survived. The only relic he had of his past was his father’s lightsaber, which was encased on a shelf in his small room until he was experienced enough to use it. Until the age of twelve, Lance studied as a youngling. Lance was dutiful and elegant in his studies and practices. He learned various telekinetic powers, such as push, pull, jump, as all younglings did. He also learned and completed Sii-Cho, the first lightsaber form. He fully learned the forms and force powers through training under his first master, Xino Jufali. Upon completing the form, he was deemed ready to wield his father’s lightsaber, and has done so with pride. When Lance was nineteen, his master was killed in a speeder accident while on Coruscant. While waiting for a new master to take him under his wing, Lance studied telekinetic spells further, learning how to cast them more powerfully and efficiently. He also took steps into learning minor force healing. While waiting for a new master he began to study how he could amplify his melee combat prowess by using force powers. Though his younger life was a tough road, Lance looked forward to prospering as a maturing young man.

The New Master

Months after the untimely death of his old master Xino Jufali, Lance Zerhon was acquainted with his new master, Colm Lorian, a Jedi Councilman. Through the guidance of his new master, Lance hopes to become a faithful and powerful Jedi Knight. As of yet, his training with Colm Lorian has allowed Lance to become much more proficient in utilizing the force. This training has allowed Lance to expand his potential, while broadening his intelligence and wisdom in the force. Eventually, when Lance couples his sought after force proficiency and strength/dexterity in lightsaber combat, he will grow into a force to be reckoned with. In an extremely rigorous trial, Lance was dubbed Knight of the Jedi Order by his master, Colm Lorian.

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Seems a bit too stacked on the attributes. He's fast, strong, healthy, smart, wise for his age, and charismatic. Need to balance those out some.

Its Shi-Cho, or Shii-cho, not Sii-cho

Age is ok I guess, just a bit younger than usual, and he won't become a knight any time soon if he's only 15

Ok there ya go, and welcome to the site :)
 

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Stats are still a bit stacked, imo, but it is good, otherwise.
 

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Your height and weight are reversed. You should probably tone down one of your attribute. If your looking to become a more combat driven Jedi i'd lower his intellect a little. If your going for more of a force user I would lower the strength significantly.
 

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Edited the attributes some. Tell me what you think. Thanks for the advice.

-Lance
 

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Yup yup. I believe your next step is over in the Jedi Forum.
 

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Updated the history a little bit, added some pictures.
 

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Looks a lot like Ben Skywalker.
 

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Lies.

I am actually in the process of getting a new pic.
 

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Changed the picture. Added the early part of Lance's history.
 
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