Kane De'Lanfant

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"...It was burning..."

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That's what I remember of my childhood, it burning. It died around me, my whole world. My home. Screams of dread rising to the heavens for some hope of salvation. Corpses littered the street, smoke filled the air, and buildings like dreams crumbled. The Sith and their Imperium had arrived. Coruscant had been my home since birth and now it was doomed. What do I remember first? Waking up to thunder with no storm, fire raining down from the heavens and my mother calling for me over the chaos.

In nothing but my loose night shorts I was rushed by my father’s soldiers to the Galactic Command Center. We had known they were coming, even at fifteen years I had known, but their attack had come so swiftly what little forces we had were in disarray. My father stood among the other generals trying to organize what remained of the Alliance military. It was a valiant defense, but like an evil flood the Imperium forces swept over the planet. One by one strategic points began to fall and the darkness closed in. Soon the barbarians were at the gates. All of our evacuation shuttles attempting to leave were being shot down. The Imperium killed indiscriminately; women, children, wounded, it didn’t matter to them. I felt the weight of a blaster for the first time that day, my mother did too. We stood in one of the war rooms, waiting as they cut through the blast doors. Crimson and verdant streaks filled the air as it fell to the ground. I fired blindly, wildly. When I opened my eyes I saw I man I had killed. I think I threw up.

Men, generals, their families; they were all dying around me. I can’t remember how long it lasted. Five minutes or five hours, who knows? Next thing I know I was kneeling with the other survivors of the firefight. A Sith holding a blood red lightsaber entered. It’s funny. I can’t remember anything that was said in that death filled room. My father was the last member of command alive in this building. He was brought before the black robed figure. He stood unafraid, defiant. I could swear there was a light around him. He turned to me and my mother. He smiled…before the Sith ran him through.

Other men were executed by firing squads, leaving just the women, a few very young children, and myself. When the Sith who had killed my father announced that we would share the same fate before departing, the women rose up as one. They hadn’t even needed to speak. Their maternal instincts and grief fueled their attack. Desperate to save the children, even if they weren’t their own, they rushed the stormtroopers. Many were cut down, but some managed to reach and attack the white armored men. I hid the smaller children behind me as they fought to free us, but rushed forward when I saw my mother fall. Running to her side after I tackled a soldier, took his blaster, and shot him I held my mother in my hands. She touched my face with a bloodied hand. Looking into my eyes, ‘I love you…flee…and live…’ were the last things I would her from her.

Filled with grief, rage, and pain I refused to cry…not yet. I would mourn my parents, my life, after I got the others to safety. Taking the other orphans and telling them not to cry, lying to them that it would be ok, I led them through the ruins that once housed such hope. I still can’t believe we managed to sneak out without being seen. I was taking care of four kids. Bori and Bolli were the twin human boys, both five, along with Jacek a seven year old Rodian and Aleia a four year old Echani. I was a kid myself; I didn’t know what the hell I was doing. So we made our way down; down into the depths of the fallen city plant. It was all I could think of. We went down as far as our feet could carry us, finally collapsing in an empty warehouse far from the sounds of conflict. Then I mourned…we all did…we cried until no more tears would fall. I don’t remember falling asleep, but I remember when I woke up. The kids were piled around me, hugging me and cuddling close. I was all they had left; their savoir and they were all I had left.

So I made a vow as they slept and I made sure the place was safe. That I would protect them and that the Imperium would pay. My parents were gone, my home in ruins. It might have been different if the cowardly Jedi hadn’t fled. It might not have, but at least they would have died fighting for what they say they believed in. So much for being Champions of Peace and Justice. They let millions, no billions die. They hadn’t even tried to defend them; they even condemned the few that had stayed behind to fight expelling them from the Order. It was then that my innocence died, it was then that I knew what I would do. I would fight the Imperium anyway I could. I would help build a new Republic. I would become a rebel and fight for freedom; from the Imperium, the Sith…and the Jedi. The Republic I would help create would no longer need these cowards and charlatans. I am Kane De’Lanfant. Hero? Rebel? Terrorist? Champion? I am all of these things. This is how my story both ends and begins.
 
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“Don’t believe in mystics! Don’t look to them for salvation! It’s the common man, soldiers like me and you that make the real differences!"
"Hold your weapons high!”

