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NAME: Poy'Bondara

FACTION: Independent

RANK: ?

SPECIES: Twi'lek

AGE: 32

GENDER: Female

HEIGHT: 5'10"

WEIGHT: 63kg

EYES: Blue

HAIR: None

SKIN: Light Blue

CREDITS: 0

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Plasma burn, 4” across on her left thigh.

FORCE SENSITIVE: No






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STRENGTH: A fully grown adult, Poy has been in a few fights and tends to come out on top more often than not. When she punches it'll hurt but its unlikely to floor a real fighter. She is about average when it comes to strength and there is nothing really of remark about her, she isn't a weightlifter or a pit-fighter for example.

DEXTERITY: Twi'leks are generally more nimble than humans but Poy is not that much above average, swinging a big stick or she can generally hit her target, with a blaster she can fire pretty accurately from the him but is hardly a solider. Her balance and reflexes are otherwise about average for a human who practices once in a while.

CONSTITUTION: Generally well enough this Twi’lek can take a punch or two and keep going, even been shot once but is not outstanding beyond the average streetwise sentient, though lately her stamina has started to slip a little.

INTELLIGENCE: There is no real standout intelligence, certainly not book smarts, Poy learns her lessons the hard way. Doing rather than learning, tinkering rather than reading manuals. When it comes to practical things she can force herself to learn but its not natural or easy for her.

WISDOM: Poy lives in the moment, rarely contemplating or going beyond the most basic of plans, working off instinct she is far from wise or even smart about some of her plans. However she has traveled a lot, so she has picked up a few things along the way which can come in useful more than you might expect when dealing with the rougher parts of the galaxy.

CHARISMA: Not regarded as an especially attractive Twi’lek she has a rough charm, easily friendly and tends to put people at ease which is useful for a trader or a presenter. She can put the right words in the right place to get the right level of ego stroking to get what she wants,and isn't afraid to stoop a little either.




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The easiest way of describing Poy is a person that assess risk and in one swift thought dives right in as long as she is confident of finding a way out. Be it under fire, in a trade deal or even talking to people she will plan only as far as that there should be a way out and goes from there on the fly. The fallout, be it drama, thrills or even spills gets her interested in the event and is how she gets the most enjoyment out of life. This lack of planning makes her ill suited to ridged structures and even military pursuits, however that does not mean she is incapable of dealing with them, just she yearns for more freedom. With those same problems though come her very quick solutions to problems that should work, even if more thought might create a better answer in the long run. Poy can think outside the box and come up with odd answers, allowing her to find trade markets in the past that most wouldn't even consider worth existing.

Having been around so many people at such a young age Poy quiet perceptive when it comes to just about anyone. From the way they walk, talk or move their eyes she can learn a lot, even when she doesn't speak their language. It also means she notices when her friends act different or odd and often, right away will point that out without thought. Asking people questions they might well not want has cost her a few friendships in the past, but that same drive for the truth has helped her out just as much. It is one of her passions, along with traveling that drive her forwards. She feels it is her duty to the Galaxy, if she owed it anything. Bright, colourful and cheerful she is normally very upbeat, though somewhat prone to mood swings when pushed.

Intellectually Poy is focused only on what she considers useful, complex science, mathematics, and philosophy bore her no end, she can only get motivated to learn something that is useful in a physical way to her life. She is not the most focused student however unless she can make it interesting for herself, battlefield planning back in the day was something she took great joy in, little computer programs reacting to her orders. It means that at no point was she ever at the top of any class because of her studiousness. What made up for it was her boldness, original thinking and perception when it came to spinning the first two into a accepted format for her superiors. It helped she is easily sociable and loves talking to people ever since she was a child, on just about any topic.

Of course there are downsides, that feelings come second to facts doesn't always make her popular as well as not hiding her own feelings can make things a struggle. Being impatient and a terrible waiter, or focusing on something for someone else when she already understands, or thinks she does and wanting to go on ahead. This in turn makes her prone to risk, rarely thinking out the details of the long term. Sometime it even seems she takes those risks because she is bored. There is also the bigger picture, while each part that Poy works on may work perfectly, she can forget they all need to fit together at the end, making her own grand plans, problematic without help.

Socially Poy can be considered fun, she certainly talks a lot and has a lot of interesting stories to tell. If she sees someone not having fun, she makes a point to drag them into whatever she is doing to try and engage them. Tolerant of just about anyone, even people she hates with a charming smile she seems warm. However that isn't to say when pushed a little her real feelings don't come out in a vicious storm, maybe followed by fists. Seeming confident, being confident seems to make people think she has a plan even when she clearly has no such thing. The best way she has to make friends though it to do things together, be it a mechanical project, skiing across arctic tundra or just having a meal, talking alone can be somewhat, stilted.

As a mother she is playful and flexible, having lived exactly the same life her daughter is starting to lead. Making time for her is always a priority for Poy along with letting her do as many things as she deems, safe. Learning the same way she did but being laid back enough to let Ann do her own thing as well. It isn't like the life she leads now is the one she'll have forever after all. Maybe oddly Poy treats her daughter as an equal to the crew she has, similar duties, responsibilities, just like she did. Where she lacks is emotionally, most of the time Poy is not very touchy feelly, not that focused on the emotional pitfalls that can crop up in a child. Ann is the most important thing in her life however and she would certainly do anything for her. Followed by a few friends and her parents where she would move heaven and earth for.

