Fenton Lee

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[size=+2]IDENTITY[/size]
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NAME​
Fenton Lee​
FACTION​
None (Sith Hopeful)​
RANK​
None​
SPECIES​
Human (Apatros)​
AGE​
20 (Born in 1003 ABY)​
GENDER​
Male​
HEIGHT​
5'9" - 175 cm​
WEIGH​
177 lbs - 80.5 kg​
EYES​
Silver​
SKIN​
Rotten... or so his appearance would lead someone to believe so.​
CREDITS​
0​
DISTINGUISHING MARKS​
His rotten flesh.​
FORCE SENSITIVE​
Yes​

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[size=+2]ABILITIES & SKILLS[/size]​

FORCE SENSITIVITY​
70%​
Fenton's connection to the force has been his lifeline within the Galactic Slave Trade. Unbeknownst to him... it was his strength in the force that kept him alive during the "cleansing". He has yet to learn of his affinity to the force.​
STRENGTH​
35%​
Having spent his entire life as a slave, Fenton has never really been properly nourished. He would benefit greatly from a proper diet.​
DEXTERITY​
80%​
Fenton has always been quick on his feet... but years of combat have pushed him to consistently rely upon his speed and agility to make up for his lack of power. He's grown confident in his abilities and strongly believes in the statement. "I'd rather be hit by a single wasp than a thousand bees."​
CONSTITUTION​
50%​
Though his appearance says otherwise... Fenton is actually not on the brink of death. All things considered he seems to be in average health.​
INTELLIGENCE​
50%​
Fenton has always had a fairly keen mind, nothing to write home about... but he is by no means an idiot.​
WISDOM​
15%​
Having been in the slave trade since birth with majority of his years serving as a fighter , Fenton has never really had the ability to seek knowledge.​
CHARISMA​
10%​
Horrid. Though in truth... he's never really had the opportunity to really speak to anyone and probably never will due to his grotesque appearance.​
HAND TO HAND COMBAT​
80%​
Given the fact that since the age of nine, he's been placed into the fighting pits in duels to the death... at a rate of two fights in a year due to the recovery time required after each fight. At eleven years in the blood sport, Fenton has killed twenty-six times and each one of the was different. Each one of the did have a factor in common though, every victim was claimed by his bare hands... weapons were not allowed within the pits.​

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[size=+2]LIGHTSABER FORMS[/size]​

FORM ??​
0%​
Fenton has yet to learn this form of Lightsaber combat..​
FORM ??​
0%​
Fenton has yet to learn this form of Lightsaber combat​

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[size=+2]FORCE POWERS & ABILITIES[/size]​

FORCE POWER - ??​
0%​
Fenton has yet to learn this force power​
FORCE POWER - ??​
0%​
Fenton has yet to learn this force power​
FORCE POWER - ??​
0%​
Fenton has yet to learn this force power​

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[size=+2]POSSESSIONS[/size]​

SHIP​
N/A​
DROIDS​
N/A​
PETS​
N/A​

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[size=+2]THE MIND OF THE MONSTER[/size]​

PERSONALITY:

Animalistic... with a shred of humanity just grasping for the chance to thrive. Fenton has been forced to rely upon his basic instincts... Twenty years of enslavement has created a monster. He is a cold-blooded killer and given the opportunity won't hesitate to take the offensive. His silver eyes are wild, almost as if he were a wounded animal that had been cornered. The fight or flight response is non-existent... there is only one response in his mind... fight.

He sees the world through the eyes of a bitter soul. Cast out by his family and forsaken to this wretched life his mind is constantly in flux... unsure of what awaits him in the next moment. One can easily see that this is a broken man. Desperate for a chance to live... for a chance to be free... for a chance at revenge. Easily provoked and hard to calm, these are the reasons behind his appearance... though one would assume that looking as he did that he would be self-conscious, but that isn't the case with Fenton. He revels in his disgusting form... it frightens people, which is something that he's taken advantage of in the pits quite a few times.

STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES:

+Relentless.
+His dexterity.
+Proficient in Hand to Hand Combat.
+/- His grotesque appearance, though beneficial in combat, it would make social situations near impossible.
- Animalistic; likely to attack first and to hell with the questions.
- Ignorant of the Universe.


BIOGRAPHY:

There isn't really much to tell. His parents had wanted nothing to do with the baby... he was an accident and would only add to the cost of living. His father worked in the mines of Apatros and barely made enough to keep food on the table every night. A child would only complicate things, so the boy was sold to the Galactic Slave Trade for a mere week worth of wages. The early years weren't bad for the boy, in truth they were quite nice... though he wouldn't remember them. He was nurtured by the female slaves, until he reached the age of six and placed into a role of servitude for a few years.

On his ninth birthday, the boarder picture of what was expected of Fenton was revealed to him. As he climbed out of the small crate that they had locked him in, the stench of death and decay assaulted his sense of smell. The large palm of his master reached down to him and guided him towards the large orange alien standing beside the crude looking gate before them. On the other side the sound of a roaring crowd could be heard chanting the word "KILL!" over and over again. For a nine year old boy, this was beyond his comprehension... until his master leaned in close enough for Fenton to feel his breath upon his face.