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NAME: Kane De’Lanfant
FACTION: Rebellion
RANK: N/A
AFFILIATIONS: Rebellion
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 25
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5’10
WEIGHT: 200
EYES: Pale Blue
HAIR: Chestnut
SKIN: Pale
CREDITS: Unknown
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Tattoo on his right shoulder, scar on his right cheek and a scar between his eyes down to his nose.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No.​

STRENGTH: 7/10
DEXTERITY: 5/10
CONSTITUTION: 7/10
INTELLIGENCE: 8/10
WISDOM: 6/10
CHARISMA: 10/10

SKILLS:
The prime example of what every soldier should be. He is at the peak of physical fitness, combining strength with speed. He is an excellent fighter, whether with blaster or blade. He speaks a remarkable number of languages, understands advanced tactics, and is a very adept pilot. He also happens to be an excellent pilot. Beyond his natural combat, tactical, and leadership skills he also happens to have other talents. He is a great cook, understands a remarkable number of languages, and is a student of the fine arts; whether music or paintings.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
One Thousand Cuts: 9/10 – A style derived from an ancient form whose name has long been forgotten. This form relies on speed and precision over brute strength and parries. A user of this form prefers to dodge completely rather than parry with their blade. This style is not designed to kill in one blow or as quickly as possible, though it is possible, like many others are. This form relies on cuts and stabs that debilitate. Using this style on can easily sever tendons and attack vital points. You can quickly sever an opponent’s hamstring and then open their arteries all while moving with such speed and grace that you stay well out of their reach. This style is exceptional at fighting multiple opponents.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Kane is a natural born leader, able to inspire courage in his allies and fear in his enemies. His is so charismatic that his words have been compared to words fueled by Force Persuasion. His men are some of the most loyal in all the galaxy, stating they would follow him even unto death. He is stronger than an average soldier and can take more punishment, but he isn’t as agile as some other men are. He is very intelligent and his tactics in battle have always shown such, his wisdom is also greater than average but in matters other than war he can be a bit lacking. In summary he relies on his intelligence, strength/constitution, and charisma to make up for his average wisdom and agility.

GEAR:
Kane wears a unique version Galactech Arsenal Modular Combat Armor. It has a one of a kind look and was originally worn by his father as a Special Forces operative before becoming a general. It possesses a Biorestorative Underlay and a silver scheme with grey/black fabric. He is usually equipped with his father’s old K8 Heavy Blaster Pistol.

SHIP:
N/A

DROIDS:
N/A

PETS:
N/A

PERSONALITY:
Kane is a very passionate man. Not the roses and poems type of passionate, no, he’s passionate about freedom. About fighting the Imperium and creating a new Republic free of the chains called the Jedi. He is charming, a natural born leader. People flock to him and even come around to his ideals. He can be harsh at times, but he is always kind to his men and those fighting for freedom. He has no tolerance for people that support the Imperium, those that won’t fight for themselves when they are given the means to do so, and those that preach neutrality or compromise.

He strongly believes in justice, peace, and freedom but knows these things must be won. He also believes his cause for freedom against the Sith and their corrupt Imperium. But holds a near hatred for the Jedi as well, viewing them as cowards and puppet masters. He wants to take down the Imperium at all costs, but refuses to become the monsters he fights. He won’t resort to terrorism or the killing of innocents, even if his enemies do. As he has often said, “Rivers of blood will never bring peace…neither will atrocities made in the name of freedom.”

BIOGRAPHY:
Born and raised on Coruscant, he was the only child to Berin and Mia De’Lanfant. Berin was a high-ranking general within the Alliance military and his mother was the daughter of a prominent wealthy family. So he was a military brat, but one of means and wealth. From a young age he was tutored by some of the best minds Coruscant could offer. Not only in basic knowledge, he was taught advanced subjects; languages, military history and tactics, etc. But this elite, silver spoon lifestyle wasn’t to last.

At the age of fifteen the Sith Imperium unleashed it fury upon the boy’s homeworld. His parents didn’t survive and Kane witnessed both of their deaths firsthand…along with the Jedi fleeing the doomed world, leaving countless innocents to die. He managed to escape the carnage, along with four other children, into the lower levels of Coruscant. They avoided being captured, mostly due to the fact that they were not concerned with the children of those they had already executed, and for the next three years he managed to carve out a living in the criminal underbelly.

During this time he would also begin moving against the Imperium. In small ways of course, some slicing here a theft there. The four children he had helped raised would soon become the first members of his little rebel group soon known by the Imps as the Sons of Coruscant. But of course Kane’s homeworld was now a throne of imperial power and soon the heat became too much for them. At the age of nineteen he, along with his ‘siblings' and new members drawn to their cause, hijacked an imperial shuttle. They barely managed to escape. From there Kane and his group wandered the Outer Rim for the next few years.

They soon began to draw more and more to their cause; former soldiers, desperate refugees, and the like. As their group began to grow, their moves against the Imperium becoming bigger and even all out skirmishes, everyone began to look to the charismatic and well-spoken Kane despite his young age. So it was Kane became an infamous rebel hated and wanted by the Imperium. But his fight against the Imperium was just beginning, fueled by a dream of freedom.



