Jaz Corban

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NAME: Jaz Corban

FACTION: Hutt cartel + Haar Echoy'la -- The Lost

RANK: Enforcer

SPECIES: human

AGE:33

GENDER: male

HEIGHT: 5" 7

WEIGHT: 155lb

EYES: blue

HAIR: short red hair long enough to be tied up in a small ponytail

SKIN: white but slightly tanned

CREDITS:1,000 credits

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: none(but will add in if some appear during the RP)

FORCE SENSITIVE: no

STRENGTH: 7/10 Jaz as result of being trained as a solider before switching to become a starfighter pilot he keeps himself in top shape by doing plenty of exercises by running push ups, sit up ect

DEXTERITY: 6/10 Jaz can vault over low walls easily however it would take a short while for him to clamber over a high wall without help from others with a small boost up

CONSTITUTION:7/10 apart from the odd cold bout here and there Jaz has a clean bill of health

INTELLIGENCE: 5/10 Jaz doesn't have the intelligence of a mastermind, nor does he had one of a complete bantha it would be more of a average human but he's clever enough to fly and fix a Xwing if he ever needed to

WISDOM: 5/10 Jaz knows that being respectful is usually the best way but something just being honest is just as good

CHARISMA: 4/10 it would be very unlikely he would be able to charm or influence anybody but that doesn't mean he won't try regardless of his success or failure

FORCE POWERS:
no force powers at all

SKILLS:
Jaz is good at piloting even if most of his experiences were convoy escorting or area patrolling and he's good at fixing star fighters and he has a decent aim with blasters and finally had some survival training

jakalian knife-dancing:beginner

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
+good flying ability although it's not the best ability ever
+good at working in a group mostly as a wingman
-socially he can be the most annoying person around not that he actually means to and he tends to socially ackward by being a idiot unless a superior talks to him then he changes to his usual military mindset unless it's a superior he's friends with
-because of a lack of any frontline space combat experience Jaz doesn't realise how big and dangerous it actually can be
-he has little to no experience leading a fighter group

GEAR:
1x DH-17 short carbine pistol holstered on his right hip
1xE-11 blaster rifle usually kept in his room
1x utility belt containing containing food rations,a flask attached to it and a simple fibercord grappling hook
4xpower cells for the DH-17 short carbine pistol
4xpower cells for the E-11 blaster rifle usually kept in his room located right next to the blaster
1X Holoprojector it contains all of the messages his parents had sent to him..including their last moments

SHIP:
ARC-360 heavy starfighter+ J-15B Aethersprite-class Fighter

DROIDS:
a droid called Beat, and it's main function is navigation and inflight repairs to Jaz's starfighters, but it also helps Jaz when he's tinkering with his starfighters,it has three legs when it moves but if it's standing still it tucks it's third leg away until it's needs to move

PETS:
N/A

PERSONALITY:

Jaz personality is a fun one if there was something fun going on he wanted to join in..even if he was socially ackward, if there was any fighting while he was off duty well he wouldn't stop it at all hell to him it was fun to see a fistfight in a idiotic way of seeing things maybe even join in especially if a friend was the one who either A:started the fight or B:his friend had been insulted or C:it was just training just minus any screaming instructors after all it would improve his hand to hand abilities. If anybody was to ask him a question regardless of what it might be his replies would always be simple not because he was idiotic or dumb in any way,it was just the way he answered any questions like if somebody asked if he hated the Sith he would reply with a "No they are who they are and I am who I am" he knew that getting angry or mad at the other side was pointless after all they were doing their jobs and he was doing his.

Whenever he's on-duty he becomes serious a complete opposite of himself than when he's off-duty always walking like he was back in the GA army even though he was now a pilot,he would never forget his training as a ground trooper, however he can still act stupid at times especially around his friends, however should he see a superior he would try to behave and actually look like a former member of the GA navy when once the person was gone he would just go back to being his usual self..unless his friend was said superior then all bets were off.
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After the battle of Klatooine Jaz has become rather cold and seemingly lifeless due to his experiences in his first ever major battle however on the inside he's fighting to recover and get back to his usual self as soon as possible..and become a little less worried about past events and focus on the path ahead of him


BIOGRAPHY:

"Do you want to see the galaxy, Want see new culture, Do you want defend the Galactic Alliance? Then join the Galactic alliance army or Navy and you will be able to those very things"

Those were the promotions and advertisements that Jaz as his parent's only son born on Coruscant had been hearing and seeing and as soon as he turned 16 he joined the Galactic Alliance army with permission and support from his parents who were simple merchants, and so Jaz as a young fresh eyed kid joined the army to do the very things the various advertisements had promised. When he went through the training it was a very hard and long process..however he was struggled with exercises where he had to lead people often leading people into deathtraps, or strategically weak positions, however he seemed to have at least a average ability at the firing range with the E-11 blaster. Whenever he had a chance he would send a message to his parents Steph Corban and Jacob Corban to let them know how he was doing at training and see what had been happening over there.

