Jack Owens

Jonny Priest

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Sure... I feel love...
I feel... Sadness...

I even feel... Hapiness...
But in the midst of it all...

Is total...
Bitter...

RAGE

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Beginnings
This could have ended in a better way. It could have ended with you by my side, but it didn't. In the midst of all my emotion, I can only center on my rage. I can only see everything in a reddish tint. You betrayed me. We were brothers, you karking bastard, but that wasn't enough for you, was it?! Well, now you'll have to pay. But first, let me pour salt on this open wound of yours. Let me remind you of the past; the brotherhood we once held so dear to our hearts... Or that I at least held so dear to mine.

We were children. Found, raised, and taught in Sith fashion, and given ambition to guide us through the darkness that they covered our eyes with. We were told that being in the dark didn't mean being evil; it just meant surviving. At all costs. And that's the mentality that we held through our growing up. You were my equal; my brother. Even though you were Twi'Lek, I sought to look past those differences. We were trained in those brutal fighting circles together on that gods-awful desert world, where Imperial force-adept knights tried to kill us at every turn. It was our master's way of keeping our heads on a swivel, us on our feet. It kept us alive afterwards.

Years went by, and we turned fifteen. Our master, that cursed Sith Lord, sent us on an investigation on Kashyyk that put us face-to-face with a Sith renegade. We almost lost our lives in that fight, but with our teamwork and superior training, we overpowered him and killed him. You let me keep his lightsaber, which I hold at your neck right now. But our equality was a strange one, don't you agree? I was the blademaster, and you were the sorcerer. Your force power was to be reckoned with among the acolytes, while my saber skill advanced me far beyond my years. I suppose our master did do something right with us after all.

Take a year's journey into the future and you have that quest on that foreign Star-Cruiser we were sent to sabotage. That was a tricky mission, and we were almost caught and turned in for high treason, which would have meant our heads. You and I displayed tact and resourcefulness. We planted charges all over the engine rooms, planted a virus in their mainframe, released a wild beast loose into its halls, and assassinated a rebel spy while we were there. Then that blasted Trandoshan found us. What ill-timed luck, wouldn't you agree with me, my friend?

But our help came in the most unexpected form; a young Jedi mistress. A beautiful red-haired maiden who was a stow-away refugee appeared from behind some of the crates and killed the officer. She saved our lives, and I made my first friend in the Jedi Order... My only friend in the Jedi... Needless to say, we let her go free without tracking her as per my command; a thanks for helping us escape. I hope that her and I meet again, and that there wouldn't need to be a fight involved.

And lastly, when we were named pirates. We joined that crew with Captain Kieen so that we could sneak into that Hutt fortress to steal some vital information our master wanted... I'm sure it was something treacherous. Needless to say, we were ambitious to be recognized by the Dark Lord of the Sith, so we accepted. We became pirate Sith. Such a remarkable journey that was, and we made many companions and allies. We fought and raided nearly twenty-two ships in half of that year alone. At the end of that year, we acquired the plans and returned home... And I come to find that you and our master were planning to start another war... And I wasn't a part of that plan.

Ambition may have guided us in the past, Errol, but it was never meant to lead to betrayal! You stick true to the Sith code all too well... But now you'll pay for it. You should have followed me on life's path. Perhaps you would have managed to claim the throne with me when I reach it. Instead, you chose treachery. Our master? I turned him in already. I watched them torture and kill him. You? I made sure I could kill you myself.

Feel the sting in your heart that you left me with, you slimy piece of rancor scum.

...

Does it hurt? With these last seconds of your life, think about what could have been...

Jack Owens

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Human
19
Male
Force Adept
Sith
Acolyte
Warrior



Force Powers

Force Push
Force Choke
Mind Trick
Force Blast



Lightsaber Forms
Form IV; Ataru



Relationships



Role-Plays

A Dance With Destruction
 
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Marf

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@Jonny Priest
I really like this guy, and very much enjoy your portrayal of him in the RP. That he's casually sitting at a bar enjoying a smoke, talking up a girl is something I really appreciate. It's hard to come across Sith chars who are realistically humanized without losing too much of their cultural richness and aesthetic. That is pretty much what I look for most in a Sith.

If you'd like a master I can offer up Satoryu, or Andromeda if you'd prefer a Warrior.
 

Jonny Priest

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@Jonny Priest
I really like this guy, and very much enjoy your portrayal of him in the RP. That he's casually sitting at a bar enjoying a smoke, talking up a girl is something I really appreciate. It's hard to come across Sith chars who are realistically humanized without losing too much of their cultural richness and aesthetic. That is pretty much what I look for most in a Sith.

If you'd like a master I can offer up Satoryu, or Andromeda if you'd prefer a Warrior.
Thank you very much for your appraisal. I enjoyed starting that thread and definitely am excited to see how he developes. I think I like the thought of andromeda training him, actually, since he's also a warrior. And I'd be honored to have you as my master. Perhaps you would like to join that thread and have them be introduced?
 

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Is he Mandalorian by any chance?
 

Jonny Priest

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I actually haven't gone into his birth origins, so he very well could be. He doesn't remember, however, since he was raised in the Sith culture.
 
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