Ice in My Veins (Zen)

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Few things were more malevolent than a true Dark Jedi. Yet, even in their passionate hate and corruption, there existed a normale, a partial stabilization that could be identified and understood. In this sense there was contrast to their nature, and opposing side which could equalize and ultimately bring harmony to the galaxy. Jedi balanced Dark Jedi just as the light balanced the dark, and there existed this equal pull for thousands of years. The galaxy had now birthed its antithesis, a being of such discord and chaos that his very nature was substantiated by the icy plains in which his feet crunched tirelessly under.

After many days of trekking the extreme climate of Ando Prime, Kaleem Noor had stumbled upon the black marble wonder that was the Dark Jedi Temple of Bogan. It was vague however, and he could barely see it through the slits carved into the massive scarf wrapped elegantly about his features. Temperamentally he probed the exterior surface of the temple with a gloved finger and traced along the icy particles which had collected against its hull. He marveled, amidst heavy choked breaths, the effect to which merely touching the temple produced, a heavy tip in emotions that momentarily fogged his mental acuity and pushed him to sudden rage.

Further along the young man edged, clinging to the perimeter to the building so that he could brace against the incoming ice storm which had plagued much of his trip. Even dressed appropriately for his environment, the boy showed an eerie resiliency for the simple fact that he'd undertaken a voyage that would have slaughtered many his age. Aside from numbness, however, he seemed driven by a transcendent force that existed beyond himself. A voice inside him bellowed for a dark vengeance that wished to be sated and it was only through the catalyst of the Dark Jedi that he could achieve--

A click stopped his fluent thoughts, and suddenly he found himself stumbling through an open door. A climate controlled area was what lay in front of him. The sudden warmth wracked his frigid nerves and sent them into euphoric pain. He felt burdened to such a degree that he fell to his knees, though made no utterances. He whipped away the scarf from his features and allowed heavy streams of breath to echo across this complex. At this point he waited, silently for something to happen.
 

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The newly Promoted Crusader stood silently. Was it the Darkness that drew him into power, was it hate that drew him into angry, Was it destine force, Or maybe all together that drew him into power he thought slowly. The young boy mere of 13 of age, was going to be teaching a Student that he had hand picked himself, it was very rare to see someone as himself so young as a Crusader some may call him a prodigy. He made his way towards the hall but he was on top of the stairs on the barrack watching. He looked Beitris on a piece of paper and coughed slowly.

He jumped over the edge of the rail to land in front of the man. Menkio wore A dark jedi clothing, A Dark jedi Robe, Two lightsabers on ether side of his belt one on each side, And a bag pack. He glance around and spoke slowly without any further a do."Come please follow me. We welcome you."He said slowly waving his hand hoping for the man to follow if he were to follow they would be moving pass the halls into the chambers of the right in a training area fill with books at this current time.
 

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Kaleem did not stir at the sudden presentation of the Sith, rather, he marveled with timid curiosity at the rather short adolescent before him. His exposed eye could clearly be seen descending at a slow focused pace, tracing along his new guide. His ears, which were a crimson red and seemed stiff suddenly perked to life at the pronounced pitch of Menkio which erased all doubt that his age was considerably lower than Kaleem's. It was Kaleem's supposition that this boy was a mere Acolyte sent to fetch any new recruits which had stumbled haplessly or intentionally into the temple.

The young man stood, snapping suddenly to life and allowing the heavy coat slung about his shoulders to slip off. What remained was a simple black tunic which exposed the vivid, youthful frame of Kaleem. Even for his relatively small size he was pronounced and pep. He gave a nod to Menkio and followed due, keeping silent all the while.

The scenery which had pervaded his senses then suddenly came to life. From the grandeur of the halls transitioned into a unique environment that seemed more quaint. It was a precipice designed more for the intimate study between two or three. It was Kaleem's assumption that the various data pads about him contained a rich history on the Dark Jedi, undoubtedly with extreme bias. He offered a low, appreciative whistle before falling silent in anticipation.
 

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He eyed the man and smiled."Welcome, I am Your master Menkio Nonomyth. Please take a sit we have much to discuss."He said slowly a bit friendly and hyperactive, he would make his way towards the chair and sit down."Please Take a sit."He glanced at the paper and spoke."Kaleem correct? Lovely name isn't it."He said slowly.

He had doubted this day would come but it came his first Student to being going under his teachings Menkio was a proud Boy now and had a lot of respectability now, He had to not make mistakes like he did when he was a Athic himself. He smiled and awaited for his student to sit down. While at the same time smiling like a creep.

(Sorry if it's short I was rushing because computer will automatic shut down soon. Hope you forgive me.)
 

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(Not a problem. :P)

The words had a delay of registry to Kaleem, who arched a prominent brow in the direction of "Master Menkio Nonomyth". There was clear discernment in his features as he wobbled into a nearby chair, and attempting to grasp some comfortable normality from the situation. He ran a hand smoothly through his hair as he recollected things, attempting to put them in valid perspective. All the while he offered an automatic response to the spew of questions.

"It is Kaleem," he chided, though his focus was clearly on staring at Menkio now across from him. The child did exude authority and discipline, just through his subtle mannerisms and the ostentatious seeping of dark energy which spilled from his very being. The factors forced the man to digress. He would simply have to deal with having a younger master.
 

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He smiled."Surprised you seem or in my words, Anyone older then yourself would think of me as a Aothic? Hehehe, I have passed my trails at a younger age and I am a prodigy"He said with a giggling expression.Bragging was not the answer he smiled and spoke quickly making his voice more darker and colder.


"If you pass my trails you'll be the first student ever to get away from a death trap within this trails you would learn, and face dangerous beings within the force as well as gathering of information."He said folding his hands."Now if you may take a sit."He smiled.
 

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Even though Vadim had already seated himself, he did his best to comply with his master's wishes, shifting a bit more upright so as to appear formal and attentive. The rarity of the situation, however, had encapsulated him to a severe degree and it took no additional effort to keep him enthused. No, the surroundings about him melded into a fogged out gray as he'd mused about his master. A prodigy was a rare and spectacular sight indeed, and Vadim felt rather privileged to have been assigned to the boy. Age seemed an irrelevant figure in their wisdom and intelligence and their potential was staggering, nigh, inconceivable.

"You will have my ear regardless of your age, Master," he replied with conviction as a wicked smile spread over his features. The onset of danger magnified the sensation that ran along his spine and tingled his fingertips. Fear was an absent, blank emotion to him and only stirred physically what his mind allowed. It was not fear that drove him, but what he perceived as the emotion and how he reacted to it that he utilized it. His mind was not programmed to see the light or dark of things but rather their truest objective existence.

"Throw at me what you will."
 

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He looked at his student and begun to speak.” Patience student don’t grab more then you chew besides you would first need to prove to me what you know of the history of The Bogan before we begin our real trails.” He said coldly.

Indeed his student seemed patience but at the same time eager in getting things done he paused slowly and would then slowly speak ”Begin from the beginning, this part be boring but it will tell what you know it’s more of an option choice.”He said happily.
 
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