"And with this latest sweeping victory the GA military is one step closer to winning the war with the Sith Imperium let us hope that we'll keep achieving victory after victory"

About three years past and Jaz's training progressed..however he still struggled with leadership and his instructors were increasing in favour of discharging him out of the army however one of the instructors named Masurii Miller suggested another thing entirely that they should give the man a choice A: Jaz could leave the army and try a different profession as a civilian or B: become a pilot in the navy instead. this choice was hard for Jaz that it took him three days and a incoming message from his parents for the man to come to a decision. Jaz chose to switch from the army to becoming a starfighter pilot for the navy that way he could remain in the Galactic Alliance military and so he switched all his focus on becoming a trained pilot for the GA.

"A few setbacks won't hold the GA military from complete victory compared to other major battles these were only the defeats, we've suffered overall,the Sith Imperium will be defeated once and for all"


During his navy training at the age of 19 he learned the art of dogfighting, however the naval instructors noticed two things, one was that he was really bad in a leadership role but he at least managed to work in a group as a wingman managing to keep behind his leader during a simulated dogfight and the other was that during his time off he was at the hangers tweaking whatever starfighter he was assigned to even though he was told several times to stop in the end they relented and allowed him to carry on as they saw it as a chance to give him a new skill in repairing so if being a pilot wasn't a option he at least had a back-up trade to go to. They also noticed that Jaz had a tendency to annoy fellow pilots and other members of the navy..but apart from that Jaz was just like any other pilot, he wanted to follow his path and even fight against the Sith Imperium.

But as time passed he had a change of heart for his reason to joining the GA military it wasn't that he had to do it to fend off the vicious Sith, it was more of that..HE himself wanted to explore the different worlds..and not be stuck in the mindset that everybody in the Imperium was a bloodthirsty killer with no thoughts to thinks like honor or duty even, so Jaz adopted a more..simple mindset which was:"Everybody is different in their own ways" there was no good or bad Sith same for the members of the imperium's army and navy..and so they were in a job.

"And that is when my parents died...during the battle and fall of Coruscant"

His only crisis of his life so far was when Coruscant had been attacked and his family hadn't managed to get out of the fighting in time..it was during this time near the end of his training he had received his last message from his parents and it contained their final words to Jaz..and just as they were about to tell him something else the message was cut off..which Jaz assumed was because of the fighting that he could hear raging in the background..but not realising the true reason as to what actually happened...and had absolutely no idea what else his parents had to say...So Jaz held onto that small hope that maybe...just maybe his parents were alive.

"And so after my training..I left what was left of the GA military..and drifted..from job to job..moving ever closer to Hutt space"

And so with Coruscant fallen and his training finished just a few weeks afterwards Jaz left heading aimlessly from station to station getting jobs to escort convoys and patrolling a area for signs of pirate activities however each time he was fired for doing the one thing his navy instructors allowed him to do..tinker with the starfighter assigned to him.

As some people have heard from the pilot himself he was apart of the 112nd mynock squadron


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((this is work in progress..i posted this up so I can get some help/ideas for my character and incase my computer dies which is unlikely but you never know so i'll edit this from time to time when I improve the copy I have on my comp but my idea is to have a sort of solider/pilot combination as for the prefix when I do figure out what group to join can it get changed unless I decide to keep it as it is? danke))

That run on sentence just about have me a heart attack.

But anyways, it is my understanding that you need at least 50 words in the Personality and Biography sections. I'd get on that as quick as possible before a rude member jumps at your throat. If you ever need a writing buddy I would be happy to write with you.
 

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my bad lol,but yeah I wanted to get the basics like name,gender ect sorted before doing any indepth things like the bio and personality
 
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bump

managed to get more stuff for my charry at last...took me like a few days now to get some more details about my character(i'm slow at making characters =( dafty knows about it I think...) so I'm just wondering what people think of it so far and any ideas on how to improve it and thanks in advance
 

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everything looks nice to me except the bio could use some more detail. Really that's the only thing I can see the personality is good and gives me a pretty good idea of how he acts (longer then all of your bio mind you) States are explained nicely.

This is a personal preference not something you need but I like pictures :D If you want one Id be more then willing to help you find one.
 

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lol well unfortunanly I didn't find any pic that might suit him =( so I'm trying to visualise what my character is but yeah go ahead maybe you'll have more luck than me and for me personality is easy to do because I have a RP character I can base it on from another site, I just need to see how to improve his bio
 
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A couple of notes.

The galactic alliance fell about 10 years ago, when the mandalorians and the Imperial forces kicked the crap out of them (basically) and destroyed a planet.
The year is 1023, so you might want to alter his age.

There's a timeline available here that should give you some resources for your background
 

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I guess I should have checked the time line my bad

edit: blergh math is not my best thing XD I just hope I got the age right XD
 
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Welcome aboard bro. :happy:
 
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edit changes

14/05/2014 off-duty theme tune and on-duty theme tune(military themed) added
22/06/2014 added a small titbit of the squadron Jaz was a member of
 
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Jaz looks awesome. I love his off duty theme song. I lol'd for a solid three minutes. *bows with great respect to Naruto667* Well played.
 

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Jaz looks awesome. I love his off duty theme song. I lol'd for a solid three minutes. *bows with great respect to Naruto667* Well played.

...o god yes :joytears:..though i was aiming that at insolvent and relent at the time but hey xD

edit: only noticed the reply when i was doing some minor editing as well xD
 
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updated Jaz's rank, added a small bit into his personality to reflect a small change in the personality due to his first experiences of a major battle, and I've remembered to add in the starfighter(or two but I need to check it out) that Jaz has
 
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