Koth Melan

Koth Melan

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NAME: Koth Melan
FACTION: Independent
RANK: N/A
SPECIES: Coruscanti
AGE: 30
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'10''
WEIGHT: 170lbs
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Black
SKIN: Fair Complexion ( Caucasian )
CREDITS: 1,000
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Scar on chest
DOMINATE HAND: Right
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: Average Strength
DEXTERITY: Very Dextile, Good Reflexes
CONSTITUTION: In Good Health, No Degenerative Diseases, Genetic or Otherwise
INTELLIGENCE: Intelligent, Cunning and Resourceful.
WISDOM: Very Introspective, Fairly Wise For His Age.
CHARISMA: Ruthlessness Prevents a Natural Charisma

FORCE POWERS:

Force Push
Force Jump
Influence Mind

SKILLS:

First Aid
Computer Training
Basic Pilot
Basic Swordmanship
Basic Marksmanship

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:

Form I (Shii Cho)

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

Excels at operating alone or in a very small group. Unable to command large groups, due to relative inexperience and poor charisma. Lack of connections prohibit accumulation of wealth and power. Determined and Resourceful. Unable to grasp capital ship systems and therefore has an inability to pilot or command large ships.

GEAR:

Father's lightsaber (red)

SHIP:

Personal starfighter, the Krasnoyar. Sleek, and fast but not built for direct combat. It is equipped with a single ion engine and resembles a Sith fighter.

PETS:

None

PERSONALITY:

Koth Melan is a very secretive and reclusive individual that values the solitude of his own thoughts. Often found on remote worlds in caves contemplating the mysteries of his own worth and power. He seeks to enlighten his own knowledge of the force and therefore often embarks on missions alone to develop his own power. This leads him to be very ruthless in the execution of whatever it is he puts his mind too. Not particularly prone to impatience, he generally exercises great care and caution in whatever endeavor he is pursuing.

Under pressure, he is generally not quick to temper, though his anger is not always below the surface. He can sometimes become cruel and unsympathetic to those around him. Completely incorrigible when it comes to the respect for others and the law. Lack of a family creates the need to isolate himself form superfluous relationships platonic or otherwise. Honor is a key part of his life, however he follows his own twisted set of code.

HISTORY:

The roots of Koth Melan and his story begin with the collapse of the Herglic Trade Empire, and the subsequent flight from their space into Republic held space. After the demise of the Empire, J'Ardi Melan and his family relocated to the world of Ryloth. There they amassed a small fortune and began to work in the burgeoning slave market there. They lived a lavish life, and had three sons. One of these sons, K'relek Melan, the ancestor of Koth Melan, was found to have a natural affinity to the force. He was discovered by a Jedi Master while on a diplomatic mission to Ryloth regarding the slave industry.

Taken from his home to train the capital of the Galactic Republic, K'relek soon found the tastes of the stoic lifestyle of the Jedi Order to be beyond him, and his power. He made preparations to flee to the world of Onderon to train with the reclusive jedi, Xi'an Sindor. There he was taught the aspect of the dark side, and constructed his own lightsaber which remained in the family's possession for generations.

The exact date of birth of Koth Melan is unknown, however historians have placed the age of Koth Melan at around 30 years old, given that his appearance onto galactic events takes place shortly after Supreme Chancellor Relana Isolde Tanoor is assassinated by unknown operatives. Seemingly bestowed with the same affinity for the force, and with a touch of the dark side, Koth is rumored to reside on the world of Onderon.

KILLS:

None

DUELING RING MATCHES:

None

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
none

ROLE-PLAYS:

None
 

Dan.

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nice, but remember, you don't have to use the template. Oh, and there is no Empire. We're at 13,000 BBY. No empire, and I don't know if ryltoh has been discovered.
 

Ser Gregor

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nice, but remember, you don't have to use the template. Oh, and there is no Empire. We're at 13,000 BBY. No empire, and I don't know if ryltoh has been discovered.

/facepalm

And yes you deserved it.
 

Koth Melan

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It's the Herglic Empire, and the Timeline said Ryloth was there. So yeah. :CDumb:
 

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"SPECIES: Coruscanti"

"...K'relek soon found the tastes of the stoic lifestyle of the Jedi Order to be beyond him, and his power. He made preparations to flee to the world of Onderon..."

There's a gap between his ancestor and Koth. You mentioned really nothing about your character, only about K'relek. I'd like to know myself how it was that Koth came to be born on Coruscant when K'relek went to Onderon.

Don't take this as criticism as it seems you're readily offended. I am just curious about your character because one of mine is an Onderonian.
 

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Don't take this as criticism as it seems you're readily offended. I am just curious about your character because one of mine is an Onderonian.

I fail to see how I am readily "offended". Perhaps you've merely misread my attitude. And please do not use this post as an example ;)

I see what you mean. It's late, I will exapand a tiny bit on that tomorrow.
 
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Midian

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Perhaps you've merely misread my attitude. And please do not use this post as an example ;)

Perhaps...

And I'm interested in seeing where this character goes. My first character concept, Midian, is somewhat of a recluse and explorer himself, albeit neutral-light aligned.
 

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Don't worry, I won't.

Kind man that I am, I won't either.

Not a bad profile, although an image might improve it. Th history's a little small, although enlarging it's optional.
 
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