Kad'tal Bralor

[SwordZX]

NAME: Kad'tal Bralor
FACTION: Mando
RANK: None
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 13
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 5'5"
WEIGHT: 120
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Brown
SKIN: Tan, Caucasian
CREDITS: 451
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A few scrapes and scars on his head and arms. One on the right side of his face from his eyebrow to below his lip.
FORCE SENSITIVE: Mando's don't use the force.

STRENGTH: As strong as your average 13 year old mando.
DEXTERITY: He is a thief. So he is very nimble and sneaky.
CONSTITUTION: He is fairly healthy for an orphan.
INTELLIGENCE: Quick thinker and very intelligent. He is only street smart as he has never attended school.
WISDOM: Not very wise.
CHARISMA: He is very charming and crafty.

FORCE POWERS:
SKILLS:
He is light-footed and sneaky, a master pickpocket. He also get's into street fights with other kids and wins most of the time.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:


STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Fends and fights for himself.
Untrusting of others to a fault.

GEAR:

Helmet.
A MV-1 "Sol'kad" Vibroblade that doesn't work anymore.
Random armor pieces. All found in a scrap yard.

SHIP:

DROIDS:

PETS:


PERSONALITY:
He is a loner and a tough kid. He has a hard time trusting others. He has no friends but many enemies. He is rash and unpredictable and hot headed. He doesn't back down from a fight unless there is no way to win. He is not afraid to kill even at such a young age.

BIOGRAPHY:
Kad'tal is an orphan on the planet Concordia, where he was born and raised. His mother died when he was born. A thief broke into the house with a sword and killed the weakened mother by slicing her neck and wrists. The murderer left the child to lay in a pool of his mothers blood and left the sword sticking out of the woman. His father got home an 30 minutes later and found the baby crying there. His father blamed the child for it all that happened and named him Kad'tal (sword of blood).

His father turned to drinking and when drunk would beat Kad'tal daily and blame him for his mothers death. He told him he would never amount to anything.

One night when Kad'tal was 12 when his father was beating him, Kad'tal grabbed a sword and stabbed his father. It was the same sword used on his mother. He ran away from the scene and hid. His family had no idea what was happening in the home, and did not understand why Kad'tal snapped and killed his father. They looked for him and took him in. But he did not like the rules, so he ran away. He is untrusting and hates authority.

Since running awy he has lived on the streets as a pickpocket and a thief. He has made his home near a scrapyard and takes things from it time to time.

He gets into lots of fights with other boys and holds his own even against boys trained to fight. He will not back down unless it is the only way to survive. He even fares well against soldiers in a fight because he is faster and more nimble than them.

If you cross him watch your back as he is very vengeful and lives up to the name Kad'tal "sword of blood".

Recently taken in by Wallace Graves and is training to be a Mandolorian Protector.



KILLS:
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
DUELING RING MATCHES:
GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
ROLE-PLAYS:
The Pickpocket (finished)

 

[Nike]

Aw. He's so cute! Zara would love him, since she came from a pretty similar situation. I do think you need to expand the personality a little bit, it sounds kind of generic. A trick I use is to pick three good personality traits and three bad ones and write a sentence about each.

 

[Chairdor]

Maybe don't use the armor picture twice, and if you could make it smaller that would make the profile look better.

Beyond aesthetics the personality gives a clear picture of who this guy is a person who doesn't trust and fights a lot. My only advice would be to dip deeper into that reservoir of mistrust and try to pull up some reasons as to why he is such a loner. Think about it, as a street urchin it might be best for him to join a gang or at least a pack of thieves, instead he does it alone, is there something in his past that soured him to cooperation. Does he think about his parents ofter? If given the chance to speak to someone who could help him, would he clam up, speak curtly, or perhaps theres a part of him that wants to break down and explain his frustrations.

Now in the biography the idea of a fearsome nickname is excellent, but lets here the story, how did he get that nick name accredited to him, did he fight off a group of older boys with guns with only his rusty sword? Does he threaten anyone he can find with a blood stained sword? Why does he have this title? Is he in a big city or a small town? Just things to think of for possible expansion.

Street rats are cool and I hope you have fun with this one.

 

[SwordZX]

He doesn't do cute lol.

 

[SwordZX]

Kad'tal is his given name.

 

[Chairdor]

ah my bad on that

 

[Nike]

He doesn't do cute lol.

XD I think I watched Aladdin too many times as a kid, I find these sort of tough kids living on the street adorable.

 

[SwordZX]

XD I think I watched Aladdin too many times as a kid, I find these sort of tough kids living on the street adorable.

Lol ok that makes since.

 

[SwordZX]

Maybe don't use the armor picture twice, and if you could make it smaller that would make the profile look better.

Beyond aesthetics the personality gives a clear picture of who this guy is a person who doesn't trust and fights a lot. My only advice would be to dip deeper into that reservoir of mistrust and try to pull up some reasons as to why he is such a loner. Think about it, as a street urchin it might be best for him to join a gang or at least a pack of thieves, instead he does it alone, is there something in his past that soured him to cooperation. Does he think about his parents ofter? If given the chance to speak to someone who could help him, would he clam up, speak curtly, or perhaps theres a part of him that wants to break down and explain his frustrations.

Now in the biography the idea of a fearsome nickname is excellent, but lets here the story, how did he get that nick name accredited to him, did he fight off a group of older boys with guns with only his rusty sword? Does he threaten anyone he can find with a blood stained sword? Why does he have this title? Is he in a big city or a small town? Just things to think of for possible expansion.

Street rats are cool and I hope you have fun with this one.

Thanks for the advice.

 

[Vencu]

Kad'tal is his given name.

Sure, but why was it given? Most of the time, given names (in Mando'a) have a reasoning behind them. Was there an event in his early childhood or at the time of his birth that had anything to do with a bloody sword? Perhaps his mother wasn't sick... perhaps she died by the hand of a sword-wielding thief that broke into their home when she was giving birth. His father could have been on the way, rushing to be with his wife, but he arrived too late. He found her bleeding out, clinging to her newborn. The sword could have been lying at her feet in a pool of blood. Perhaps his father blamed him for the death, since his mother would have been able to defend herself had it not been for the pregnancy. That would explain his name and his reasons for not trusting others.

Also, why wasn't he taken in by another family or clan when his father died? Mandalorians take raising their children very seriously and family is a huge part of who they are as a people. If his trust issues have led him to refuse or run away from offers, then I understand. On the other hand, if he is accepting enough, he'd already have a home and his training would be well under way, with a verd'goten (warrior trial) on the horizon. It's just the way the culture works.

I'd definitely like to see the biography section expanded. You're off to a good start, so I know it won't be too difficult for you. Keep it up, mate!

 

[SwordZX]

Thanks for the idea's Vencu

 

[Vencu]

Not a problem. I'm glad you liked them.