Hika's training

[Jordan A]

Hika got ready and up today. He put on his jedi robe and he headed to the room inside the temple where Hika's master Mol Slang would be teaching and training him today. He did some stretches and meditated then got up ready for his training. He awaited his master. He ate a little bit of food then begun to meditate again.

 

[Captain Awesome]

Mol strode up to the cross-legged rodian. Mol noted Hika's lidless eyes, staring aimlessly into the distance. He announced his presence with a sharp clear of his throat.

 

[Jordan A]

Hika stood up ending his meditation. He bowed to his master. "So how will training begin today master Slang?" Hika let one hand stay open and the other clenched into a fist. He'd have to be ready for anything unexpected.

 

[Captain Awesome]

Mol raised an eyebrow at the rodian's remark. "Master Slang? I believe the name you're looking for is 'Master Sang'. It's a Zabrak name."Mol glanced up and down at the padawan. He reminded Mol of himself, a few years younger.
"Come walk with me."

 

[Jordan A]

"Sorry, but my use of Basic isn't very good; I mispronounced. A simple mistake, master Sang." He walked towards Mol his new master. He let the hand he formed into a fist go to open handed once again. "Where will we be walking to? If I may ask. Hika knows three things about his master. His master is Zabrak and his name was Mol Sang also he is a jedi knight next to that he knows nothing.
Hika was eager to begin his training but he must keep calm as to not appear a pest to his master. Hika once heard a saying "The Force is like newborn treat it carefully". Hika like this saying. It would one day become his
motto . But still he must finish his training before anything.

 

[Captain Awesome]

"You shall find out when we arrive," said the master airily, the tiniest knowing smile breaking his thin lips, as he took an easy pace down the peacefull halls.
"So tell me, Hika," began Mol as he strode towards his unknown destination. "How long have you been with the Jedi Order?"


OOC: Okay, I'm not only here to teach your character how to be a jedi, but to teach you as a user how to RP. Lemme take a look at your last post:

"Sorry but my use of basic isn't very good I missed pronounced it simple mistake master Sang."

I think the biggest thing to work on, not only in this sentance but in general, are the cadences - the punctuation. For example, instead of what you put above, ideally, you would put something along the lines of,
"Sorry, but my use of Basic isn't very good; I mispronounced. A simple mistake, master Sang."

And so on, and so fourth. A general tip for you is to read over your post, like you'd read a book. What sounds wrong? So, how 'bout in your next post, you try doing that and we'll see what it looks like.

 

[Jordan A]

OOC: edited

Hika walked by Sang's right side. "Well I've been with the order all my life in fact I was raised by jedi". He smiled like his master did but it looked kind of different it was the kind of smile you gave someone you disliked but had to work with. "Ever since I was thirteen I was trained in the force only to know pull push and the weak persuasion but my last master was killed". "For future information please no more suprises". He hated suprises never knowing what to expect.

 

[Captain Awesome]

"Once you achieve unity with the Force, there will be no surprises," replied Mol.
"You see, the Force is not limited to our three dimentions," explained Mol. "Even the dimention of time, it touches. All you must do is open your eyes."

 

[Jordan A]

"The option of unity might not exist"."The option of force sight is not a option for someone such as myself." He said. "Time is yet like oxygen we can't see it but we know it is there, with time we have knowledge of it going by" . "If only I was a Miraluka" He thought. On the plus side if Sang was using telepathy to read Hika's thoughts he might have a chuckle.

 

[Captain Awesome]

Mol stopped, his eyebrows raised slightly. This apprentice surprised him with his glib. "Ah, he began, "But that is one of the reasons I am here. To teach you exactly what you can, and cannot do. You will surprise yourself."
Mol continued down the hallway, closer to his destination.
"It is a sad truth, however, that the only means to achieve true unity with the Force is to leave your brittle form to join it. But that does not mean you can come close. We have masters, even in this building who have attained this measure of unity, through which they have forseen thousands of years to come."
And finally Mol reached his destination, stopping at a bluish, metallic door. He reached out with the Force and located the switch, inside the door. It slid apart. That was one of the oddities of the Ossus meditation rooms, they could only be opened through the Force. Meditating Jedi did not like to be disturbed.
"But enough of that for now. Before I can teach you anything, you must first teach me. Have a seat."

 

[Jordan A]

He followed Mol into the meditation room. He stopped before he opened the door then went inside. He took a seat. "What can I simple padawan teach his own master?" he asked.

 

[Captain Awesome]

"Simple," replied Mol as he assumed a cross-legged position on one of the small, shaded circular room's three cushioned seats. "You will tell me about yourself."

 

[Jordan A]

Hika sat across from his master. He didn't trust Mol. "Well what would you like to know?"
Hika didn't like talking about himself.

 

[Captain Awesome]

Mol was prepared to ask Hika who he was like, why he was so... sad. But when he asked the question, he felt Hika's distrust, like a beacon. He wouldn't be surprised if every knight in the meditation floor hadn't felt it.

But it could not be helped. Trust comes with experience.

So instead, Mol asked, "For starters, do you have any control over your gift with the Force?" Mol never liked to say "Force powers". It sounded so... raw.

 

[Jordan A]

""Well master I have learned pull push and the weakest form of the jedi mind trick force persuasion." Hika disliked giving away secrets. In combat he wanted to remain with the upper hand. But hopefully he wouldn't have to fight his own master.

 

[Captain Awesome]

Mol nodded. He technically wasn't supposed to teach him anything until he was sure he had his motives in the right place, but this was such a perfect oppertunity, he couldn't help but share his knowledge, just this once.
"Ahh, pushing and pulling. It's useful, but... crude.
The concept behind such things as you make a wall with the Force, and you just poke and prod the world around you. It can be improved so easily. All you have to do is move your wall, so that it envelops."
Mol glanced around for him to practice on, and found a cushion on the floor. He plopped it on the floor between them.
"Now," he began. "Try picking up this cushion. And remember - surround it with the Force, so you can move it from all sides."

 

[Jordan A]

He aimed his right hand at the cushion as if it was a dangerous weapon. He pulled a rag over his eyes. He focused his energy the force into his right hand.
He remained calm. And slowly the cushion moved forward and back agian.
He removed the rag from his eyes and kept put his hand down to examine the cushion.
He swore in rodian. "Sorry master, i've failed to do what you wanted me to do." He said in basic.

 

[Captain Awesome]

"Don't be sorry," Chastized Mol gently. "I didn't expect you to get it your first time." Mol, not moving, picked up the cushion through the Force, so that it floated weightlessly at eye level. "We'll start with something a bit easier. I want you to twirl the cushion, first horizontally, then vertically."

 

[Jordan A]

He placed the rag over his eyes once more. He aimed his right hand again at the cushion. He focused and the force moved into his hand. He moved the cushion first horizontally, then vertically. He then reunited it with it's original spot. He removed the rag unsure and looked at the cushion unsure if he moved it. He looked at his master.

 

[Captain Awesome]

Mol nodded appreciatively. "There you go. That's your first step. Now, try to push it into a 'U' shape."