Jaina Orsi

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Jaina Orsi
AGE
► 17
SPECIES
► Mirialan
HEIGHT
► 1.67 meters
EYE COLOR
► blue
HAIR COLOR
► brownish
HOMEWORLD
► Mirial
GENDER
► Female
FACTION
► Jedi Order
RANK
► Jedi Shadow
FORCE SENSITIVITY
► Yes

Appearance
A skinny 17 year old girl who hides behind her robs to not get spotted

Biography
Born as a the daughter of a farmer she spent the first three years of her live in peace on the plains of Mirial. But with the war came the first hardships. Their family was on the run, and she grew old enough to remember. And she still does. One of her first memories is the sight of her frozen sister, wich she never got to know well. After three years spent running her family finally got her out. Her ability to let pebbles flow through the air, since her mother was able to persuade a Jedi to take her with her. She was just a little seven year old boarding a ship to somewhere, not knowing what awaited her. But she would soon learn. On the ship she met Sallar Maraar, a boy only two years older than her and the supposed apprentice of the Jedi that had taken her with her. Only on Jeddah would she learn that he was not going to be her Master instead she was transferred to the younglings, much older then the other kids of her class she felt like an outcast and spent much time with Sallar, whom she would call her only friend. Time went on, and so did his training, but she was left behind. Still without a master she had to rely on books to improve her knowledge while Sallar now spent most of the time with his master somewhere. So she used to sneak into the library way after she should be sleeping. When she neared the age of 12 she decided to flee the Jedi order, in fear that the AgriCorps would be her only future within the order. She got all the way to the hanger, and had prepared food and some books. But unable to steer the ship she was unsuccessful to start even the engines and got caught. Her behavior angered her supervisors, and she already expected to become part of the AgriCorps, but the opposite happened. An acquainted Jedi Shadow asked for her to become his apprentice. His former one had died, his training near completion. Her escape was impressive, so he wanted to take her on as his apprentice. She agreed, and with the age of 12 she finally had a master to further improve her set of skills in lightsaber combat, stealth and hiding her presence. She did not enjoy her training. Requesting to be assigned to someone else with a more peaceful profession, but her master explained to her how the best way to protect someone was to destroy the root of the evil and that attack was the best defence and how she should not defy him by requesting a reassignment. They often trained in remote locations, and she saw no one but him. He was harsh, mean and too strict. She was as loyal as she could be, but after her first mission, shortly after her 17 birthday, things went worse. She could not bear the burden of having killed someone whom she deemed innocent. As she told her master about this he underestimated the doubts which had started to corrupt her mind and acted if nothing happened. She was lost. Unwilling to seek help in other Jedi as she earned compliments left and right for the thing she did and unwilling to expose her weakness she grew feared of what she had become a killer. And the morning she awoke with a red saber ultimately doomed her path. After discovering the changes to the crystal which she must have corrupted in her sleep she cried for hours, unsure what to do. Knowing of what inhumane acts she was capable of in her sleep she was on the verge of killing herself. But that would do no good, since the saber would be found within her chamber even if she were to kill herself. She could not speak to her master, had he not once told her that once dipped into the dark side one could do no better than die? He would surly kill her the moment he would find out about the crystal. She could claim to have lost her crystal, but what if it happened again. But after hours of thinking she reconsidered. This monster she had become was not her fault, it was the fault of the Jedi. They had deliberately forged her into a killing machine since she had set foot on the planet against her will and would have used her as a tool for the rest of her live. And before she left Jedha, that night she attacked her master in his sleep, wounding him heavily, and choping one of his legs before leaving

Skills
She is profound in infiltrating buildings in a stealthy manner or by pretending to be someone else. She is also skilled with form V of Lightsaber combat.

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Kuroshi

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Just for the biography it seems.. weird.

It's a wall of text for one, which can make time blur without clear distinction for how old they are during what moments.

Padawans aren't really a thing this TL if I'm remembering correctly that rank was abolished and it was referenced as such in the Jedi order writeup.

It kind of lacks detail, just personally I'd go onto *heavy* detail with the backstory especially for a character like this. Meeting and killing an exile then stealing their master's saber before running off doesn't really seem realistic at least in how it's presented here. It's literally "Oh I've spent most of my life with the Jedi, with them acting as a surrogate family and training me but fuck that and fuck them I'm going out on my own because reasons"

Why did she leave? Why did she hate her master? What's the motivation that drives her? You should try and answer questions like that, for me at least it helps to fully understand the characters I write for before hopping into a thread.
 

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In the tag you have chosen Exile but on the profile you have their faction as Jedi and rank as Shadow. Which is it?
 

shinobi_no_mono

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Oh sorry, it is Exile and Shadow would have been my ex job. But soon I will become an indie, as in rp some people conveid me that the exiles are evil. I will have to change faction soon anyways
 

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You still have Jedi listed as your faction. You also need to add a personality section. Please tag me if you return to this character and have made the requested changes.
 
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