In the galaxy at large, Poy takes it as it is. Some is bad, some is good. Some bad people run good places, some good people run terrible places. Good and evil themselves don't cause suffering, while she dislikes some Sith she does not consider them all evil, or Jedi all good. What she cares about are the people that live under them, that they can be happy and as free as possible. That the truth is not hidden from them, that they can make their own choices. If people want an oppressive government that does evil things to the few for the good of the masses. That is fine, as long as the masses are fully aware of that evil and consider it worth while.


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Space is freedom. In space you are alone, your rules are your own. When something needs doing, you do it. The wide frontier. Ilar’Bondara felt this calling, and felt it the home he always wanted, far away from his home planet. He and his equally idealistic wife Tann traded in everything they had for a two-seater snub transport with a rusting hyperdrive. Six years later they had made it all the way to having a mostly functional Freighter which scraped by on its passenger license requirements, the same year their daughter was born. Their ship, the Kei’nata Ni was cruising the trade lanes, carrying passengers for pittance along with freelance cargo. It was everything they owned and for young Poy it was her entire world.

By the time she was five she was doing odd jobs about the ship, by the time she was ten she was even allowed to sit in the pilot's chair, sometimes. Her school was the trade-lanes, her teachers her parents and any member of the ever changing crew and passengers that took an interest. By the time she was eight she had heard more stories in more tongues than most hear in a lifetime. While studying none she learn phrases and enough to get by in countless tongues, while not advanced mathematics, how to plot a hyperspace jump, a myriad of starship repairs and bodges. Her parents wanted her to live the same life that they had, free and as far as they were concerned happy.

The skill the perhaps aided her the most in the future was learning and becoming remarkably good at Sabacc. When she was a teenager it was her main source of income, playing against the passengers on the ship. The rotating roster meant she was already meeting fresh faces and by the time she was sixteen, despite some major losses she had racked up a small fortune. What her parents wanted, she took to heart, far too much. She considered even the life they lead to constricting, having never really lived under a government or the problems that they can cause. What she wanted though, was adventure, she wanted her own ship. Her father forbid it, for all the good it did and she rebelled at the very next starport they landed at. Poy was far, far too much like him.


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“In the Shadow of Nal Huttai was dark, Nar Shaddaa was rising like a pimple over the horizon, yet never had it seemed so welcoming. It was a week of firsts and the Trog was aligning for its first real approach. It’s pilot took a deep breath, it wasn’t like she was looking for trouble, though here it would be certain to find her.”


The ship she ended up with was named the Trog, a Epitt Starfighter, though calling it that was being generous. It had a hyperdrive, when it felt like working, enough space to lay down when not piloting and a restroom, that was it. A separate cargobay which could hold only a few crates it was a flying wing, lopsided and sluggish to control. The Trog was already old, battered and hardly respectable when she bought it, however she was hardly rich, even bad starfighters were expensive. It was enough though, before she knew it she was away, with a cargo of fancy hats and her first job, to deliver them to Nar Shaddaa.

What she fell into was known by some to be the day the city wept, others the signal of the end of times, most though it was just regular old crazy. After a ride that required three breakdowns, and hiding in the shadow of a moon from what she assumed were pirates, Poy arrived, slightly late to the right place. Only, the man she was to deliver to was dead, his house was on fire and she was almost arrested for it. With a cargo of entirely useless hats, barely an credits and rather shocked at it all, she was pulled to one side by a human female with striking red hair, someone apparently looking for the murder. Poy later learned her name was Fem the Flame, and the two large tanks on the woman’s back, were just that. Before, apparently she was a professor of, something. Working with a Rodian called Woad, though he seemed to pronounce it, woah, along with just about every other word. He apparently was the leader of a small but seemingly friendly cult. The two, now three worked together to try to solve a series of murders.

This involved a crash course in gunfights, the criminal underworld and the machinations of Hutt crimelords leading Poy to several critical lessons:

Do not argue with flamethrowers,

Shoot back and shoot often,

Don’t taser the Wookie,

Hats for large heads are a select market,

Hutts will kill for apparently crazy reasons,

Some Hutts will purchase crates of expensive hats, apparently for their own use, for a good price,

The final of these and the solving of the murders, which promptly lead to no one at all being prosecuted, a small profit and the idea of a business venture. By the end of her first year, Poy had cornered the market in selling oversized, designer hats to Hutts, a fashion craze that she could not understand and barely stomach. However they would pay and they would compete, and she for a time was the only one with the merchandise. Not that negotiating with Hutts, their thugs and those that wanted her market was easy. At first she was quite terrible at it, what she did have though, was timing. She sold out right before the market collapsed and the wearing of hats by Hutts was all but outlawed. Sold out, lock, stock and barrel she had a wedge of credits burning a hole and not yet a plan for making more. First was getting off the moon, something that proved easier and cheaper than she expected.

The Kei’nata Ni, her parents ship had just arrived. Poy had kept contact with them as best she could, that she was okay despite the occasional bruise. That she had come back with ten times what she left with the year before, that was impressive. She stayed with them for a time, a few stops more before being dragged into the Crisis of Five Princesses.


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Monarchies, by and large are nothing but trouble. With elections you pick which corrupt, self centered idealist your people wants, with a Monarchy, its purely the luck of the draw. To try and counter this the royal family of Jal’more’tor had centuries ago, allowed election of the monarch by the people, once the last one died. To try to quell the inevitable uprising that would someday, be their doom. Poy’s landing on the planet happened to be during one such of these times. Sponsored parties, posters, marching bands, men with loud voices hollering for this family member or that. Each of them trying to out do each other and win the votes of the people.

