How I met your Mawvorr completed

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Character Name and Level: Giskodee Blokseenx “Kodee”

Character Rank: level 1

Name of Plot: “How I met your Mawvorr” http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/how-i-met-your-mawvorr.90327/

Participants in the plot (Character accounts): Sleen Fe, Klara Kadell, Garren, Dwelo, BD-43

Intended Outcome of Plot: travel to Zakuul, pick up some Mawvorr and bring them to Jaku to sell them to a buyer

Actual Outcome of Plot: was able to pick up the Mawvorr and sell them as intended after several mishaps

Any PVP or Staff DMing involved? No

Link to Dice Roll Thread if used: We used a dice thread for each individual thread. The last post of every topic has the link to its specific dice thread. My mistake if this was incorrect.

Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/zakuul-it-on-me.90340/#post-1513485


The crew being all gathered by Kodee for various reasons have received their mission. The crew receives detail of the mission, specifically capturing 3 Mawvorr for a buyer in Jaku. Upon entering into Zakuul space Kodee attempts to find and land in the most ideal location. Despite a successful landing, issues begin to occur on the ship. It quickly becomes apparent that the mission will not be as easy as intended. Out of a stroke of luck the ship had landed on a previous in habituated camp.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/there-are-no-comms-only-zakuul.90363/


BD, Klara, and Garren set forth to fix the ship. Despite having a mechanic on board this ends up becoming more of a challenge. While attempting to fix the electrical systems a mishap causes the entire ship to plunge into darkness. While Klara is cared to by the medical droid BD-43, Garren is approached by the friends of the previous camp occupants. Thanks to a bluff by the medical droid the Kabuz are scared away.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/beasts-of-zakuul.90366/


The other half of the group split off from the ship as it awaits repairs. Sleen leads the humoring party with Kodee and Dwelo close behind. The hunt initially is very successful with Sleen’s prowess and Kodee’s bait making. However unfortunately due to a malfunction by Dwelo the bait does not deploy as intended. Utilizing an ambush and the help of a swoop bike the hunting party is able to herd the 3 Mawvorr to the camp and lock them in the cage.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/sorry-arthur-that’s-my-ship-now.90387/


With the Ship fried our hunters plus Klara set out into the swamp to track down the Kabuz that had threatened their crew-mate. Finding their camp the duo of Sleen and Kodee launch an ambush while Klara makes a break for their freighter. Able to dispatch of the unsuspecting aliens, klara is able to take over their ship and provide an escape route from the planet.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/who-let-the-dogs-out.90403/


In the final installment of the plot Dwelo, Garren, and BD-43 encounter one last mishap on their way to the buyer. After successfully making contact it is quickly discovered that the beasts had escaped. BD and Dwelo through some quick actions and luck are able to return the beasts to their cage they land. Dwelo utilizing his actor charisma closes the deal with the buyer.


*Bonus Episode*


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/to-pass-time.90424/


In a bonus episode our two hunters plus one mechanic spend a lazy afternoon in the cockpit. While the rest of the crew struggles to finish the deal our three unknowing players merely relax! With the gentle music of a Transdoshan, and the cunning card game of a Rodian and Human bonds are formed. In a stunning finish Kodee is able to steal a Sabacc victory from Klara gaining her future employment.
 

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Character Name and Level: Giskodee Blokseenx “Kodee”

Character Rank: level 1

Name of Plot: “How I met your Mawvorr” http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/how-i-met-your-mawvorr.90327/

Participants in the plot (Character accounts): Sleen Fe, Klara Kadell, Garren, Dwelo, BD-43

Intended Outcome of Plot: travel to Zakuul, pick up some Mawvorr and bring them to Jaku to sell them to a buyer

Actual Outcome of Plot: was able to pick up the Mawvorr and sell them as intended after several mishaps

Any PVP or Staff DMing involved? No

Link to Dice Roll Thread if used: We used a dice thread for each individual thread. The last post of every topic has the link to its specific dice thread. My mistake if this was incorrect.

