Factbook: Brazil Unfinished

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"Order and Progress"​

Capital: Brasilia
Government: dictatorship
Chief of State: Marcos Sandro
Prime Minister:Antônio Vinícius

Population: 206,342,135

Major Cities:

Brasilia (capital)
São Paulo
Rio de Janeiro
Salvador
Fortaleza


Economy: Brazil's economy's was doing horrible during 2008-2014. They were losing supplies like oil, and some crop's from global warming. A lot of immigration came looking for oil in the Amazon Forest. By 2012 half of the Amazon Forest was torn down for resources and search. By late 2014 The people got what they came for oil. They found a huge storage of oil in the ground in the used to be Amazon Rainforest.

They started oil refinery's all over the area. They been defending those plants. The population of Brazil grew huge when they discovered the oil.



Army:

225,000 active personnel
Armored vehicles= 2,230
Other military vehicles= 7,100
Artillery pieces= 650
Regular helicopters= 123
T-72 Design/Tank
BTR-80 Design/personal carrier
AT-2 Design/Land to land Missile
Mn-3F5 Design/ Helicopter

Navy:

* Aircraft carriers - 3
* Submarines - 9
* Destroyer - 3
* Frigates - 14
* Corvettes - 10
* Minehunters - 9
* Patrol boats - 36
* Amphibious ships - 7
* Auxiliary ships - 36
* Hospital ships - 6



Air Force

130,000 active personnel[1]
121,000 aircrafts
Embraer C-390 Design/Transporter aircraft
McDonnell Douglas F-4 Phantom II Design/fighter jet/bomb dropper
Mirage 2000 Design/fighter jet/ bomb dropper


Extra info Design means they got the design to build them/ There i got nothing wrong SIN check over with it.
 
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Your factbook makes no sense.

You've pretty much got everything wrong.
 

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I looked at some other guys and i did like the exact same thing is there app page for it
 

Sovereign

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give me example of what i did wrong

Everything.

Look up the Wikipedia article of Brazil.

Brazil doesn't have a 60 million population.

Brazil doesn't have 5 aircraft carriers etc etc
 

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lol did you forget what you wrote you said becuase it is years after 2008 you can make up your own history i pretty much was i put in they made more aircraft carries.
 

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Then you should write in your history where they got the money, designs, and work power to build them. And why.


Oh, and Brazil's current population is 190,132,630. Why did it shrink 125 million?
 

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lol did you forget what you wrote you said becuase it is years after 2008 you can make up your own history i pretty much was i put in they made more aircraft carries.

It has to be within the bounds of realism though. Per Pygus you have to write in how they got the money for them, and realize that aircraft carriers are bloody ****ing expensive. Do some research on your country a bit, then basically think how they would expand in the real world in the years of the RP'd timeline.
 

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It has to be within the bounds of realism though. Per Pygus you have to write in how they got the money for them, and realize that aircraft carriers are bloody ****ing expensive. Do some research on your country a bit, then basically think how they would expand in the real world in the years of the RP'd timeline.

Yeah, this basically.

The Brazilian military lacks a lot of fund. Most of their planes are grounded because they don't have the money to buy fuel and maintain them

If you think that Brazil could build 5 aircraft carrier, (which costs about 11 billion each, so that's about 55 billion, twice your entire military budget per year) then you're ballshit insane.

Also, I like how two thirds of your population suddenly disappeared.
 

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They started oil plants all over the area. They been defending those plants. The population of Brazil grew huge when they discovered the oil.

Why would oil cause a country's population to 'grow huge'? Is this some weird aphrodisiac oil? And a better term would be 'oil refinery' rather than 'oil plant'. I know what you're getting at, but some people might think that you're trying to say that the oil was being extracted from trees. And I feel your idea of oil underneath a tight concentration of vegetation is a bit doubtful.
 
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I looked at some other guys and i did like the exact same thing is there app page for it
Never do exactly what other people do when it comes to RPs like this.
 

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1: It's 2015; not that far in the future.
2: It's got to be realistic.
3: Some facts just don't change. We presume when you make your Factbook that common sense and current general knowledge will be a factor. In addition, per Lavi. Go your own way. Copying someone else never works as well.
 

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How'd your population grow forty million in 8 years?
 

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How'd your population grow forty million in 8 years?

This in addition.

Please sort out your Factbook. Once these points are addressed, ask one of the Moderators (Myself and SIN) or one of the administrators (such as Nexus) to remove the 'Unfinished' from your Factbook title.
 
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