Hollow Halls and Hollow Hearts OOC

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Edit that one maybe? I feel the way it is now any escape is pretty much impossible.
You don't have to do anything dramatic or such. A simple line about her being nowhere to be seen and the bowl of beetles abandoned would be enough.
 

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So Kip's going to chase after the beetle girl? XD
 

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"You can run, but you'll only die tired."

Hmm, interesting choice, you have made.

I could definitely do that, though the problem is it would be rather difficult to sneak away with the room nearly empty. Besides the Kel Dor and Telon there are only bodies on the floor.

However, here's my idea.

The moment the shield rises up, she realizes that this chaos might be her only chance to escape. She may not have been in the hutt's palace as long as the other two companions, but certainly long enough to know some of the more hidden secrets. Using B'alrok's body as cover while he is distracted by the unexpected arrival of his cousin she shoves a body aside revealing a hatch. This hatch leads downwards, but no to any kind of beast or trap as she has never seen Lagota use it as such. At this point it's a gamble she is willing to take, and she decides to dive right down the rabbit hole.
 

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Sure, that would be fine with me.
Whatever works with you is fine with me actually, considering that this is your NPC that I HOPE to take ownership of later. I really just need her to escape in a way so that I wouldn't have to come back later, cause we don't time before the TS, and I also don't wanna have to gut a hutt to get at her.
 

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"My mother said not to talk to strangers. Especially one's with extra stubby limbs and masks." XD

Here's what I added. Might elaborate and fix it a bit when I'm not so tired, but it should still read the same later on so anyone can reply now.

Intently focused on the scene of the hutt collapsing into the dirt from where he had sat atop his low pedestal, those in the room were oblivious to the small pantoran, who, overcome with fear of what might follow, had decided to take her chances and make an escape.

Slinking away while Lagota was distracted, it took all the strength in her malnourished body to shove a large Shistavanen aside to reveal a rusted iron grate not far from B'alrok's pedestal. Inserting her small lilac fingers through the holes in the grate she pried it open without a sound and climbed into the filth within. Soon disappearing out of sight.
 

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"I once went out in public without my cloak and mask in a drunken stupor, didn't see the school bus dropping off kids till it was too late. Loudest shrillest screams ever."
LMAO I like that you read Kip's CS a bit.

Changes look good to me. Thanks for doing them even though this thread isn't exactly too friendly.
 

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Well Marci me, Kip doesn't mess around.

I'm thinking of adding in a little action to avoid death here seeing as I don't see any great comeback. Maybe B'alrok's goons finally arrive and interrupt the party?
 

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Well Marci me, Kip doesn't mess around.

I'm thinking of adding in a little action to avoid death here seeing as I don't see any great comeback. Maybe B'alrok's goons finally arrive and interrupt the party?
Oh yeah, I meant to post something here.
Yeah, sorry bout that. Usually I'd be more than happy to play along, doing the whole epic action finale thing with lots of wordplay. Unfortunately, the TS is tomorrow and to my knowledge, all threads have to be completed, which is why I just said screw it and mashed out a post with nothing but murder actions.

Huzzah?
 

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Dmitri did you delete my other message?
Had a screenshot here...

Anyway, maybe it conflicted with the skip info.

Basically I just said that while threads are supposed to be wrapped up in a timely manner I think that it will be fine to conclude it within a couple days.

I would post now, but after waking up at 4AM and doing things across the lower half of the state all day I'm not in the best writing shape.
In any case I will try to get something out tomorrow if that's alright with you.
 

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I'm terribly sorry for being inactive. It's hard to juggle this with school. I'm gonna try to make time to hop on here on weekends and possibly some week days.
 

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Dmitri did you delete my other message?
Had a screenshot here...

Anyway, maybe it conflicted with the skip info.

Basically I just said that while threads are supposed to be wrapped up in a timely manner I think that it will be fine to conclude it within a couple days.

I would post now, but after waking up at 4AM and doing things across the lower half of the state all day I'm not in the best writing shape.
In any case I will try to get something out tomorrow if that's alright with you.
That's fine
 

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Nothing prevents members from doing flashback threads. We can conclude it in a few posts. B'alrok's thugs arrive, Xanthier escapes in the commotion, Kip goes off to find his beetle girl...

I was going to reply on the 4th but as you know the site was down.
Then yesterday this happened.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?posts/1355434/

@Lagota Desijilic If you are around this weekend I can possibly include the Kel Dor in a couple of posts to finish off the meet and greet as well. Maybe you can make him one of your NPC goons?
Though I'd rather not draw out the thread too much longer so if Narci decides to do it and we finish it's done etc.

@Edgeworth
Don't know what happened to you man but I hope you are alright and that we get to do something in the future.
 

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Nothing prevents members from doing flashback threads. We can conclude it in a few posts. B'alrok's thugs arrive, Xanthier escapes in the commotion, Kip goes off to find his beetle girl...

I was going to reply on the 4th but as you know the site was down.
Then yesterday this happened.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/index.php?posts/1355434/
Yes I did see that, personally, I wouldn't have taken that shit at all.
Anyways, I think there's been a misunderstanding, Kip is here to KILL Xanthier. I'm sorry if I didn't make that clear ealier.
Also, I'm not sure a flashback thread would be appropriate for this situation, or if the admins would prefer it.....
 

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I know why he's there. He's an assassin after all.
I also made it pretty clear that I didn't want to kill anyone's character right there in the first post as I expected a ton of opposition (which there was.) We didn't harm Telon for that exact reason. I didn't debate hits and tried to make it realistic because I think that's more fun and Kip will certainly have another chance in the future.
 

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Yes, you did say that...Which is why I specifically sent you a PM asking if I could come in and try to claim the bounty AKA kill Xanthier. And you said go ahead and join.
Of course I didn't harm Telon, he was a new member in a (mostly) death disabled thread. He didn't even have a bounty on him to try and claim.....
That's kinda why I included this little line from my opening OOC post.
buuuuut we've entered PvP, a non-lethal variant for most here,
I mean, I've been operating this whole time off the intent of trying to kill Xanthier, even if the thread got a bit wonky in some places....
 

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That's fine, though it doesn't exactly mean I agreed to killing off the character in this thread and I'd appreciate a believable exit to continue on into the skip.
 

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That's fine, though it doesn't exactly mean I agreed to killing off the character in this thread and I'd appreciate a believable exit to continue on into the skip.
But it does mean you agreed to the possibility right?
I mean, my exact words in the PM were
"I'm sure you noticed that the Shadow Conclave has a bounty on your guys head......
Would you mind if I hopped into that new open thread you made and tried to claim it?"
I thought I was being pretty clear.

As for the believable exit....um.....Any force able to chase Kip away would surely be too much for Xanthier at this point, especially in this condition. It would take a very unbelievable exit for Xanthier to somehow get away at this point.
I agree this is a pretty weird situation, but that's partly why I was so intent earlier on just getting it done, to avoid all this. I understand asking you to literally agree to your characters death is a bit over the top, but ICly considering Kip's skill and proximity, along with Xanthier's condition,.....how would that even be avoided at this point?
 
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