"You're up next." Whispered the man standing beside him. The events that follow are of personal nature, as Fenton has yet to discuss any of this with anyone. Perhaps one day, the truth behind this tormented soul will come to bare... until then use your imagination on how he'd managed to remain alive throughout the years. Ponder this... aren't some things best forgotten.

Though for the curious... here's how Fenton earned his fabulous skin treatment. Fenton has seen his share of torture over the years as a slave... as a child he was beat horribly if he failed at whatever trivial task his master had given him. The torment only increased as he grew, but the boy was strong willed and refused to be broken. He was defiant... and so they proceeded to "cleanse" him. Which meant that Fenton had been chained to the wall and then scrubbed down with some form of acid... the result of the "cleanse" left Fenton with the appearance of a rotting corpse... or the walking dead if you will.

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[size=+2]ROLEPLAYING[/size]​

KILLS:
N/A

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
N/A

DUELING RING MATCHES:
N/A

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
N/A

ROLEPLAYS:
N/A
 

Saul

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Interesting. Remember, the New Sith Imperium aren't just a bunch of psychopaths, the guy needs to show some control as well I think to be accepted. They've cut back on the number of murderous lunatic cannibals in their ranks. Or so they say.
 

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That's entirely understandable and expected... But what would you expect from a man who has had his flesh removed in an acid cleansing, all the while being a slave since birth and fighting for his life since the age of nine.

I'd say he would be a little cookoo for cocoa puffs. Though don't worry... he is liable to change and grow. The only interaction he's ever known is punishment... even a cold-hearted non-maniacal Sith would benefit Fenton
 

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I agree, his changes and interactions in training should be interesting. Definitely explore the recruitment process, and don't just flat out join the Sith.
 

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Interesting. Remember, the New Sith Imperium aren't just a bunch of psychopaths, the guy needs to show some control as well I think to be accepted. They've cut back on the number of murderous lunatic cannibals in their ranks. Or so they say.
No. Join. We are desperately lacking in good, bloodthirsty characters. That said, though primal instincts and passion are the core of the Sith philosophy, he will need to learn how to channel his emotions efficiently, instead of just wasting them. Sith value power, and knowledge and wisdom are power.

Also, there is no rule in the faction against murderous, lunatic cannibals, these characters are what give the Sith their personality and they can be complex and developed.
 
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I agree, his changes and interactions in training should be interesting. Definitely explore the recruitment process, and don't just flat out join the Sith.

No. Join. We are desperately lacking in good, bloodthirsty characters. That said, though primal instincts and passion are the core of the Sith philosophy, he will need to learn how to channel his emotions efficiently, instead of just wasting them. Sith value power, and knowledge and wisdom are power.

Also, there is no rule in the faction against murderous, lunatic cannibals, these characters are what give the Sith their personality and they can be complex and developed.

You can expect him to hold true to his core character, he'll simply learn to adapt to the real world. One can't act like a murderous lunatic cannibal at all times and expect to live long... though I do have a goal of carrying the most bounties on my head. To act as a ghoul in the night... kind of like some kind of intelligent murderous lunatic cannibal... XD
 

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No. Join. We are desperately lacking in good, bloodthirsty characters. That said, though primal instincts and passion are the core of the Sith philosophy, he will need to learn how to channel his emotions efficiently, instead of just wasting them. Sith value power, and knowledge and wisdom are power.

Also, there is no rule in the faction against murderous, lunatic cannibals, these characters are what give the Sith their personality and they can be complex and developed.

Martha, could you please stop speaking on behalf of the Imperial Leadership? Thank you.

As Saul stated, psychotic characters whom are just as liable to lash out at his fellow Sith and innocent Imperial Citizens won't last long nor be really welcome in the faction.

And yes, Martha, there are rules in the faction against murderous lunatic cannibals. There are very strict rules against the senseless murder of Sith or Imperial citizens or members of the Imperial Armed Forces. If you're in a Sith prestiege challenge or some other csituation where you're allowed to kill, then fine, go for it. Cripple, maim. But the senseless murder of Sith or Imperials, NPC or PC, is not condoned.

*Ahem*

Right, Karma, your character... first off, it's as Saul pointed out, unlikely he'd do well in the Sith Order if he's a psychopath that can think of little more than killing and maiming. A Sith needs to learn control over his passions and emotions. Yes, they fuel and power a Sith, but a Sith also needs to know when not to fight, when not to be all angry monster time. The Imperium rules over half the Galaxy, and they can't afford giving the Hutts, Jedi, and Rebels free propaganda tools, or allow the Imperial Citizens to doubt them, by having a zombie Sith running around mauling and eating their citizens.

If he wasn't psychotic, then I'd be willing to allow him in, provided he kept himself covered up when in public. But as it stands, no. Not at this time.
 