Poy was by and large enjoying the rampant, vibrant chaos when a robed teenager approached her. It was clear that Poy was a visitor and those were somewhat rare on this backwater world. Being begged to join the person for a drink, Poy relented and soon found the young woman spilling out such a convoluted web of stories it was hard to keep up. It short, the king had been assassinated, apparently. But since any one of his four other daughters could have done it, no one was investigating it. After all if that person won, you might well end up dead. Tur’Tur’Mari, was the youngest of the daughters and was certain that her second oldest sister was behind it.

With nothing better to do right then, and a certain interest in what was going on Poy agreed to help as best she could. Though she had some prior experience with her time on Nar Shaddaa, a detective she was not. Deducing that the king had been poisoned, the pair spoke to the servants about his death, his symptoms, who had seen him before. They were starting to raise some eyebrows, then Poy took them into the underworld. Compared to Hutt Space the criminal groups here were tame enough and a few well placed words, got them a meeting with what appeared to be the only poison importer on the entire planet. Threats were made, blasters were drawn and Poy promptly shot him in the leg. Through blackmail and pardons he was convinced to cooperate, everyone else kept in line by the threat of involving the palace guard.

A royal court was convened, evidence including recordings from the poison seller were produced and a jury of royal peers found Ru’Tur’Mari guilty of regicide and treason. It was almost enough for Tur’Tur’Mari, to win the popular vote when it was made public. Not quite though and her eldest sister was crowned queen. However Poy and the youngest princess were considered heroes, the King had been well loved. Poy was appointed even though she was just turning eighteen to the investigative arm of the Royal Guard. Leaving her parents yet again she had a well paying job, an apartment and the gratitude of a people and its rulers.

For a time, it was fine. Being invited to parties, learning about being a detective, it just seemed to get dull, more so after the first few months. The view outside her window was always the same, so were the people and the problems. By the end of the year she applied to the Jal’more’tor Navy Academy and through nepotism placed on the officer training program. The Navy was small, nothing more than frigates for patrolling the system and a few outlying colonies. Since she already knew ships fairly well, the hardest part was leading other people. Poy back then expected everyone to just do whatever needed doing without being told, like she tended to. It opened her eyes to how people can think and act. Fleet tactics, protocols, being onboard ships that were far more up to date than the ones she was used to, exciting. For a time, a longer time she was happy.

As a royal favourite Poy was one of those selected for an exchange program with Corellia, now this was incredible. Huge starships, big operations zones. Having served for two years and now as a lieutenant Poy was in charge of a repair section on the bulk cruiser, Octavious. Much more like her home, the ship travelled through Corellian space with military cargo, almost always on the move. To her own men she was known as a relaxed but, get it done, officer who would turn a blind eye to some things, as long as their duties were given 110%. To her superiors Poy was an acceptable officer, more lax than they would like but she certainly got results. In the third year of her service, a senior officer back on Jal’more’tor was found guilty of treason, somewhere along the line he was Poy’s superior and while almost all of the other exchange officers were recalled, she was simply discharged. It appeared that her home had become extremely xenophobic since she left and was now isolating itself from the galaxy at large. They did make sure she was paid however, which was nice. Though she was almost at a loss, if not for the fact she was offered a commission right away by the Corellian Navy.

A Senior Lieutenant she was placed on the bridge staff of a real cruiser on anti-piracy operations. Their job was mostly to look scary and keep the pirates at bay, and when they discovered them, hit their bases hard. Some fights, some interesting actions, nothing outstanding but even this was starting to get boring. The same space time after time, rarely getting the chance to travel. Twenty five years old and she’d had enough, making her intentions clear Poy resigned her commission and retired from the navy. Using her savings, she brought a transport freighter of her own, the Tur’Mari and set about cutting her own path across the galaxy, just like she did before, and her parents before her.

Hauling freight and sometimes people, she rubbed shoulders all over the galaxy, still meeting the right people at the right time. Almost winning a Sabacc tournament, she invested and for a short time became the owner for the mining rights for half of Bespin. Slowly building up her own fortune, droids and even a few crew members she was back in her element, trader, captain and part time detective. It was also in this time she fell in love with a Twi’lek called Valum’Barm, blue skinned, strong and jovial. It was far from her first love, however he was one she remembered most. He died in a bar-room brawl on Tatooine a few months after she met him, shortly after she found herself pregnant.

Ann’Bondara was born in a medical center on Corellian where for a time her mother made a home with her friends. Once both were well enough though, it was back to the stars and a somewhat less dangerous life. Poy fell into keeping formation with her parents on easier runs, more than doubling their cargo capacity. Once the idea struck her she even started organizing convoys of independent ships. Safety in numbers and she had been perfectly trained to organise them.


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This was actually the birth of what would become her true calling. With a transmitter Poy could keep the ships, even those not directly with them aware of dangers, changes and general information. In the core it was easy to do this, you could just log onto the holonet and bam, everything you could ever want. However out on the Rims, nothing. Musing this in a bar on Ord Mantell she happened into Yarman Sykes, a dirty, motheaten mechanic and mechanical savant who had been working on exactly her problem. Cheap, somewhat effective hyperspace transmitters mostly made out of existing parts. He had no way to launch his prototype, she had a problem to solve. Together, they started a project to change the Outer Rim.