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BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:.
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLE-PLAYS:
N/A
 
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I'll add basic information and stuff later, might flesh out the bio a bit more too (despite my loathing for character profiles), right now this is just a general outline.

This lol I borrowed this because I still have to add a couple of things. Please no one post saying, "Bio/etc isn't done." I know it isn't but it's 3am, I've been up for nearly 48hrs straight, I will finish it first thing when I wake up, and I wanted general feedback from the people who said they liked/voted for him. So here he is(almost done); Kane De'Lanfant.
 

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Also this is my first attempt at trying a literary version in all my years of roleplaying, so I'd like some feed back :p just don't be too soul crushing lol
 

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Oh man this guy looks awesome! Great job, Kin-Wan! Can't wait to RP with this guy.
 

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Looks good, Kin-Wan, but I've got a questionado...

Who will you be archiving to play this character? You already possess six characters, which is the upper limit of what one player can control according to site guidelines. So, who's gonna go?
 

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Lets not forget that you don't know anything about the structure of the rebellion. We don't even know who the faction leader.

All this information suggests to me, that this is a WIP.
 
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From what I've gathered and spoke to Brandon about, there will be individual cells much like clans within the Mandos. None will be directly answerable to another and may not even have contact with one another. It won't be until later that they actually start trying to unite and band together. Also the way I'll have it set up, even if I'm not able to be a rebel commander within the Rebellion technically, I have enough interest that people would be willing to join an indie faction. After all there are other rebel groups that are allied with the Alliance that aren't exactly a part of them nor answerable to them. So if I will be a rebel commander with my own cell within the Alliance Remnant(or whatever lol) or whether I'll be the rebel commander for an indie group aligned with the other rebels, either way works for me. Either way I'm golden. It's vague so I don't have to assume anything about the Rebel structure/rules just yet so not as to prevent my completion of it, but also vague enough that I can make subtle changes so it will work on whichever of the two paths I take. So there :p

Also as for who I'm archiving, well one of my characters is going to die. But it's a big secret me and another member have worked on. We don't want to spoil the surprise so PM me if you're truly curious. But other than that worry not Kiro, I will have an open space pos skip.
 

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As far as I'm concerned, this is still a WIP. =P

That's not much of an issue here though, because there's a bigger problem - your cast is full. It doesn't matter whether this guy will be replacing another of your characters a week down the road, your cast is still full and so you've posted a character you cannot possibly use.

[ST]I'm going to lock this for now. If you free up a character slot, PM me and I'll unlock this so you can use him.[/ST]

Character slot opened up, so Kane has been unlocked. :>
 
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Alright! Kane is unlocked and has been updated to completion XD now any feedback on my try at a literary profile along with just him in general is more than welcome!
 

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While its nitpicking a bit; the Rebels will not have member-made cells, not at the start (Source). So his Faction would have to be "Sons of Coruscant" in the form of an Indie Faction. The rest of it looks interesting enough, though.
 

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While its nitpicking a bit; the Rebels will not have member-made cells, not at the start (Source). So his Faction would have to be "Sons of Coruscant" in the form of an Indie Faction. The rest of it looks interesting enough, though.
I know. In fact, I always planned for it to be an indie faction for several reasons; many people have expressed interest in the group, the fanaticism of his soldiers makes many view his group as a cult, and his views in regards to the Force/Government varies differently from other cells.
 

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Edited for some small changes. Screw the cultist angle, he can be badass as a regular soldier :p
 

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Updated to completion, ready for skip.
 

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I love this character too. You sure make a lot of awesome characters today, dude. :D

I might have to get Gutterson involved with the Sons of Coruscant after the timeshift. >_>
 

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Thanks again 32 lol Well if you are really interested in joining, I can PM you the draft of the faction and let you take a sneak peek. I already have a few other interested so there would be other members :p
 

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Sure, I'd love to see that! I'm very curious about the faction as is! :D

Though I'm not sure yet if Gutterson would fit in as a joining member much (It doesn't really fit with his character). But he'd be all over working for them as a merc. (And depending on how the charrie turns out in the end he might very well end up joining as an actual rebel). :CSly
 

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Alright lol I sent it, also I think he would deffinently join up after speaking with Kane and hearing his views :p
 

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Minor updates to history and skills.
 

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Hey Wanderer!

Looks like we got more information on the Rebels...

Just to avoid confusion I think it might be prudent to change "Rebel Cell Commander" to "Supreme Commander" like it is listed in the Unapproved Factions section. Seeing as he is independent of the actual Rebel Faction we wouldn't want to confuse members.

I imagine, though, you'll be looking for interaction between your faction and the Rebel Alliance! In that event, I look forward to chatting with you, as I'll probably be somewhere there abouts.

Best of luck with the character!

-TAC.
 
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