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Well;

There are missions where killing is condoned. We'll be launching the "Secret False Flag Attacks" of Operation Knightfall in a few weeks once the lead up threads are wrapped up, where the entire premise is to cause as much destruction while in disguise as a Jedi before being "forced back" by the courageous Sith and Imperial Forces.....

But yes, he will need to learn control. We have Sith who are murderous monsters, but they learn to control and contain it. A monster is not a true Sith; A Sith is a being who has passion and brutality honed and chained by an iron hard will, giving him complete control over his emotions rather than being controlled by them.

Mira, while insane, is a good character to teach that sort of leashed restraint. Work on that thread where Black Noise comes and saves you and teaches you how to be an effective monster, and I'd be happy to see you in the Sith. But as the character is, anyone with a sane mind (another reason why BN's character is a good choice) would pull an Old Yeller on Fenton.

Cheers mate,

Rom
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Martha, could you please stop speaking on behalf of the Imperial Leadership? Thank you.

As Saul stated, psychotic characters whom are just as liable to lash out at his fellow Sith and innocent Imperial Citizens won't last long nor be really welcome in the faction.

And yes, Martha, there are rules in the faction against murderous lunatic cannibals. There are very strict rules against the senseless murder of Sith or Imperial citizens or members of the Imperial Armed Forces. If you're in a Sith prestiege challenge or some other csituation where you're allowed to kill, then fine, go for it. Cripple, maim. But the senseless murder of Sith or Imperials, NPC or PC, is not condoned.

*Ahem*

Right, Karma, your character... first off, it's as Saul pointed out, unlikely he'd do well in the Sith Order if he's a psychopath that can think of little more than killing and maiming. A Sith needs to learn control over his passions and emotions. Yes, they fuel and power a Sith, but a Sith also needs to know when not to fight, when not to be all angry monster time. The Imperium rules over half the Galaxy, and they can't afford giving the Hutts, Jedi, and Rebels free propaganda tools, or allow the Imperial Citizens to doubt them, by having a zombie Sith running around mauling and eating their citizens.

If he wasn't psychotic, then I'd be willing to allow him in, provided he kept himself covered up when in public. But as it stands, no. Not at this time.

I completely understand and agree with everything that you've said. Though, consider this... Yes, Fenton is a psychotic lunatic cannibal... in his current state. Having been caged, starved, and tortured since birth... then forced to fight for his life, often against great odds, and managed to survive for 20 years. Flesh removed with acid... his mind is lost. Currently driven by his base instincts.

But that doesn't mean that he'll remain that way... or even given the opportunity to do much damage to anyone (besides the opposition within the arena in which I'll be posting soon). Mira will be able to keep him in check. He is a virgin to the force, its existence is irrelevant and the few times that he's touched it are once again because of his base survival instincts tapping into the force.

Once into the real world, freed... he's basically going to be in awe of everything and completely reliant upon his Master. Which is why I've waited to actually post within the RP until a proper connection with a Master was formed.

So essentially, please trust that I'm not going to abuse his mentality towards the world and let me shape him into the cold-calculating assassin I hope for him to become. *Gets on knees*

Well;

There are missions where killing is condoned. We'll be launching the "Secret False Flag Attacks" of Operation Knightfall in a few weeks once the lead up threads are wrapped up, where the entire premise is to cause as much destruction while in disguise as a Jedi before being "forced back" by the courageous Sith and Imperial Forces.....

But yes, he will need to learn control. We have Sith who are murderous monsters, but they learn to control and contain it. A monster is not a true Sith; A Sith is a being who has passion and brutality honed and chained by an iron hard will, giving him complete control over his emotions rather than being controlled by them.

Mira, while insane, is a good character to teach that sort of leashed restraint. Work on that thread where Black Noise comes and saves you and teaches you how to be an effective monster, and I'd be happy to see you in the Sith. But as the character is, anyone with a sane mind (another reason why BN's character is a good choice) would pull an Old Yeller on Fenton.

Cheers mate,

Rom
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Thanks Boss! I was personally quite stoked about Black showing interest in Fenton with Mira, especially after reading her Character Profile... even though it needs to be updated apparently. Looking forward to working with you in the future and expect twisted things from this little minion. *evil grin*
 

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As Rom stated, finish up your RP with Mira, post the changes to Fenton's personality and being here, and then you can apply to the Sith, and you'll almost be guaranteed acceptance into the Order. Sound good?
 

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Sounds good to me. *Off to finally get started on that Thread.*
 

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Kiro, I have never spoken on behalf of the Imperium leadership before. I have expressed my opinions regarding the Imperium and how it is run and that's it.

Also, you and Rom just pretty much said everything I meant in my last post. Sith can be murderous, lunatic cannibals if the player wants, but they have to know how to channel and contain their passions efficiently at the same time. I never said he should kill Imperial civilians or PCs. Sith characters can be psychopathic, but they can also have limits and complexities aswell. Mira Albion, Avlis Dioddai, Audroti, Andraste and my own char Satoryu are good examples.
 

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