Flex "Oh Neil" Thono

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NAME:Flex"Oh Neil"Thono
FACTION:The Galactic Republic
RANK:Private
SPECIES:Human
AGE:16
GENDER:Male
HEIGHT: 6 feet
WEIGHT:200
EYES:blue
HAIR: blue
SKIN: Tan
CREDITS: 1,000 credits
DISTINGUISHING MARKS:None so far.
FORCE SENSITIVE:Yes

STRENGTH:6/10
DEXTERITY:5/10
CONSTITUTION: 9/10
INTELLIGENCE: 4/10
WISDOM: 4/10
CHARISMA: 5/10

FORCE POWERS:
Force sense

SKILLS:Basic sniper skill shooting skills survival skills medical skills and basic battle skills.

LIGHTSABER/SWORD FORMS:
None

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:
Strengths:Training makes him stronger his confidence Determination And Angry. Weaknesses:Failed Missions,Lost a person in battle..Or comrade.

GEAR:
http://tools-of-death.ru/hot/ho01/NWT-20 (20mm).jpg):9980 Sniper
http://shop.gameplay.co.uk/images/products/RM02857_1_lq.jpg:34456 Automatic machine laser buster
http://www.clanlc.com/blackhawk/images/halo/m6d_pistol.jpg:Mini Pistol busters
http://omghalo.blogfaction.com/global/radar/blog_images/51814-1.jpg:Turrat automatic machine gun laser buster
http://www.bungie.net/images/Games/...guide/pistol/Halo3-ODST_Automag-Pistol-02.gif:Persoanl Automatic Laser gun
http://www.freewebs.com/halo2dictator2/magnum.jpg:Hand gun
http://www.freewebs.com/halo2dictator2/shotgun.jpg:Persoanl Shotgun
http://www.sz-wholesale.com/uploadFiles/M9 bayonet_ military knife_ hunting knives_118.jpg:Knives
http://images.wikia.com/halo/images/d/dd/BnetH3pistol.jpg2nd Personal Automatic Laser handgun
http://i.ehow.com/images/GlobalPhoto/Articles/5046282/202103-main_Full.jpgT.G.R Republican Long rifle
Wears under the armor Blue boxes blue shirt pants and socks. over the armor his weapons..And over that his robe that hides the things he wears besides his long rifle over his robe so people wouldn't know he works for the Republic.




SHIP:T.G.R
1219679502_Pelican_dropship_front.jpg

http://www.webwombat.com.au/games/images/halo-3-5.jpg:Night Rider
http://images.wikia.com/halo/images/thumb/3/3f/Warthog_gauss.jpg/300px-Warthog_gauss.jpg:Turrot Night Rider X002
http://images.wikia.com/halo/images/2/27/Hornet_Halo_3.jpg:Star ship Mini fighter X7
http://www.haloforever.com/images/masterchief_ghost_small.gif:Ghost Night rider
http://www.webwombat.com.au/games/images/halo-3-5.jpg:Pytootype type Night Rider




PETS:
None

PERSONALITY:
He is very calm at times if meeting come at hold..He can be angry and very cocky at times..He is also seemed..Very cocky when people go to his business like if someone were to go inside his ship and try touch something he'll get very cocky.Things that make him very happy is doing missions and getting paid well...Or rewarded.He likes to feel happy when his doing or training because that's where everything begins at.

HISTORY:
The begin of the war machine..In a galactic world of people that lead wars and jedis and dark myths that walked upon this very world of doom That no one seemed to ever find peace in this worlds..There was a Child that was born in the middle of a war..In a deep label after his mother passed away from birth.

