Felwinter’s Scion

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  • What is going to happen in your plot? Wishing to follow in his ancestor’s footsteps, Toland visits Arkania to find a dragon egg.
  • What other players will be a part of this? @Devrim Wolfe
  • Where are all the places (if more than one) that your plot will be taking place? Ellora, Arkania
  • Please provide a basic in-character timeline of what you expect to happen.
    Thread 1: Toland and Devrim analyze the remains of Felwinter and learn from 10-NT about Arkanian Dragons. Toland decides he would like to acquire one himself. [ASK]

    Thread 2: The two fly to Arkania, and upon entering the atmosphere get caught in a massive storm, forcing them to search for a landing zone among the jagged cliffs. [ASK, dice]

    Thread 3: Shortly thereafter, they find a wandering band of men claiming to be hunting game for food. Upon request, the group offers to show the Jedi the location of a well-known dragon roost. As they approach the designated location through the blizzard, they realize the men are actually poachers intending on killing the dragons and selling the carcasses for profit. Refusing to stand for senseless killing, the two Jedi confront the men and are forced to fight them. [ASK, dice]

    Thread 4: The Jedi reach the roost and find the two dragon parents fully prepared to defend their unhatched young at all costs. Toland and Devrim must find a way to grab an egg and escape without being roasted alive. [ASK, DM]
  • What do you or your character hope to achieve with this plot? What is the "end-game"? Toland acquires an Arkanian Dragon egg.
  • Do you need any involvement of canon NPCs or faction leaders to be DMed by a staff member? If so, please detail who/what and for what purpose. No.
 
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Please come back to me when you've added in what opposition you will actually be facing. I will never approve a plot for advanced tech and a dragon egg with 4 threads with no stated difficulty or opposition
 

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Please come back to me when you've added in what opposition you will actually be facing. I will never approve a plot for advanced tech and a dragon egg with 4 threads with no stated difficulty or opposition

Updated the thread list to be less vague. I've also removed the EMP grenade — I misunderstood the rules for thread rewards. Let me know if I need to add more threads or make any additional changes.
 

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Updated the thread list to be less vague. I've also removed the EMP grenade — I misunderstood the rules for thread rewards. Let me know if I need to add more threads or make any additional changes.

No you didn't - he can still get the reward xD
My point was that there needed to be some kind of opposition included for any part of the plot to be reviewed :)

I'm okay with the grenade for three dice threads but I'm not sure about the dragon - just seems like almost all of the danger and risk for grabbing a dragon egg has nothing to do with the fact that you're stealing an egg right from their nest.

Personally I'd love to see the final thread DMed but another player or staff - think it would really add flavor to the story and really drive home just how dangerous these creatures actually are, you know? Let me know what you think :D
 

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No you didn't - he can still get the reward xD
My point was that there needed to be some kind of opposition included for any part of the plot to be reviewed :)

I'm okay with the grenade for three dice threads but I'm not sure about the dragon - just seems like almost all of the danger and risk for grabbing a dragon egg has nothing to do with the fact that you're stealing an egg right from their nest.

Personally I'd love to see the final thread DMed but another player or staff - think it would really add flavor to the story and really drive home just how dangerous these creatures actually are, you know? Let me know what you think :D

That's a good point, and I'm on board with the DM for the final thread. However, just to remove clutter I've moved Toland and Devrim confronting the poachers into thread 3 for simplicity's sake. Vos is okay with not getting the grenade.
 

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That's a good point, and I'm on board with the DM for the final thread. However, just to remove clutter I've moved Toland and Devrim confronting the poachers into thread 3 for simplicity's sake. Vos is okay with not getting the grenade.

I dig it! I can approve that no issues then!

Lmk if you want me to DM - am available I do believe!
 

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I dig it! I can approve that no issues then!

Lmk if you want me to DM - am available I do believe!

Sweet! That would actually be great if you could, especially since you're a top-tier DMer and you make things exciting :D
 

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Sweet! That would actually be great if you could, especially since you're a top-tier DMer and you make things exciting :D

Tag me when I'm up and we'll get it rolling!
 
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