Help with upcoming character

[Skyway]

I need help with writing an upcoming sith character. I have the story laid out in my mind but I can’t seem find the words to go on paper. Can someone help me with tips and/or a sit down on the right words? :)


“it hard for me to ask for help 0.o”

 

[Andrewza]

what have you got so far. Give the basic out line.

 

[Darkwasp]

Personally, finding music that represents my character helps me write. Then looking back on what you wrote (editing process) and find synonymous that best reflect the feeling of your character. Music; idea; edit closer to character.

2 cents added.

 

[Skyway]

I have the basic info "name (Ash), age (24), race (Echani), and he is force sensitive, ect". I also want him to be a sith assassin of sorts. :)
As for bio I have only a few sentences plus some outline. I have a hard time with detail and it was a goal of mine to work at that this year "#FAIL"
I do listen to music when I write to space off but most time than not the theme for a character dose not come until end :/

Spoiler: Outline

This is a rough-rough outline. All support character will have names in final, maybe.
Roughly He "Ash" and his father live in the under city of Coruscant before the fall. Ash father is an control freak and con-man. Becomes thief and get punish by father if not bring in credits. Hurt his son more than a punishment "give scar" and Ash runs away. Father sort of goes crazy.
Ash later finds two new friends "Both siblings and old slaves" and they invite Ash as new family. Coruscant is attack (rp stroy line) and the brother is kill by saving Ash and his sis for form a falling building. Try to escape the sister get stab by Ash father in a finale comeback for his son love. Ash in anger unknowing force crush his father and pass out.
An on looker sith form first wave saw and take Ash away to a sith ship. See more death. Begins his train as a sith hopeful. Becomes an sith acolyte. Story begins.

 

[Andrewza]

ok

how long was he away from his farther. If he is 24 that means he was 14 during the fall.

Why did his farther go after him during the attack or did he stumble on them

Why did the farther kill the girl. Maybe she helped him escaper his farther and it was due to love.

What is Ash's current motivation. It could be a desire to rid the world like his farther.