Lana Adulin

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Lana Adulin
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Spoiled and rich. Used to getting her way. Likes to use others. This is Lana Adulin, Senator of Zeltros

Diary Extract: Lana Adulin, aged 8 ½
Daddy gave me the diary today. It’s just like my other datapad, but Mummy and Daddy say I have to write about me in it. I don’t know what to say about myself. I like school, but some of the other girls think I’m a show off. Not all of them do though. I’m top of the class in most of my lessons, but teacher said that my “tongue will get me in serious trouble” when I’m older. I didn’t think there was anything wrong with it, I looked at it in the mirror for ages.

Diary Extract: Lana Adulin, Aged 12 ¼
I started my second school this year. I like it here, I have made lots of new friends. This school has boys and girls in it. I like that there’s both. I still find the work interesting, but I have had a couple of arguments with some of my teachers, they seem to think I have an attitude problem, but Daddy came and saw the headmaster about them. They changed their tune soon enough. One of the boys called me a “bitch” the other day. I liked him before. I’ve never really thought about it, but maybe I am a bit like that. I know I’m spoilt, I can live with that, but I try to be nice outwardly to people, even if I can’t stand them. You never know when you might need a favour and if you make someone like you they probably won’t mind helping you.

Diary Extract: Lana Adulin, Aged 17
I’ve almost finished school now. It’s scary, it has gone so fast. It’s probably a good thing that everyone is going their separate ways now. I’m bored of the people in school anyway, especially the boys. They only seem to care about sports and sex, and my looks have attracted a fair amount of immature attention. I did work experience in the Government offices earlier this year. Politics is just arguing, I think I’d be good at it, my fiery tongue has got me into many confrontations, and it’s got me out of most of them. I might apply to go into the Senatorial offices straight from school, they take interns every year, and Daddy has contacts. Although that would be working abroad. As much as I’d love to see Coruscant, that would mean leaving behind the Zeltron clubs and parties I love so much.

Diary Extract: Lana Adulin, Aged 21
I won the elections for Senator of Zeltros last week. I’m on Coruscant now, and must admit I’m very nervous. I don’t doubt the sharpness of my tongue, just my nerve. The club scene on Coruscant is fantastic, though, I think I fit in very well. And more guys fall for me here than on Zeltros, apparently we Zeltrons are very attractive as a species anyway. I’ll spend the morning getting ready for appearing before the Senate. I’ll wear something breathtaking, that’ll make an impression. Some of the Senators I’ve met have been very friendly. I feel I fit into the upper class in Coruscant, imagine if the girl who called me a show off or the boy who called me a bitch saw this lot, even I find some of them stuck up and pretentious. I better go and get some beauty sleep (not that I need it), I have a big day tomorrow.

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Major update. Pretty much all changed.
 

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Whta kind of ship does she usually use to get to Coruscant from Zeltros?
 

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Ols I don't know how you keep churning these profiles out I have barely finished one.
 

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Whta kind of ship does she usually use to get to Coruscant from Zeltros?

A fast one lol. She hasn't been on the ship for four years lol...she'd leave school at 18, then have a career for 2 years before even standing for Senator...I just jumped ages.

Ols I don't know how you keep churning these profiles out I have barely finished one.

I write quickly. I hope most of it is of a fair quality at least. And I'm enthused for the new timeline.

I think overall now I've done nine. 2 for Lana and I scrapped a completed first one for Cain as well. Oh and I've pretty much written up the first draft for my faction too, I like to try to be efficient.
 

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I think overall now I've done nine. 2 for Lana and I scrapped a completed first one for Cain as well. Oh and I've pretty much written up the first draft for my faction too, I like to try to be efficient.

Meh. Also what faction?
 

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The grey Jedi-type one.
 

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Hmmmmm I might want to make my guy a gray jedi instead of a normal one, maybe I'll make two, but idk. Also since you seem to be making a lot of profiles do you think it would be bad if I recycled the profile for my military guy?
 

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I did for mine, but that's really because I never really got to use him. If he was in a few RPs I'd say don't, if he was fairly unused then I think that's fine.
 

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Added image

Criticism of the profile still welcome.
 
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It ranges from pink to dark red.

Any thoughts on the actual profile?
 
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Oh. Okay. Cool.

Insight on your profile? Alright, well if you ask me its pretty great. If anything maybe add one or two more entries to make it longer and more detailed. But even that isn't really necessary.
 

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Thanks. And I will add some more as I develop the char, but bear in mind the last one was like "last week" so that's current stuff. When she actually get involves they'll be more to talk about.
 
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