From the Tur’Mari they launched prototypes and testing broadcasts. The biggest problem was getting enough, big enough into the right places along with planets out on the rim not having broadcasts strong enough to make use of them. It would require massive investment, something she did not have. However, this was big and they could make it happen. So all those shoulders she had rubbed with, people that owed her favours, it took two years to call them all in. And what did she get?

Saved from the scrap yard and fixed up a Corellian Light Cruiser with all its weapons removed bar a few defence lasers. Further stripped down and with a huge selection of transmitter arrays running off the weapons power systems the 300 meter ship was rechristened Kiax. With funding from private groups, planets and donations along with Poy’s own money they started to deploy the network. It was small however, yet she started to make use of it right away. The Outer Rim Network was born.

Based on the Kiax either from the studio or the cockpit she would broadcast for ten hours a day herself with other presenters for the rest of the time or prerecorded selections. Content varied from her own reports, travel news, missing people, bounties and wanted selections, pirate warnings and call in talk segments. Music and even audio dramas from various planets also made an appearance along with adverts from all sorts of companies that helped keep the station flying. The ship was almost always on the move, from planet to planet, setting up new transmitters. It seemed to Poy that she had found her groove, being able to move and make the best use of her talents. It also seemed a far safer line of work to bring a child up in, as Ann was started to walk, a ship was a perfectly safe place to raise a child.

ORN started to become very popular in the Outer Rim where it was the only widecast network around, but also in the Inner Rim where it was rebroadcast. It won several media awards for reporting and several scandals that its freelance reporters had uncovered, in one cause causing a government to collapse. It was at one of these events that Poy gave a speech that promised that ORN would always remain independent and impartial in its reporting. That it would never colour the truth or tarnish it for their or someone else's gain.

Today the network has been around for a few years and if you have been in space, or even just living in the Outer Rim you likely know Poy’s voice. You might have even seen the Kiax making port before when it picks up supplies.


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  • Corvette and Cruiser Piloting,
  • Military procedure,
  • Ship Command,
  • Presenting,
  • Schmoozing,
  • Starship Repairs,
  • Blaster Pistol Use,
  • Communications Hardware and software,
  • Politics,
  • Mummy hugs,



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Strengths:

Poy is in her prime when she is able to command, laying out battle plans and adapting to the situation as it unfolds. Being creative, talking her way into and out of situations is more natural for her than fighting. Still is an above average capital ship captain with a firm grasp on mechanical repairs and how to get the best out of people. Have a list of friends in somewhat well to do places also helps.

Weaknesses:

Easily bored and somewhat of a risk taker being around Poy can sometime be a health hazard. She also rarely plans out that far ahead or thinks of the wider consequences of her actions beyond the obvious. Being direct and inquisitive also means she tends to subtle, sometimes even invasive when it comes to things happening to those she cares about she doesn't know the details of.



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Blaster Pistol
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SHIP:
Kaix
Tur’Mari

DROIDS:
Astomech droids?
Cleaning Droids?

PETS:

Crystal Mood Cactus

KILLS:
0

BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
0

DUELING RING MATCHES:
0

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES:
0

ROLE-PLAYS:



 
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First impression, on the basis of presentation alone, wow!
 

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Well thank you, sorry I missed your reply earlier. I'll be filling out the rest over the next week or so,
 

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It'd be cool to run into this character next timeline!
 

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NAME: Fen Vel

FACTION: Jedi

RANK: Padawan

SPECIES: Zeltron/Kiffar

AGE: 16

GENDER: Female

HEIGHT: 5'6"

WEIGHT: 59kg

EYES: Blue-green

HAIR: Purple

SKIN: Light Red

CREDITS: 0

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: Traditional Kiffar tattoos, three red triangles under each eye and a small red bar up both her lips.

FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes




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STRENGTH: Below average for a human and certainly below average for a Jedi, Fen has only just started physical training of any form in the past few months. Her natural advantage of a fast metabolism means she makes faster progress than most but she still has years of catching up before she reaches the levels expected of her peers. For a punch thrown from her to do any damage would require her whole body being in the right stance and for the target to stand still and let her hit them. She can carry around 30kg for a short time without getting too tired and is frequently hesitant about any sort of manual labour.

DEXTERITY: Fen is pretty flexible for a lifeform with bones however she had no practice in most of her range of movements before she started training a few months ago. She can be considered average at best however has focused very hard on a variety of unarmed martial forms in that time and while just a beginner she already understands the basics of how to use someone else's strength against them to make up for her own shortcomings. When it comes to fine work such as threading a needle or computer wiring, she is surprisingly adapt and her handwriting is impeccable. That and typing are one of the few physical skills she has practiced all her life to a high level.

CONSTITUTION: With the metabolism of her mother and the sturdiness of her father Fen seems to never be sick and heals from wounds very quickly, though she eats more than would be expected of someone her size. In the last few months she had put on weight and muscle as she has gotten used to exercise and eating a much healthier diet. She is however still easily on the scrawny and light size, easy to throw around and knock over. In general if she can't avoid she has to evade, she can't really take a much of a punch and has a low tolerance for pain.

INTELLIGENCE: The main asset that Fen relies on is her ability to absorb knowledge, be it language, history, trade deals, technical specifications, while not eidetic she is certainly headed in that direction. When she needs to find information she does so, using everything she has and then she will remember that for next time. Complex mathematics, Scientific principles and History are things she finds easy to learn even if she doesn't know a huge amount about the universe currently. Being able to out think those around her is part of how she has stayed alive and rose to the position that she did.

