Fariyin Zeroux

Fariyin Zeroux

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NAME:
Fariyin Zeroux
FACTION: Jedi
RANK: Initiate
SPECIES: Human
AGE: Looks around early 20s, unknown exact birthday
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes, with limited training. Knows the basics of the Force and can use them but it can be taxing, especially in combat.

APPEARANCE:
Fariyin stands at a mighty 6'3 in height, his physic is near perfect due to his Jedi training and his own strenuous exercise. His hair falls a medium length with his braid tucked behind his ear, a deep brown colour with copper highlights that shine brightly in sunlight. Fariyin's irises are dark brown with specks of orange that glow brighter when laughing, a deep purple rim encases the irises. He has a good temperment and is often light hearted, sometimes at inappropriate moments. His trusting and kind hearted personality can make others believe that he is naive and could be manipulated. However, this is not often the way as he is strong willed and can see the galaxy as it is, he just lives in hope it will one day be better. He has a birthmark on his right shoulderblade that looks like someone dropped a balloon of pink paint on it to cause the splat pattern. There is a scar down his right cheek from the bone to an inch above the jawline, caused by an incident while training. He also has a few tattooes donned on his arms and upper body, one of which is the Jedi Order symbol, several others include tribal like styling and robotic circuitary.

ATTRIBUTES:
Fayirin's strengths are stemmed from his years as a Jedi Padawan, he has learnt hand to hand combat while also learning how to fight with a sword, not actually owning a lightsaber yet. His combat is far from perfect and limited to one Form but he strives to continually improve his technique and perfect his combat style. His hard work and determination also extends to his Force training, which is strong for one at his level, comparatively, he can physically lift a large rock with ease if he were to try and lift it with the Force then he would either struggle greatly or be completely exhausted by the attempt and lift it no higher than an inch.

His preferred Force focus is within healing and kinetic manipulation of the Force over other aspects. His naivety to the galaxy outside the Jedi Order means that he is oblivious to high amount of slavery, criminal Overlords and poverty stricken worlds that are rife within the Outer Rim planets. He does know and fear the Sith, seeing them as a threat but his knowledge of them is limited. His intellect is average but he does wish to learn more, especially going out and seeing the wider galaxy.

PERSONALITY:
Fariyin's personality is that of a kind hearted lovable fool, he is often the joker of his peers and doesn't always take the situation as seriously as necessary. There is a darker side to his personality but his years at the Jedi Academy has hidden that area, suppressing it deep down. Due to this darker side, whenever he feels the rage boil within him, he often finds himself meditating and isolating himself from others.

Fariyin is a strong-willed, determined young man. His youth can make him reckless and often endanger his life and those of whom he is he trying to save, this often causes him to be put down by himself and his mentors.

His aims in life are to better the lives of those living in hardship, find who his parents were and why they disappeared. He also wished he could find the Jedi who saved him and thank them for bringing out of the slums he was condemned to live his life in.

BIOGRAPHY:
Fariyin was abandoned by his mother at the outskirts of a shared slumhouse on Coruscant at an early age, where he was assumed to be one. His birth parents were never found and with many families struggling to feed their own, yet alone another he was often traded from family to family, having the last scraps of food or starving if it was a harsh period. His salvation came in the form of a mysterious Jedi, whom he had never met since that day. Fariyin had been in the slum house for a couple of years when the imposing Jedi appeared, noting Fariyin's natural Force powers manifesting in him hovering little stones around him for entertainment.

From there he was taken to the Jedi Temple and trained as a padawan, his skill in combat and the use of the Force was only equal to his wit. Which is to say, it was often not well timed nor a great hit with his teachers. His wit stemmed from a self preservation and defensive tool, ashamed from where he came as he was often reminded by his peers, during his time in the slums of Coruscant and at the Temple.

His determination to prove his worth and prove his peers wrong meant that he often spent years in isolation from his peers, practising his techniques with training droids, simulations and routine run throughs. During this time he studied anatomy of human and alien physiology, in attempts to better heal others and himself, this period he decided to learn alien languages to be more useful in the field. By the time he reached adulthood he was impressed by his own skill in combat, he was no master but could defeat many other Initiates, his study of human and alien bodies meant he could use first aid on most beings and constant practice with the Force meant that he was more proficient in it than his mentors had predicted early in his training. However, isolating himself from others meant his social skills were no better than before, often accused of childish behaviour, being rude or lacking empathy.

SKILLS:
Combat:
Hand to hand combat - Intermediate
Swordfighting - Intermediate
Form I (Shii-Cho) - Advanced
Form II (Makashi) - Intermediate
Form III (Soresu) - Novice

Extra Skills:
First Aid - Intermediate
Languages - Has a good understanding of Basic, Twi'leki, Huttese and Wookieespeak while other languages are unknown to him.

Force Powers:
Force Push/Pull - Advanced Novice
Force Heal - Novice
Force Sense - Novice
Force Jump - Advanced Novice

He has no skill with blasters or ranged weapons, preferring close combat fighting and shorting the distance. His focus on duelling and Form II was due to the rise of Sith presence, deciding quickly that Soresu was not enough to combat the aggressive Sith. Fariyin's strength is just above average, his dexerity is average with him being clumsy at times. His stamina is similar to his strength, being above average with him being able to endure long and tough exercises that his training demands.

His wisdom is low, mostly due to the fact of his age, not many twenty year olds are wise now. However his intellect and consitution are high, though he can be forgetful and not always show his intelligent side. His charisma is low due to his low social skills and interactions with others, he is mostly self motivated to do things and prefers to either go alone or let others lead.


GEAR:
1 set of Initiate robes, brown
1 practice saber
1 vibrosword

ROLE-PLAYS:
To be updated
RELATIONSHIPS:

To be updated

SHIP:
To be updated

DROIDS:
To be updated.

PETS:
Not yet.

KILLS:
To be updated

COMBAT:
To be updated
 
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Zenya

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Hey! This is an interesting character!
There are however a few things I would like you to take a look at, and make edits to.
First, a bit more in his appearance would be nice since you don't have a picture. Like his hair/eye color.
Definitely add to the personality. Technically I can approve you if you have the minimum word count, but detail is always nice so others can get to know what your character is really about. Just ask some big questions, like "What are his life goals," and stuff like that.
I personally don't care for long Bios, so I'm not going to tell you to lengthen it. Though, you could. But you do need to change the "Stayed isolated for years." That's not very realistic, even for Star Wars.
It's not "Jedi Academy," it's "Jedi Temple."
Also if he's a Jedi in his early twenties, he may still be innocent, but he should probably know about slavery and the hardships of the world. The Jedi, and especially the Jedi we are aiming towards right now, are far from sheltered.
Please add attributes like Strength, wisdom, charisma, dexterity, etc... and elaborate on each one.
Other then those things, I'm not sure about the refugee camps, but I'll get back to you on that.
Aaaand there ya go!
@Fariyin Zeroux
 

Zenya

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Okay, though I would love ever so dearly to see a picture, I'll let it go.
I however, do ask that you change all the times to mention Padawan, to Initiate.
We don't have Padawans in this time line, but a more independent version called Initiates.
Thanks for making the changes, and you can post a link to your character Here to get it officially marked off as APROVED
 

Fariyin Zeroux

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Picture added, I was going to add one but I was using my phone for the earlier posts and phone reacted buggy to the idea haha! Anyway, made the changes to Initiate, if I missed any let me know, thanks. @Zenya
 
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