Relevant Threads and a description per thread in chronological order:


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/zakuul-it-on-me.90340/#post-1513485


The crew being all gathered by Kodee for various reasons have received their mission. The crew receives detail of the mission, specifically capturing 3 Mawvorr for a buyer in Jaku. Upon entering into Zakuul space Kodee attempts to find and land in the most ideal location. Despite a successful landing, issues begin to occur on the ship. It quickly becomes apparent that the mission will not be as easy as intended. Out of a stroke of luck the ship had landed on a previous in habituated camp.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/there-are-no-comms-only-zakuul.90363/


BD, Klara, and Garren set forth to fix the ship. Despite having a mechanic on board this ends up becoming more of a challenge. While attempting to fix the electrical systems a mishap causes the entire ship to plunge into darkness. While Klara is cared to by the medical droid BD-43, Garren is approached by the friends of the previous camp occupants. Thanks to a bluff by the medical droid the Kabuz are scared away.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/beasts-of-zakuul.90366/


The other half of the group split off from the ship as it awaits repairs. Sleen leads the humoring party with Kodee and Dwelo close behind. The hunt initially is very successful with Sleen’s prowess and Kodee’s bait making. However unfortunately due to a malfunction by Dwelo the bait does not deploy as intended. Utilizing an ambush and the help of a swoop bike the hunting party is able to herd the 3 Mawvorr to the camp and lock them in the cage.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/sorry-arthur-that’s-my-ship-now.90387/


With the Ship fried our hunters plus Klara set out into the swamp to track down the Kabuz that had threatened their crew-mate. Finding their camp the duo of Sleen and Kodee launch an ambush while Klara makes a break for their freighter. Able to dispatch of the unsuspecting aliens, klara is able to take over their ship and provide an escape route from the planet.


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/who-let-the-dogs-out.90403/


In the final installment of the plot Dwelo, Garren, and BD-43 encounter one last mishap on their way to the buyer. After successfully making contact it is quickly discovered that the beasts had escaped. BD and Dwelo through some quick actions and luck are able to return the beasts to their cage they land. Dwelo utilizing his actor charisma closes the deal with the buyer.


*Bonus Episode*


http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?threads/to-pass-time.90424/


In a bonus episode our two hunters plus one mechanic spend a lazy afternoon in the cockpit. While the rest of the crew struggles to finish the deal our three unknowing players merely relax! With the gentle music of a Transdoshan, and the cunning card game of a Rodian and Human bonds are formed. In a stunning finish Kodee is able to steal a Sabacc victory from Klara gaining her future employment.

Without looking into it further to begin with, could you explain to me how the plot that was approved as 3 threads ballooned into 6 please? XD

I'm just kind of trying to get to grips with how that even happens XD

As for the dice? So long as I can find them easily enough it's not really too much of an issue :D
 

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What ended up happening to make things easier for the second thread we made it into two. Since the ship was busted we split the party for one thread being a repair crew and the other going hunting. That way it read a little bit more smooth.

We also ended up needing an extra thread to explain how we came across another ship, since due to very bad rolls our first one was toast

As for the bonus thread......I only included it for fun. It doesn’t really need to be in the narrative, it’s more like a filler episode we did for fun, but I thought whoever reviewed might just enjoy for the laughs.
 

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What ended up happening to make things easier for the second thread we made it into two. Since the ship was busted we split the party for one thread being a repair crew and the other going hunting. That way it read a little bit more smooth.

We also ended up needing an extra thread to explain how we came across another ship, since due to very bad rolls our first one was toast

As for the bonus thread......I only included it for fun. It doesn’t really need to be in the narrative, it’s more like a filler episode we did for fun, but I thought whoever reviewed might just enjoy for the laughs.

Alright man so! :D

In future, please try and keep to the number of threads that was agreed upon submission - we don't want to pad out plots too far since they add credits which have real, in character, consequences considering they're tied to how strong/skilled a character is. That being said, got a concern;

  • Some of the threads are a bit short - 6 posts is not usually considered long enough to achieve a thread objective without major corner cutting somewhere, you know
With that in mind and the fact that it was approved for only 3 threads? I'm going to grant credits for 3 threads to all participants and you are all granted the tech you requested since none of it was really massively restricted stuff.

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