WISDOM: Having grown up in a palace, Fen has little idea of how to deal with the real world. However lies are something she is used to creating, repeating and revealing. Common sense though, that is sorely lacking along with making choices for herself.

CHARISMA: Some can consider Fen attractive but has nothing overly remarkable of note physically. Frequently speaking softly and quietly she seems detached and some would say vulnerable. In general Fen enjoys that appearance and cultivates it to an extent, even though it isn't as true as often as one might think. Appearing subservient to those she feels the need to she is easy to talk to, if not always that interesting to listen to given her lack of development when it comes to informal social interaction. For a Jedi she dresses brightly and seems quite cheerful at glance, she does not seem threatening.




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If to be captured in a single word, Fen is order. Everything in the galaxy has its place and its purpose, be it higher or mundane. She fully accepts that such things are able to change on a whim or chance but that that the order exists for a reason. To go against it will cause repercussions so vast and unknowable that any small act might have the opposite effect without careful consideration. On an every day level that means almost nothing, however when it comes to toppling a corrupt leader because you see them as evil, Fen is not so quick to act. In fact that could easily be said to be her greatest weakness, Fen would much rather take the time over any decision to make sure that she has all the facts before progressing further. If a choice has to be made quickly she might well miss the chance to make it entirely, making the situation worse for everyone involved. Not helped by the fact that frequently when she tries to react on the fly, she makes terrible choices that might solve the immediate problem but will certainly cause much larger ones in the long run. Having a plan and sticking to it are her strengths and she knows it.

In her world she knows, deeply what is right and what is wrong and even against all other voices will not shift how she feels short of a miracle. You should not kill people if you can ever avoid it, death is an end that no being has right over nor the wisdom to inflict on others. Maybe in part for atonement, for her past inaction and even action leading to the deaths of others, sometimes by her orders no less, it is a strongly branded principle of the new her. Likewise for stealing, which she never did or causing harm to others which by inaction again she did. This is why, the fighting style she is learning focuses much more on defence than strikes, to tire an opponent rather than harm them. So she might seem an upright and outstanding citizen, Fen would certainly like to think she was one now. However lying and trust in others are two shadows from her past that seem impossible to escape. To Fen the truth is a commodity, one bartered, traded and sold, something that should not be given freely. Why tell the truth when the other party has no way of knowing it, why assume that others are telling you the truth? What she has now known as the Force has long whispered to her the falsehood of another's words and given her a sense of what to trust and what not. That people lie often and about so many things, she is able to pick at them yet not know what the truth is, merely infer it. It takes concerted effort from her to tell the truth to her friends, more still to trust them not just with her own words but her own well being.

Fen sucks at making friends. Sure she can be nice enough to be around, polite, quiet and wildly awkward but she doesn't open up easily. There is that niggling doubt programed into her almost all her life that the person she is talking to right now, with the wrong words could lead to her death. So to express dissent, to state true feelings on a matter are almost impossible for her. Instead she will give the person what she thinks they want to hear, more often than not. To keep herself safe Fen wears the mask of a detached woman, cold and focused on the tasks in front of her. Afraid that the one wearing that mask, could easily be someone she detested. That the person under it could think and say things to get her killed, or worse. The mask that she wore for a decade, she became almost entirely. A matter of survival to be sure. However that mask has since chipped, cracked and started to wear away. Not so long ago she learned to laugh at the ludicracy of the universe, along with how cold and violent it could be. Not so long after that she learned that trust could mean the opposite of death, a lesson she is still digesting. The real Fen was locked away as a little girl and missed all those developmental milestones most take for granted. The chance to find your own wants, to rebel, to love, to hate, to have hobbies or even sleep in on a day off. She can't remember ever playing with a ball, or other children, she can't remember feeling any loyalty to anyone but her owner. All these things are only now starting to develop.

She is far from antisocial however, Fen finds it easy to talk to new people as long as the topic is not herself. Social graces come easy to her and while often overly polite she seems a very eager to learn more about people and spend time with her. At the same time however she tends to be more natural reacting to others rather than being the spark of interaction. To her the best kind of friend is one who will spend a set amount of time with her before going on about their day, meeting up for a meal for example. What she needs however are friends that can help her develop, grow and open up to about her repressed feelings. While just that will make her uncomfortable, in the long run it would certainly be for the best. As for Fen's own attitude to friends, once she makes them she is loyal and does he best to make sure they are happy, putting them far above herself. Though she would not die for them, nor would she put her life on the line in a situation they created.

As a Jedi Fen both fits and does not fit at the same time. She is a being that has elected to be as peaceful as possible, if only for her own wellbeing which clashes with both her master and the Jedi Order as a whole. Her physical focus is based on evading attacks if she can't evade conflict entirely, playing to her strengths. Bereft of possessions as a slave she actually owns more as a Jedi, yet feels little desire for further trappings. Dressing in showy, extravagant yet simple silks rather than robes and having spartan quarters, standing out but still not overstated. Fen doesn't voice her feelings about the Order and is generally the same soft spoken, eager to please person she is to everyone other than her master. Having spent the most time with him, feeling just a little bit comfortable and more open with him, he is an outlet. When away from other Jedi Fen has no problem disagreeing, questioning and becoming frustrated with him. Along with letting a sense of humor that is normally well buried shine.

