Hika Yoano

[Jordan A]

NAME: Hika Yoano
FACTION: Order of Jedi
RANK: Jedi Padawan
SPECIES: Rodian
AGE: 17
GENDER: Male
HEIGHT: 6’2
WEIGHT: 175 Lbs
EYES: Black
HAIR: None
SKIN: Green
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS: None
DOMINATE HAND: ambidextrous
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes

STRENGTH: As strong as the next guy.
DEXTERITY: Nimble
CONSTITUTION: Perfectly fine.
INTELLIGENCE: Knowledge in the ways of the Jedi. Knowledge of Shii-ChO.
Knowledge of how to create a lightsaber.
WISDOM: Average wisdom
CHARISMA: Charming
FORCE POWERS:
Force Push
Force Pull
Force persuasion
SKILLS:
Ability to use a lightsaber
Skill in hand to hand combat
LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
Shii -Cho
STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Good in Shii-Cho
Good in hand to hand combat
GEAR:
Yellow lightsaber
Holocron
Datapad

SHIP:
None
PETS:
None
PERSONALITY:
Hika is known for being awfully quiet at times which means he is thinking.
He is practical and everything in his eyes is negotiatable. He is calm never really showing emotions. Which makes people around him think he is emotionless. He is shy but has moments when he is talkative. He tends to keep to himself alot.
HISTORY: Hika Yoano's birth was never officially known. He was although found on the steps of the jedi order on Ossus. He was raised by Master Yoano of the jedi order. So Hika took Yoano's name in honor of him. At age 10 Yoano discovered that Hika was force sensetive. Hika after recieving the news from Yoano himself was happy and excited.

Hika wanted to be trained and was eager but Yoano refused to teach Hika anything but Force pull. So when Hika was 13 Yoano took Hika as a apprentice. He trained every day on the move force pull so that Hika would master it. When Hika turned 14 Yoano taught him force push . Hika didn't like learning these simple things. So Hika at age 15 ran away from the order and went to live in the forest land of Ossus.

Hika later ran out of rations and returned to the order only to find Yoano had gone off to look for him. But he was attacked during his search. A alsakan attacked him. Yoano couldn't handle the pain and negotiated with the attacker. He showed no mercy and killed Yoano.Hika after receiving this news searched the forest of Ossus.

He found Yoano's lightsaber. He took it and ignited it he saw it was yellow. He loved the color of it. He disignited it and concealed it among the rags he wore and called clothes.
He returned to the Order to be demoted to the rank of Jedi hopeful. Hika decided he would stay in the order and further his training in the Force.

He wants to learn more of the Jedi way. He continues to live on Ossus and further his study of the Jedi way of life and culture. One day he in his one room home he built on Ossus. "Why not hunt down the man who killed Yoano?" He thought.
"No" A voice in his head said. "For that isn't the Jedi way".

Later he was tooken as a padawan under jedi knight Mol Sang.

KILLS:

DUELING RING MATCHES:

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:

ROLE-PLAYS:
Hika's training

Note: I'm going to read rules and timeline checkout useable planets ect. So it may be sometime before I actually rp anything.

 

[Baroness]

"Yoano ended his own life not having the will to live."

"Why not hunt down the men who killed Yoano?"

?

Also, should you really be making a new character when you just made another one you haven't even used?

 

[Jordan A]

Well I'm going to rp as them both I just made this one first so when I start rp'ing I can get a force sensetive view of the game and a non force sensetive
view of this rpg. So to answer your simple little question I say yes.
:CStern:

 

[Jordan A]

Also, should you really be making a new character when you just made another one you haven't even used?

Why do you ask?:CHappy:

 

[Izz]

Here goes my attempt at constructive critisism

On the positive side:
The personality was okay.

On the negative side:
I think that a jedi being attacked and beat up by a few thugs is a little strange, to say the least. A jedi going into so much pain from said attack that he refuses to live is just plain messed up, unless the muggers gave him a mental illness of some type. And spending a whole year on force pull, and then running away when somebody tries to teach you force push is pretty screwy too.

Basically, everything could be drastically improved, but his backstory could use improvement the most.

On the grammar nazi side:

One day he in his one room home he built on Ossus.

That's a sentence fragment...




And I'm not too sure on the rules regarding how much a beginner's force-sensitive char can know or how powerful he can be.