The scientist begun doing tests on this young boy the first test they did was. to find out wither he had the force the force which they did find out..By simply doing simple test on him, although it was rather sad..In why they would do this tests. A few days passed doing the war war while there encirclement passed while the boy was put in a healing resorption tank to begin the first part of the test as for the hutts.. They were working for the hutts of course. The hutt needed a child dead or alive and he would have payed them well until like they decided to do tests on him..Few hours pasted as in than the alert of the enemy troops alarm kicked in it seemed the contain of the mother computer room was smashed. Therefore injected into a new system.. The alarm went off and the people begun doing work.. it was 70% off the first part compete, Until. A door spread open and the troops came in assisting the people the person that lead the Troops was the father of the son that had been put into, the tank He told his men to release the child and bring him up towards our ship for porting. After the people had been handcuffed and Troops left with the baby there was one person that had expelled the troops into his own hand..He didn't expel them more like more like evade them and injected the mother computer overload and locked him self in and locking everything in side but it was only..The people and himself and the Father of that son.. The father was smarter he was a step ahead when the he hit the mother computer overload shift. The system completely shut all the lights.Opened the doors or path the Father was heading to. He head up towards his ship and took off. He hit the last ship which lead the lock down off the mother computer go hire wirer.

Age 10 Beginning or the End off life?

At age ten The baby had grown into a mirthless solider at his dads training grounds training every day off his life...

Age 16 time to make a choice.

Once he fully passed his father's training he had been given his armor and everything even his dads ship, for some strange reason. He was also was given a letter to travel to a planet where his training will be complete and successful..He looked at the letter and read over it a few times..And than a solider came towards him in his dads training phase and spoke to him The father was dead..And all hope was lost when he got angry,But not all hope was lost when he calmed down..He still had the letter to make sure the hutts felled to dead.. As he enter the war ship he was given men and more equipment and and more new things the ship was upgraded to a war prototype war ship machine of dangerous decimation warfare.He left his former training grounds And headed to the. The Galactic Republic for his life and training.

KILLS:


DUELING RING MATCHES:


GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:


ROLE-PLAYS:

While the City Dreams

Save The Beautiful Actress From Being Eaten By Monsters!
 
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Can someone comment please? ^.^
 

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Can someone comment please? ^.^
Someone will. You just posted it, so it'll take time for people to see it.

Anyways, your ship is not acceptable as a personal vessel for two reasons: 1.) Venator-class star destroyers will never be commercial vessels. 2.) Venator-class star destroyers do not exist in this timeline. Also, no X-wings or those speeder bikes from the movies.

You also have a ton of gear. Don't dump everything you can find on one person - no one is going to carry 10 different firearms on himself.
 

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Yeah, Okay Lavi i carry some off those stuff i change the the ship?Okay and Lavi the Speeder thingy?And the star thingy?And everything else is it fine?I believe i changed it i took out the star ship the thingy over there and the speeder bikes.
 
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Yeah, Okay Lavi i carry some off those stuff i change the the ship?Okay and Lavi the Speeder thingy?And the star thingy?And everything else is it fine?
I should have phrased what I said more clearly. You are not going to be able to own your own capital ship, in general. You can carry some of the gear you put on your character, but all of it on one character is too much.

By the way, can you just edit your previous posts instead of creating a new one when you are the last one to post in the thread?
 

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Sorry i just i mean can you show me or give me links to reasonable ships i can own? Like a middle sized ship..With myself in it and by all the Wearable gear i have of course i can't have all off them in one char that's why i have the ship to store the gear i am not using.At the min? Or moment?
 

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Sorry i just i mean can you show me or give me links to reasonable ships i can own? Like a middle sized ship..With myself in it and by all the Wearable gear i have of course i can't have all off them in one char that's why i have the ship to store the gear i am not using.At the min? Or moment?
An acceptable ship size would be a rough equivalent to the Millennium Falcon or a freighter.

You don't really need numerous different sniper rifles and pistols, so...
 

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Really went full out on the Halo thing, didn't you?
 

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Aww.. Yeah i did i take out some off the weapons.
 

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He wears the suit so people wont know he's a republican? What? Just because Obama is president doesn't mean he has to hide his political beliefs.

Just kidding of course. I know you meant that he was someone in the Republic so I would change that to "so people wouldn't know he works for the Republic" or something :)
 

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He wears the suit so people wont know he's a republican? What? Just because Obama is president doesn't mean he has to hide his political beliefs.

Just kidding of course. I know you meant that he was someone in the Republic so I would change that to "so people wouldn't know he works for the Republic" or something :)

Thanks i will change it.
 
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