Throwing herself hard into training, though not without reluctance Fen works hard to become a better Jedi because she can. Not for power and she doesn't feel the need to be better than those around her, which is mostly far behind. No she wants to improve herself to be the best she can, to do more or aim higher temps a side of her she is not ready to confront.​


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"To be a slave, is to have your life in the hands of another. That makes a great many things very simple, if you want to eat, please your master. If you want to drink, please your master. If you want to live, please your master. Do this small thing and you need never worry about your next meal, a home, those troublesome social horrors, that you will go on, exist and find your own happiness," ~ Slave Master Tolom

Almost as far back as she could remember Fen had been a slave, there was a time she was not. A hazy memory of her father, his family. He was tall, broad chested and laughed, she liked his laugh. What happened to him, those other faces, she couldn't remember. Her mother she never knew but her own reflection could tell her back that. Alive or dead, they were gone now and her life did not have them in it.

She was schooled with a multitude of other "interests" roughly her age by a droid, a cold grey thing that creaked when it moved and moaned when it talked. Unlike the other children though, she excelled in these lessons and while they were put to work in their masters kitchens, pits, mines and workshops she was given more and more things to study. By the time she was ten she was given charge of organizing the masters library and more and more often translating for him. It was by then also apparent that she could sense a falsehood when told, something she focused on training as she grew. Her usefulness grew and with it her station, while still a slave she had her own chambers, clothes, meals with some of the lower officers and bureaucrats. When he held his meetings or his court her master would have her nearby, his favorite pet when it came to business. His palace and the race occasions he left it where her entire world, while she could read about anywhere she wanted and she did. Distant wars, legendary heroes and villains, planets so beautiful as to make one cry. Places and things that enthralled her but yet also she was safe from. While her life hung by but a thread, she could easily say it was a happy life. Enjoying her work, taking pleasure in pleasing her master, that his success was her own.

Towards the end of this illustrious career she was told to replace the spymaster who had been recently, killed. Taking up his duties, managing contacts and spies with other crime lords, police and even governments she learnt quickly how to run such a group and what it in entailed. If she didn't then she was certain to be the next one to die. That threat motivated her to some pretty terrible things, including have people killed, tortured, threatened, tens of them and she knew the names of each of them. At the time she didn't think anything of it, the way the world was and she had no choice but to make the best of it. Change was thrust upon her in a series of events that still don't entirely make sense to her. Sith came to see her master's collection of artifacts, a first and they scared her. They attacked her and in a way, awakened her to the Force. It turned out those Sith, where Jedi just pretending, though the damage to her was real. When they stole her away, Fen found herself thrown into the outside world, knowing nothing about it. The Jedi remained on a backwater planet for close to a week, she was allowed to do what she willed. So she walked a lot and learned a lot. There was a man, a gun for hire who came to her while she thought about her future. He was everything she was not, yet just as lost as she was. He pulled her into the underworld once more, if only for a night. That was enough though, to see just how helpless yet how much she wanted to be something more. That she wanted to be a Jedi with everything that came with it and would put in the work it required.

Hardly able to turn away someone he kidnapped she had a master and started training right away and it was apparent how very terrible at it she was. Barely able to run, or swing a stick, unable to feel or even really understand the Force. Try she did though and slowly she started to learn with the help of other Jedi she met. How to practice breathing, how to move, how to see without seeing, how to stand. Fen would also read a great deal on Jedi, different training methods and ways of thinking. Understanding what she needed to do was rarely the problem and she could easily go through the motions, it seemed however that she was weak with the force. Unable to make any easy use of it beyond her natural talent for sensing when someone lies to her. Never the less she trains every day, just as hard as everyone else to try and be something better than she was before. To make up for some of the horrible things she had done.




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Force Sense: Truth Sense: When a lie is told a person's body acts differently slight, subtle ways and it also ripples in the force. Sensing these ripples means that more often than not, Fen can tell when a person is lying though not what about. It only works when she is focused on the person in question and they are talking or writing.​


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Languages:
  • Bocce
  • Durese
  • Huttese
  • Rodese
  • Sith
  • Galactic Basic
  • Scattershot Historian: Smatterings of histories recent and long past,
  • Amatuer Watcher: The principles of underworld commerce are far from unknown to her, in fact she as detailed knowledge of multiple underworld operations and organizations,
  • Fast Leaner: A harsh mistress makes a fast student, the threat of death faster still,



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Poke them with the glowing end.​


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Strengths:
  • Book Smart: In a wide range of fields she might actually have something useful to say on the topic.
  • Intelligent: While she doesn't know a great many things, she can find things out fast given access to a computer or even just a few books.
  • Negotiator: Used to talking in front of very violent people about very violent things makes her rather a cool head at the table along with knowing how to use threats, rewards and lie, like her life depended on it.
  • Truthfinder: Using the Force without knowing it she knows when a person is lying and is fairly good at working out the context and how to use that to her advantage.
  • Unassuming: Despite the colour of her skin she doesn't stand out, she just doesn't seem like a threat.

Weaknesses:
  • Weak: Never needing to run, lift heavy things or even walk a huge amount means she gets tired easily and is physically less than average. She will push herself until she physically drops but even that isn't terribly far compared to most beings.
  • Sheltered: Billions of every day things in the universe are brand new to her, as such she makes numerous mistakes. She also often talks about recent events as if they are the distant past.
  • Listless: Without being given a goal to work towards, its almost impossible for Fen to work out what she should do. Just spending days failing to come up with any sort of useful plan.
  • Not a fighter: Her knowledge of fighting is pretty much that she can make a fist, she has never thrown it, nor does she have any idea how hard you should hit a person, if she even could.
  • Spacephobia: Fen has developed a fantastic case of, making her ill at ease in spaceships/stations/etc, exacerbated by windows, airlocks and the threat of being asked to put on a space suit.


