Karfeddion

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Name: Karfeddion

Coordinates: L17.5

Climate: Karfeddion is a terrestial world, with a two season cycle switching off between a wet and dry season. The equataor is almost sub-tropical while you will find temperate climates as you travel North and South respectively. The planet is kept a comfortable temperature by the abundance of freshwater lakes dotting the land as well as some larger inland oceans. The wet season sees considerably higher rates of precipitation with steady rains and occasional intense thunderstorms. The dry season is more mild.

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Terrain: The green and blue world is home to large lakes and inland seas. The terrain is comprised of rolling hills, flat grasslands, and mountainous steppes. Large forests are found near the lakes or where there is lack of settlement.

Rotation: Karfeddion has a 25 hour day and a local years last 372 days.

Population: 8 Billion

3.6 Billion free citizens
-2.4 Billion Human
-1.2 Billion alien (various)

4.4 Billion Slaves
-2 Billion Human
2.4 Billion alien (various)

Resources: Karfeddion would be best described as an agriworld, it's best resource being it's nitrogen rich soil and temperate climate and steady, predictable seasons. With a slightly lower than normal gravity and an oxygen rich atmosphere it was not difficult to introduce agricultural and domestic products from other systems. Small mining operations also exist on the planet that mine metal ores.

Grains: Grassgrain, Shorn, Roti, and Phraig among others.

Fruits/Vegetables: Bangcorn, Cabbage, Corellian Apples, Tapato, Potato among others.

Food creatures: Gallaze, Gaunt, Gnorts, Grantaloupe, and Grasser among others.

Minerals: Aurodium
Doonium

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Government: The planet is under the control of the Vandron Family, fuedal lords who have ruled the planet since it's discovery. A large bureaucracy maintains and staffs the departmens of the government such as the Department of Justice and Department of Interstellar Affairs.

Economy: State-led development policy. Much focus is on agricultural production and it's trade. Another major economic activity is the slave trade. Most of the planet's wealth come from those two economic sectors. Consumerism is also a driving economic force with incredibly wealthy citizenry needing to purchase the latest and greatest fashion and technology. There are several large cities spread evenly across the planet, built around massive landing strips and docking bays that are the basis of the agricultural trade. From these cities come entrepreneurs, small and medium sized businessses and lucrative tax revenue.

Culture: Like almost all planets in the Senex-Juvex system, Karfeddion is infamously known for their continued practice of Slave trading. The slaves are raided from neighboring systems and are used for households, agriculture, military and trade purposes. On Karfeddion slaves are bred to isolate the finest traits. They have a mando-esque belief in survival of the fittest and culturally justify slavery in those terms. They are not xenophobic as there are a few Noble families of alien species and the population within Karfeddion is diverse, they do have a severe sense of cultural superiority to those outside of the Kingdom. The people believe that they are still of the fine stock and heritage of the old lords of the galaxy. A slave may win himself/herself freedom and earn citizenship through service to their Noble Lord. Easiest way to become a citizen is to serve in the military of House Vandron.

The Citizens of Karfeddion are highly patriotic and loyal to their Noble overlord. They believe in service to the State and the highest honor and rewards comes from serving the Noble Family. With high levels of incentives and stiff competition, the Noble House of Vandron is able to coerce its people into participation and service to their greater schemes, for what promotes House Vandron, promotes all of Karfeddion.

Technology: Through bouts of isolationism the technological pathway of Karfeddion and the greater Senex-Juvex system has move in a slightly different path than the galaxy at large. While on the same level as most of the galaxy in terms of industrial and civillian technology there is a greater reliance on treaded vehicles and propeller aircraft. Facilitating their belief of cultural superiority is a strong tradition of human augmentation with cybernetic implants. Military technology has been geared more towards solid beam weaponry and kinetic technology.

Satellites: There is a single medium sized Garrison Moon. While it lacks it's own oxygen, there are several mining and military facilities located on it's surface. It has refueling stations for Naval forces and several squadrons of fighters and bombers are able to be garrisoned there.

