Joshua Cratin

[Joshua Cratin]

NAME: Joshua Cratin.
FACTION: None.
RANK: Thief, Assassin.
SPECIES: Human.
AGE: 30.
GENDER: Male.
HEIGHT: 5’ 11”.
WEIGHT: 165.
EYES: Emerald Green.
HAIR: Midnight black.
SKIN: Tan.
CREDITS: 100.
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: A scar across his face.
DOMINATE HAND: Right hand.
FORCE SENSITIVE: No.

STRENGTH: Josh is average strength for a Human. 5/10

DEXTERITY: Josh is very agile. 7/10

CONSTITUTION: Josh health remains steady unless sick. 6/10

INTELLIGENCE: Josh has photographic memory and never forgets what he learns. 9/10

WISDOM: Josh has street smarts. 4/10

CHARISMA: Josh has high charisma and can get anybody to join him. 8/10

FORCE POWERS:
None.

SKILLS:
Pilot skills. 7/10
Shooting skills. 9/10
Vibroblade skills. 8/10
Sneaking skills. 9/10
fighting skills. 10/10

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths are he has a great amount of passion in his work.
A weakness doesn’t like to kill civilians in the middle of his work.

GEAR:
None but a vibro ax and vibro sheild a kurtosis knives and sward.

PERSONAL SHIPS:

PETS:
Slice Hound named Hunter. (I use him as a hunting hound)

PERSONALITY:
Fierce, strong, honorable, loyal and intelligent. hates when people get in front of him and his work.

HISTORY:

PART I - YOUNG LIFE
Josh grew up in the low/high life most a low harsh life with his father very close to him. He would steal food and vehicles while his father was gone on “business trips.” But when his father got home they would live in the best things till the credits ran out then they be on the streets till his fathers next “business trip.” Finally when he became 12 he went on trips with him. And they went and got more credits a bought all new pets and vehicles (that’s the pets and vehicles above).

PART II – Death of Father
Josh’s father soon went into debt with a Hutt and was killed in an “accident”. His father was accidentally crushed on a landing pad walking to his chopper fighter. Josh has been looking for the killer and will keep looking on the side of his jobs.

PART III - The First Job
Josh was once approached by his dad’s employer he was asked if he wanted a job. Josh of course said yes so they employer took him to a hanger where his dads stuff was. All the gear was new and Josh knew how to use it.

KILLS:
None

DUELING RING MATCHES:
None.

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
None.

TRAINING:


ROLE-PLAYS:

 

[D.C.]

You could expand on the personality and the history. Other than that, it looks good, except for him being... 15?

He looks rather old for a 15 years old and in my opinion, 15 is too young to be a good and experienced assassin.

Also:

CHARISMA: Josh has high charisma and can get anybody to join him. 6/10

Then why is it only a 6 out of 10? I would raise that to at least 8/10 if you say he has high charisma and he can get anybody to join him.

Overal looks nice though. I'm sure you can develop him to a good character, but there is room for improvement.^^

 

[Joshua Cratin]

Thank you