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  • Datasticks,
  • Data Tablet,


<--OPTIONAL CONTENT-->


SHIP: No,

DROIDS: No,

PETS: No,

KILLS: 0

BOUNTIES COLLECTED: 0

FUSEBOXES ELIMINATED: 1

DUELING RING MATCHES: 0

GRAND TOURNAMENT MATCHES: 0

ROLE-PLAYS:


 

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Hey @Fen Vel care to make a little story between my sector ranger and your Poy character? Like since your character is looking for stories to broadcast and the sector rangers are the republics marshals so general have lots of good stories.
 

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Its entirely possible, what did you have in mind?
 

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XD Fen "Poke them with the glowing end" :P
 

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Did you make all the art yourself?
 

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FULL NAME: Marcella Teal-Antilles Known as Marley Outland

AGE: 25
SPECIES: Human
HOME PLANET: Alderaanian
WEIGHT: 5'8”
WEIGHT: 175 lbs

EYE COLOR: Green
HAIR COLOR: Ginger
MARKINGS: Freckled


FACTION: Telos Defence Forces
RANK: Flight Lieutenant

“A beautiful gem of a planet, I am yet to see another like it. Verdant hills, endless forests and crystal skies, waterfalls everywhere. I love all those things, the people, they just tend not to love me so much. On a planet of pacifists, I’m certaintly not one. Talk is good, I tend to just do first and talk later. As a kid I got into fights all the time, over the most stupid things. I wasn’t the smartest, the prettiest, the one with the best future or name. When you have everyone around you driving you forwards, it was my way of making me the best at something. I guess I never grew up that much.”

Lady Bera Antilles was for the most part unlucky in love. Her first husband died in a boating accident, her second disappeared on his star yacht a few years later. The third, an owner of a string of mechanics workshops lasted somewhat longer, the infamous Garu Teal. They had five children, three boys and two girls. The eldest went on to become the Minister of Education, the second son took on his father's business, the elder daughter married a prince and the youngest son has undertaken a degree in xenobiology. At home not much is said of the younger daughter, who promptly left seven years ago.

If there was a baseline stereotype of an Alderaanian then Marcella Teal-Antilles was several parsecs away. As a child she was moody, frequently violent and never quiet about her self assured opinion. As a middling noble she was afforded courtesy and grace, rarely did she return it. In short she was a spoiled brat, finding little standing in her way of acting how she wished she did so. A behaviour that expanded and she was soon almost constantly in trouble. It wasn’t because she was a bad person or even meant ill, it was far more that she was a person of action. When she met a bully she would knock them down a peg, when she met someone that disagreed with her she would use any and all means to make them agree. A force of nature.

This did not make her many friends, it also painted her as a troublemaker and later, that she had too much of her father in her. There were some friends though and they tended towards the more powerful side, only later did Marcella realise much trouble they kept her out of over the years. It wasn’t until she was a teenager that she realised that taking what you wanted, was generally the worse option.

At school she did well enough, middling grades but in truth the entire thing bored her no end. Her siblings excelled at one thing or another, their futures were easy to see. Yet the girl who picked fights, argued and sulked when she didn’t get her way, what was she to be? That was where her father stepped in and the two actually started to bond. He’d show her the workshops he ran, the speeders, starfighters, machines. Unlike her siblings she was actually interested in all these things, the parts, that they could be repaired. He would invite her to assist him, or the senior technicians and she seemed to get into far less trouble after that. Fifteen years of wreckage behind her Marcella almost started to appear a proper Alderaanian. Impulsive to be sure but tempered somewhat and somewhat less aggressive. She’d still try to persuade people but knew how to give up, to also not assume she knew best all the time.

So a quiet life taking over her father's business when he grew old was on the cards, that didn’t seem so bad. Until she came across some old records, something buried in an old datacore that was going to be scrapped. That her mother’s first husband, didn’t die in an accident. It had been arranged, clear as day. After a few days, Marcella went to her mother with this and her reaction, that it was all a mistake. That she should erase the files and forget about it ever happening. The next day Marcella took it to the police instead and had her father arrested. Her family rallied around their mother and in their version, Marcella was the badguy.

Words were exchanged, as was crockery and then several punches, Marcella breaking her eldest brother’s nose. She stayed only for the trial and right after he was found guilty, she left everything behind.

The world she picked at Telos, a young world. Not as visually impressive as Alderaan but nevertheless, nice. With the funds she had collected for herself Marcella enrolled on a mechanics apprenticeship that became the one hook in life she clung to. From that sprang a job offer from the Telos Defence Forces and that was history. By the end of the year she was rated as a pilot and the next a combat pilot. Flying convoy protection, anti-pirate operations and search and rescue she found herself far more at home in the real galaxy. A new home and a new family all around her, pilots, friends, it was a comfortable new life for her. Enough that she changed her name, on Telos she was known as Marley Outland. She never made the trip back to Alderaanian to make it fully official but as far as she was concerned that life was behind her.

“I’m a fighter pilot, I’m meant to be cocky, self assured and creative and I am. If i wasn’t then I’d be a terrible pilot. When you are up there, trying to lock onto the enemy when it comes down to it, you are all alone. Your buddies might have your back but they have their own jobs, if you don’t believe one hundred percent you can kill him right then and there, you lose."