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Capital City​

History: Senex-Juvex has several agricultural worlds, however Karfeddion has historically been the breadbasket and center of the agricultural economy for the system. Long ago, House Vandron chose the planet when they learned of it's rich soil and temperate climate. They quickly established large plantations and bequeathed land in a feudalistic fashion to their most loyal followers. With an entitled landowning class who vied for power and prestige there was a need for labor to build their society. In an era were droids were expensive and simple, the Senex-Juvex Lords turned to Slavery. Slave raids filled the fields and orchards of the planet with slave labor and helped House Vandron become first amongst equals among the other Noble Houses of the Senex-Juvex system. Built on the backs of slaves Karfeddion quickly became a developing planet, however very early on there were strict environmental regulations and controls to keep pollution from tainting the atmosphere, water and soil. Therefore only 1 major city was established, Vandron Prime, however in time as the population swelled, there eventually came to be 5 cities spaced fairly evenly across the planet. In times of crisis, House Vandron could stop food production, giving them significant leverage over their neighbors. Karfeddion has never been invaded or occupied by a foreign power. Today it is famous for agriculture, the breeding of excellent slaves and the wealth of House Vandron.

Notable PC's: Silas Vandron

Intent: Several individuals might know of my desire to create an independent faction based upon a blend between Feudal practices and the ideology of Confucius China. I believe that there is room on these boards for that unique kingdom and I would like to introduce Karfeddion as the host of one of the most powerful of the Senex-Juvex Nobles Houses. Karfeddion offers to the galaxy a steady and neutral supplier of massive quantities of food that can be the basis for diplomatic RP and trade deals. Karfeddion is also home to the most profittable of the Senex-Juvex slave plantations, slave trade and slave trading that can bring us into contact with the powerful Hutt Cartel. Furthermore as a neutral planet, we can play host to spying between possible embassies or agents of both the Rebellion, Imperium and Cartel; we can be the host of cloak and dagger pursuits of fugitives, secretly hiding jedi from the sith etc.
 
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I'm certain you've been told this much already, but WIP projects are not allowed to be posted in these boards. Only completed Write-Ups that are ready for submission and peer reviews are to be posted in the Tech, Planets, and Species boards.
 

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I'm certain you've been told this much already, but WIP projects are not allowed to be posted in these boards. Only completed Write-Ups that are ready for submission and peer reviews are to be posted in the Tech, Planets, and Species boards.

Lighten up. It's not gonna kill anyone. He can bump the thread when its complete and ready for review.
 

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*Shrugs* I was just repeating something that's come up every single time someone's posted a WIP in these threads. It's never been an issue in the past if someone informed them in a polite and informative way that WIPs aren't allowed.
 

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Yes well. Planet submissions tend to be quite detailed and long. There is no issue with posting WIPs in the planet submission board. If you have an problem with this that is causing you great personal distress, we can, by all means, continue this discussion in PMs.
 

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First and foremost I would like to apologize for posting a WIP. I'm still new and am figuring out the boards. Often times I'm too eager and ethusiastic and misread or skim over the rules. I will endeavor to not make mistakes like this again.

However, I believe I have filled in all the necessary sections and would like some feedback and suggestions how this could be improved.

Thanks in advance!
 

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Overall, it seems like a neat little planet. I've only got two teal complaints, though in truth they are not complaints hut merely things I feel worth noting to you.

Now remember, I'm no one special and have so say in things of importance. But here goes.

- The "food creatures" section appears to just be a list of animals that start with a G, almost as if you went to the non-sentient animals section scrolled down to the G's and started listing various speciesthat began with that letter.

- The other thing is simple really... I'd advise against allowing slavery on the planet. This is sure to draw the Imperium's attention and bring their wrath down upon you. As slavery is something that they simply won't condone. Odd... I know.

Anyways, take what you will from what I've said. Just a few points I felt worth mentioning. Good job though man, this is a substantial undertaking that you're doing and I commend you for that. Best of luck my dude.
 

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- The other thing is simple really... I'd advise against allowing slavery on the planet. This is sure to draw the Imperium's attention and bring their wrath down upon you. As slavery is something that they simply won't condone. Odd... I know.
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With where this planet is located on the galactic map? I think he'll be fine with letting slavery take place on the planet.
 

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With where this planet is located on the galactic map? I think he'll be fine with letting slavery take place on the planet.

As a newbie I'm not completely sure of what the galactic map looks like for the site, so I'll have to go with what you say. My statement was based solely upon what I've read of the Imperium's desire to squelch out Slavery.
 

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Please don't bump a thread on the tech/species/planets board if nothing has been changed that needs noticing. Generally speaking the admins don't like it. There are other planets that need reviewing as well; Empress (or whomever) will get around to it when they have a chance. Just be patient. Thanks.
 

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What type of metallic ores is mined? You had the crops listed as its an agri-world, but nothing for what can be mined.
 

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Edited to include two mineral resources that the limited mining operations extract from the planet. I realize that these are two of the more valuable ores in Star Wars canon however the mining operations will remain small due to the strict environmental policies of House Vandron
 

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Cool, looks fine to me.

Approved.
 
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