Fight Club Cassia Vargas vs. Vaet Sertur OOC

[anzat17]

Hey there @Ero , making this for us, and to raise an issue I have with your last post. In your previous post you seemed to have written it like he was going for a punch aimed at her head, to this post where hes pulling it back at the last moment. The problem I have here is that it's sort of like a catch 22, if he was going to use it as a feint, I feel like you should have said so in that post. As it was written I feel like he was going for a straight up attack, no feint involved.

Thread link.
http://www.thestarwarsrp.com/forum/...sia-vargas-vs-vaet-sertur.83452/#post-1452495

 

[Berndebrox]

Oof. My bad, because I had intended it as a feint, I just did not write it in due to inexperience. In the future, I shall be sure to include such trickery. If you want the reasoning behind the lack of text on it, I guess at the time I wanted to provide realism? However, I can understand how it is underhanded, and if you want, I will edit to react to your attack rather than complete my own. Maybe have it that he'd meant to feint, but she'd managed to catch it, or something like that. So to reiterate, I understand the confusion and where it came from, but I had intended a feint from the start. Again, if you want, I will edit my reply.

 

[anzat17]

If you could please, but yea if you had said maybe something like "A crossing blow aimed at her head, that he would pull back at the last second without any sign of it being a feint beforehand" I'd definetly have written mine differently, but it's be in your favor, just imo how you could do that in the future :)

But yea if you could please redo your post and just let me know when your done please? :)

 

[Berndebrox]

Edited. It might look like a multi-attack in a single reply, but that's just one. The detail is to elaborate how he sets it up from where he is now.