Over the years it has mostly be quiet, sometimes there was skirmishes but nothing too major, the fact that Marley has two recorded downings is somewhat impressive given what the totals of other pilots tend to be. Promoted to Flight Lieutenant she tends to lead a fight of two other fighters on patrol in NX-3 Starfighers. She has ratings for larger craft but that is hardly where she shines.

“The fastest way to defeat an enemy is to find his blind spot, park yourself in it and hold on for dear life while you hammer those triggers.”

Personality

Marley is a fighter jock. Confident, quick to act and react, self assertive and more than a little full of herself. On the ground she tends not to be all that serious, taking life as it comes and enjoying the moments that come up, regardless of how much trouble that might cause for someone else. Not a stickler for rules she will generally follow them, enough to stay out of the worst of trouble. The people around her are Marley’s new family, even if she hasn’t known them that long she can get quite attached and sometimes somewhat needy, not always taking the hint that she isn’t wanted at a given moment.

Marley feels strongly that if you see something wrong, you should do something about it, physically. Talking about what should be done rather than just doing it frustrates her and pacifists are the worst of all. Relying on everyone else to fight for you, just so you can feel good about yourself. She also doesn’t take it well when she finds that people aren’t doing what is best for them because how other people might feel about it.

In the cockpit she is an aggressive pilot, getting as close as possible to her target and using good reflex and intuition to keep out of the enemy's field of fire. This means she can be vulnerable to enemies that focus on long range fighting. She is not reckless however and would much rather break an engagement than risk getting killed needlessly. Marley also takes moderate care of her wingmen, assuming that they are at least a little capable of looking after themselves while she takes on a target. She still keeps an eye out for them and would rather they didn’t die.
 

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Telos IV. An agrarian world far from the galaxy core but straddling one of the oldest hyperspace lanes in the galaxy. Tall curved cities of ornate stone and metal stand out in the middle of farmland so vast that it goes beyond the horizon. Carefully monitored by huge agriculture droids and a planetary irrigation system comparable only to Coruscant. It is home to just over a billion Sentients of a somewhat affluent nature. Food stuffs are its main exports towards the core worlds and its major imports are machinery, luxury goods and labourers. It is a terrestrial planet with huge land masses and small seas, while is has natural deserts even these are farmable with a little extra effort thanks to water control.

The political system is that of a republic with three houses of representatives. The first with the most power is the Pioneers, descendants from the first colonists who maintain a standing presence in government through succession and always holds a membership of 554. They have a veto on any other houses proposals and the president is almost always elected from this house. The Second House, the Merchants is made up of charted merchants, farmers and artisans who are charged with running the planets economy and has a fluctuating membership with various parties rising to power over the centuries. Finally the Third House is the Peoples, the largest responsible for running the day to day services of the planet but with the least political clout. A president is elected for six year terms for the entire planet with local elections for the Peoples House occurring over that time.

Most of the population is human however there is only limited racism towards alien races which is chartered against in the constitution. Farms complexes are run more like factories and are spread out all over the planet, most of the population living in cities spread out across the landscape. Each tends to have their own culture and style based upon those that settled there originally and growing over time.

The military is average for a world its size with a minimal standing fleet. Telos's location on the hyperspace network has made it a target for both pirates and smugglers over the years and with limited threats elsewhere it has most of its budget assigned to its Starfighter Core. To deter smugglers and patrol the lanes to keep them safe for the all important trade that passes by. Most cities posses a defensive shield to protect them from bombardment but limited additional defences along with a tiny standing army which is mostly ceremonial.





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Telos Defence Forces
6th Starfighter Squadron
Squadron Leader
Talon Vaash
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[TR1][TD]Flight Leader One
Johann Ardent Kaas [/TD][TD]
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[TR2][TD]Flight Leader Two
Marley Outland [/TD][TD]
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[/TD] [/TR2]
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Telos Defence Forces Starfighter Core

Formed shortly after the discovery Hydian Way hyperlane the Telos Defence Forces have changed little in their function or purpose since that time. On occasion they have been involved in warfare and even been substantially bigger than they are today. During the last galactic war Telos was able to resist any attack and remain neutral until the climax of the conflict. It was during the last war that the shield generators for the planets largest cities were constructed and though rarely operated still function today.

In past it held outposts throughout the sector but these have been long since abandoned as the thread seemed to disappear and now only a few off planet bases in the Telos system are maintained. Today its ranks are made up of those from rich families that want to make a name for themselves, those that love to fly or veterans from other planets and wars looking for a fresh start.

Telos forces are somewhat lax about uniform when on duty. On parade pilots have red leather bomber jackets and boots, mustard yellow trousers and white shirts. Some choose to wear this in the cockpit as well while others will just wear a shirt. Pilot jumpsuits are the same mustard yellow but have not been required wearing for most formations outside of known combat patrols in space. Helmets are optional however the pilot hood with headphones and mic are not, in fetching red leather.

The standard Starfighter of the Telos Defence Forces is the P-4 'Bullfin' a holdover from the last war but still comparable to most light fighters still in use in the galaxy. Armed with a pair of twin linked light lasers on each wing, enough fuel to make it from the ground to the edge of the Telos System and a turn speed to give it a fair chance again almost any other Starfighter. While it has proton torpedoes for heavier targets it is certainly not designed to go up against battleships.

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Our story will be following the 6th Squadron of the Starfighter Core. Their journey from a planet all but surrounded by Sith to whatever comes next, their relationships and stories as they fight impossible odds and what happens after that. Should Telos fall, would they join the Sith? Become pirates, or would they die before letting their planet fall? That is a story yet to tell.

 
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