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a picture of jack skywalker and his wife jenny

Name: jack skywalker
Faction: mandolorian
Rank: ?
Species: unknown
Age: 112 (unknown species can live to 1000)
Gender: male
Height: 7 feet
Weight: 100 pounds
Eyes: orange
Hair: green
Skin: yellow
Credits: New characters have 1000 Credits.
Distinguishing Marks: Do they have any scars, piercing, tattoos, etc.?
Dominate Hand: Is your character right or left handed? Alternatively, are they ambidextrous (able to use either hand)?
Force Sensitive: Is your character Force Sensitive?

Strength: really strong
Dexterity: what does this mean?
Constitution: very healthy
Intelligence: smarter than the three wise men
Wisdom: wiser than the three wise men
Charisma: more charming than james bond

Force Powers:
force flight, shatter mind, hidden from the force, mass mind, force teleport, manipulate object, stasis sleep

Skills:
really good with swords and knives. can make fire with his thoughts.

Lightsaber Forms:
vaapad

Strengths and Weaknesses:
he’s really strong and can use a blaster, sword and knives real good. his weakness is his anger.

Gear:
sword, knife, blaster

Ships:
super star destroyer

Pets:
kath hound

Personality:
aggressive, evil and nice

History:
he was born on tatone 2 years after the palpatine died. he joined boba fett and the mandolorians when he was 18 and is there now. he was trained by boba fett for awhile but now he wants a new master because boba wasn’t that nice to him and he doesn’t like people who arent that nice to him so now he wants a new master that will be nice to him unlike boba fett who was not. while he was training he got married to a really hot blonde named jenny and is still married to her today.

Kills:
Post the names of the PC Characters you have killed.

Dueling Ring Matches:
Have you won any matches in the Dueling Ring? If so, who have you beaten?

Grand Tournament Matches:
Have you won any matches in the Grand Tournament? If so, who have you beaten?

RP’s:
Post the links to some of your characters best RP’s.
 
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thanks! i worked hard on it. it took me like 10 minutes.
 
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Lots o problems here.

1: No skywalkers
2: 7 feet and one hundred pounds? That's not just anorexic, but physically and scientificly possible.
3: "His weakness is his anger" as well as that is, there should be more then just his anger issues.
4: "he was born on tatone 2 years after the palpatine died. he joined boba fett and the mandolorians when he was 18 and is there now. he was trained by boba fett for awhile but now he wants a new master because boba wasn’t that nice to him and he doesn’t like people who arent that nice to him so now he wants a new master that will be nice to him unlike boba fett who was not. while he was training he got married to a really hot blonde named jenny and is still married to her today."

You might want to look at the timeline.

5: Agressive, evil, and nice? I'm not sure that is even possible.
6: "Lightsaber style: Vaapad"? Vaapad hasn't been created yet, nor can it be mastered by anyone who isn't mace windu.
 
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Lots o problems here.

1: No skywalkers
2: 7 feet and one hundred pounds? That's not just anorexic, but physically and scientificly possible.
3: "His weakness is his anger" as well as that is, there should be more then just his anger issues.
4: "he was born on tatone 2 years after the palpatine died. he joined boba fett and the mandolorians when he was 18 and is there now. he was trained by boba fett for awhile but now he wants a new master because boba wasn’t that nice to him and he doesn’t like people who arent that nice to him so now he wants a new master that will be nice to him unlike boba fett who was not. while he was training he got married to a really hot blonde named jenny and is still married to her today."

You might want to look at the timeline.

5: Agressive, evil, and nice? I'm not sure that is even possible.
6: "Lightsaber style: Vaapad"? Vaapad hasn't been created yet, nor can it be mastered by anyone who isn't mace windu.[/b]
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1. why?
2. this is star wars. lightsabers and explosions in space aren't exactly scientifcly possible either.
3. why what else should i put?
4. whats wrong with the timeline?
5. palpatine was nice to anikan
6. says who?
 
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<div class='quotetop'>QUOTE(jedimaster1138 @ Apr 1 2007, 05:34 PM) [snapback]157225[/snapback]</div>
1. why?
2. this is star wars. lightsabers and explosions in space aren't exactly scientifcly possible either.
3. why what else should i put?
4. whats wrong with the timeline?
5. palpatine was nice to anikan
6. says who?[/b]
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1. Because you can be a little more original and think up your own name dude.
2. But in a Star Wars they are possible.
3. He doesn't just have one weakness. Use your mind and think of more.
4. Umm...Boba doesnt exist yet. Read the times dude. Seriously you probably haven't read any of the rules at all. Spend some time to read the times and the rules and everything.
5. If you are evil you are not going to be nice. Choose whether hes evil or nice. Or maybe say hes only nice to his wife because he loves her.
6. Umm...because this is before Mace existed and Mace created it!
 
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1) It is prefered not to have cannon names.

2) Lightsabers are scientifically possible, and explosions in space are feasible too. All an explosion is is a cumbustion reaction. As far as I know it is possible to make such a reaction work in a vaccum.

3) Personalities revolve around the way your caracter acts; try thinking about how your character would act around other people and describe that.

4) The timeline is placed quite a few years in the past of your history.

5) Palpatine was "nice" to Anikan so that Anikan would trust him. If you want someone to join you, and you happen to be on the opposite view of their teachings, you can't just come and say "Join me, Jedi *&@#". It is difficult to be evil and nice at the same time.

6) Says the fact Mace Windu invented the form; truthfully, I would love to have that form in my profile, but it is none existant in this time. A person other than Mace could master it, but that would take years of training.

Other comments:

1) your attributes are stacked. You can't be superman in all of them. I don't think that even faction leaders have attributes that high. Also, dexterity, in broad terms, is agility and precision.

2) You may want to explain how you learned the force and are not a member of a Force sensitive faction. You also would then have to explain how you learned, or mastered, all the Unified Force powers.

3) also, in places where you don't have any information, put N/A instead of leaving the profile guilelines i.e. "Post the names of the PC Characters you have killed."
 
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accualy palpatine was deceptive which might seem him act nice to him but it was just a lie not in the way of palpatine being a good guy
 
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Great, the member who created this profile will join your faction! AFTER his account comes back from the dead.
 
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Well, she is Heidi Klum. Even Ray Charles could tell she's hot.
 
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